The Mystery Begins in Hong Kong City

After reading dozens of chapters, I finally understand why not many people have read this book. A big poisonous point comes up every few chapters. The disgusting plot -_-|| is also amazing. The opening chapter 6 is the connection between the first and second plots. For the follow-up plot, three mentally retarded women were forcibly taken in. Those three women did not regard themselves as outsiders. They used various precious items as they wanted and stole them away. There are also words that the protagonist sometimes says, giving people excuses for the Three Yangs Holy Water, which are particularly inconsistent. Even if you say you save a life, it will make you feel more comfortable and have a sense of accomplishment, which is many times better than those excuses in your article. Isn't it dangerous to fight ghosts? Is it particularly easy to give blessings? Judging from the plot I saw, it's not easy! All have certain risks. Still, the character of the protagonist has not been established. Another point is that many readers have pointed out some of the evil points. If you insist on saying that it is the plot arrangement, the plot arrangement of any novel is shit! In the Yin Yang Road novel, he didn't have so many poisonous points at the beginning, so it was attractive to read, but it just collapsed in the later stage. There is a lot of poison in the front of your book, how do you trick people into seeing the paid chapters? Based on my interest, I really hope that the author can continue writing. Come on, I hope you can write better and better.

Seeing now, the protagonist's attitude towards women has always been unclear. If he doesn't want it, he will clearly refuse it. This is both important and established, what is it?

There is no need for all capable mages to die. If this is the case, how do ordinary people survive? Moreover, letting the people below look for ghosts is simply seeking death. Ordinary people can't hide in time. Who would be so stupid? Just the little Sanyang water I was given, if two more ghosts came in, the people would be gone.

Everything else is good, but these three women are a real failure.

I'm so speechless. Those women lived together despite not being familiar with each other.

Putting aside whether the writing is good or not, why does the protagonist have to make simple things very complicated every time? What can be said to others is not said. Having the ability to predict the future will only add a sense of mystery to the protagonist. He always wants to use words to guide people and complicate the problem. Another question, is there no charge for the protagonist to perform an exorcism? Or for charity? Free of charge to help the Hong Kong Island police train a ghost exorcist force. I know the author wants to write like this to cultivate the police force's voice. The problem is that if people encounter trouble, they will come to you. You need to collect something that day, and others will blame you. If the police force encounters an A-level ghost, will the protagonist be a member or not? The author can also force the protagonist to solve the problem. The real situation of the problem is that the protagonist cannot win. If it were not for the protagonist's halo, the fate of the wizards such as Zhong Baifa in the movie would be the fate of the protagonist. Also, the protagonist often encounters scammers and does not know how to run away or tie them up. Anyway, there are many problems, but there are very few books of this type. I can still read this book after reading it. If the author writes a second book after finishing this book, it should be able to improve a lot of problems. The energy makes the book more exciting. Don't write it in a way that is neither good nor bad, and looks different!

The main character is really bad. It can only be said that he is a bitch and wants to build a memorial. You can either directly write that the main character is self-centered. Now the main character has no idea about good and evil. He is a hypocrite.

Now the more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes! Author, you are really good. You are so crazy about the number of words that you include ordinary people. Let's talk about the International Observation Department and Security Department you established. Are you treating the Hong Kong City Police Force as a decoration? The protagonist wants to know about the supernatural cases in various areas of Hong Kong City. All he needs to do is make a phone call. The senior police officers in each region will immediately send the protagonist the supernatural incidents that have occurred over the years. These police chiefs are eager for the protagonist to help them reduce the number of unsolvable supernatural cases in their jurisdiction! How many times have I told you, ordinary people are just ordinary people who can live a normal life. If they collect information about these supernatural events, either their brains will be filled with water or they will be turned into idiots by the halo sauce of the protagonist! What's even more buggy is that these people will never die no matter what, and the protagonist can always show up to rescue them at critical moments PS: There are very few people reading this book, and you are still fooling around. I can ignore other poisonous points, but now you bring ordinary people in to play and you don't die, so it's hard for me to accept it. Damn it, I expected that these characters who had lived for so long would also die and a new batch of characters came on stage, but they didn't die. Forget it, I threw the book on the bookshelf to gather dust and didn't want to read it anymore. I changed the book to read. My reward was wasted. I really regret that if I had known you were going to mess around like this, I wouldn't have rewarded you.

Make a complaint. The protagonists of many books nowadays are so humble. I feel like I owe others something all the time. You are crazy. If you want to save people, just save them. If you feel like it, you can just do it. You have to find a reason for yourself to owe others. It's better not to find these lame excuses, it's really shabby.

The author can arrange more adventure plots in the movie, and use his brain more to show off, instead of using too much hard power to defeat monsters. This way, the writing feels less ups and downs, and the writing feels a bit bland, and there is less sense of involvement👀

Why doesn't Sanyang Holy Water get a water gun? ? Does it have to be splashed around?

1. The best setting of this book is that any horror plot mission comes with a price and consequences. The protagonist rushes into a B-level horror ghost school where the danger is far higher than his own strength. The huge price of escaping in a narrow escape is that he was unknowingly possessed by ghost eyes. Not only the protagonist suffers a heavy price, but also ordinary people. Thirty-three people from the ghost school seem to have escaped. Three of them, the protagonist, Cen Wen, and the security guard, but are the two ordinary people who escaped later really okay? That's just not written in the book! 2. The most exciting setting is the equivalent reward system of the system. The rewards of the system are not so easy to get. You can't get the rewards without completing the plot tasks. Even if you complete the plot tasks and reward the protagonist, you have to explore and experiment by yourself and must use them in a short time. Otherwise, they will dissipate. For example, everyone thinks that time will stop like in the story of Happy Ghost Collision, but the author has opened up his imagination and found another way to turn it into a blessing of clear water and special items! PS: There is a very insightful saying in Lin Zhengying's movie Uncle Jiu. When Mao Shanming raised two ghosts, big and small, Uncle Jiu saw it and persuaded him to save them and reincarnate. Uncle Jiu asked Mao Shanming how his life was before he raised these two ghosts. Mao Shanming replied: It's very sad. Uncle Jiu asked again what happens after he is raised? Maoshan answered clearly: It's even sadder. Uncle Jiu replied: That's right, ghosts are ominous things that combine poverty, sorrow, decay, disaster, shame, misery, mold, pain, illness and death into one body. How can you have an easy life when you walk in and out with them? In fact, Uncle Jiu has not said anything in his heart. You are shallow and follow other people's methods of raising ghosts. Sooner or later, you will harm others and yourself.

The writing is too stiff, and you are still in a fusion world, but the protagonist doesn't know how to go to where the master is to learn from him.

The protagonist's IQ has never been high and is getting lower and lower.

They are already able to control three souls and seven souls, and are about to form a soul. How could they not be able to solve the ghost eye problem on their bodies? Even if they are ghost immortals, in the final analysis they are just in the realm of souls.

I feel a bit disgusting, Sanyang Holy Water seems to be free of charge

The front is fine, but the further you get to the back, the more unsightly it becomes.