There Is No Limit to My Improvement

Well written. I like reading it.

The protagonist NB, you brag that Yanque knows the ambitions of Honghu. Since you are Honghu, why would you marry someone else? The protagonist is both important and established. In reality, the author should be both important and established.

This protagonist is really rubbish. In order to practice martial arts with peace of mind and find a place to support himself, he went to get married, but later he disliked the family and restrained him. Aren't you making fun of other people's lives? You delayed yourself and others. It's really disgusting and despicable.

I was disgusted after reading Chapter 107. For a protagonist who can't move his legs when he sees a woman, even if there is a cheat, it is better to die early and be born early. Fortunately, I found out early and left.

I don't have a correct outlook on life. I know I want to practice martial arts, but I still want to marry a wife. I ran away after sleeping and asked people to wait for three years. Or don't wait any longer. Damn, what the hell! Worldview collapse

To be honest, the protagonist's outlook on life is indeed problematic. He married a girl so that he could have the resources to practice martial arts, and then abandoned her when he had a future. Isn't this a complete joke on the other person's life? In the key plot, the father-in-law also understood the protagonist's behavior, which was completely poisonous.

When there are plug-ins, all factors are not a problem, but the author insists on disgusting people. The protagonist is such a cold-hearted person, but he still says that he is not a person who eats everything.      ，💩？ ? It's okay to get married, but you have a cheat, and your wife has been treating you well from the beginning to the end. You left someone behind to become an immortal, and you left behind someone who could remarry. Although you can change it at any time before it is finished, you are also forcibly cuckolding me! ! It's not without reason that you rush into the street. You are selfish and cold-blooded. Even if there is a major reversal later, the things in front of you are already extremely poisonous.

I feel confident and stand up,,, I felt relieved after seeing so many scoldings.

It feels like the author didn't even think about what he wanted to write. I feel like this plot progression is weird. You have practiced dance and martial arts so much. As a result, a breath and a horse step had some effect. Even more bizarre is the marriage. Just get married out of nowhere. After moving in, he turned around and ran away. He even had no idea at all, so he took his wife to cultivate immortality together. And the protagonist also said that he is not the kind of person who eats everything. I feel like I could actually turn the protagonist into a villain later in the writing. The protagonist's son came to the door and beheaded the pig's feet.

The protagonist actually becomes a son-in-law. In ancient times, it can be said to be a stain in life. There is a cheat and he becomes a son-in-law.

Basic common sense of life is also very important. If the author's cognition is not on the same channel as the reader's, it will be difficult to have a good reading experience. In my opinion: Reading and writing family letters is an extremely low-frequency thing and cannot be used as a long-term livelihood tool. As a scholar, you can open a private school and teach children to read and write. A few days before the Chinese New Year, you can set up a stall and write couplets. When you have no money, there is no need to spend money on candles and study at night. While setting up a stall during the day, you can also read a book or even walk on horseback in your spare time. When the light is not good at night, it is mainly used for physical exercise, such as horse stance, simple boxing, dodging, push-ups, pull-ups, and sit-ups. First of all, you need to eat more and add a lot of protein. If the economy allows, it is best to eat a lot of meat and fish every day and still have the strength to exercise. Even if your economic conditions are poor, you can still raise a few chicks to lay eggs. Chickens are omnivores and can be raised in the yard and are easy to feed. This is a very simple plan.

Wrong wording and incorrect views. It's really rubbish. The author's writing style is really low. He treats his wife like a pet. He says that I care about him when he's tired from practicing martial arts. It's really disgusting to me. Don't read this book. It's really poisonous.

I guess the author went there just for Quanqin. He didn't care whether the writing was good or whether there were typos.

The more you write, the worse it gets. That unlimited work means writing in vain.

Please ask the author to strengthen training in choosing words and making sentences. There are too many erroneous sentences. There are dozens of erroneous sentences in each chapter, and there is a feeling that the preface does not match the follower, so when I read the sentences, I felt awkward, stiff, and confused.

When it comes to cultivating immortals, my most basic requirement for the protagonist is "Li Yi, cold-blooded, cunning, without a bottom line, life is like a weed in the eyes..."

Since you are so keen on gaining proficiency, why do you want to get married? This is unnecessary, the key is that we are not responsible for the woman

This book told me that pig's feet can be so beastly. If the author can write such a thing, his thinking is probably not much better.

I have a very powerful golden finger, and there are no external threats, and I am not choosing to be a son-in-law when my ex keeps the blame 😁 The golden finger has already worked. Just because he found it troublesome to cook and do laundry, he became a son-in-law who was worse than a lowly person 🤭 What kind of genius mind could come up with this plot? I admire him very much.

There have been a lot of virgins recently, and this murderous person is not punished. How did his father-in-law start his business? Does he want to manage it in the future? Also, in this novel, a betrayed brother kills his own gang brother, and then the gang members help him save his family. The logic is forced. (Especially when rival gangs are like that, they don't trust brothers, they trust the enemy, and they ask brothers to save their families. The protagonist and the gang also rescue...) This logical thinking is really invincible. . Who told you that society is like this? Are you all brainwashed by TV series? Or are you illuminated by the light of the Virgin?

Isn't the potential realm written well as before? The living realm is also okay, but something is wrong starting from entering the evil source. Then when you reach the Qianyuan realm, do you just give up on yourself? I thought it was pretty good at first, but I didn't expect it to be so messed up later on that everything was dead and the protagonist had to travel through time again...

Subscribing in vain, it's getting worse and worse

Youjin, as long as you are rich or handsome, no matter how ruthless you are, there will always be people who will love you. You can go to the club today, go to dinner tomorrow, and there will be people rushing to make you happy every day. If you have no money, even if you are truly in love, a group of people will stand over your head and say that you are not worthy, and then expose you and wait for you to make you unbearable and unable to survive. This is you mortals who have double standards every day, but in fact have no bottom line. It has nothing to do with others.

Can the author write a separate chapter about the various realms of cultivation in the relevant part of the work? If I can't remember these things, I'll be confused when I read them.

This book is really 6. Come on!

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