I Have a Book of Heavens

Yang Yinglian

Concubine Wan Gui

Hokusai, Zhou Miaoxuan

Zhou Miaotong

I think it's okay if you played The Legend of the White-Haired Witch and Swordsman, but the value of force is different.

It's really poisonous. After Tietou died, the protagonist immediately went to play with women. You take life so lightly, what's the difference between you and a bandit! Just wearing a coat...

I have a friend who has a strong sense of justice. He is about to GG. He said that he wants to criticize this kind of novel more before GG. So, author, please write as hard as you can. It is best to start with 2W posts a day and satisfy my friend's final wish, okay?

When someone asked how to kill the horse bandits, the protagonist said that everyone could just use a knife and chop them off. What nonsense are you talking about? Everyone knows this, right? I am speechless and have no brains.

The main plot is to finish all the women in the plot. The other plots are messy and have no logic. As long as they are smooth, this book is just a stallion type.

Did you use your brain when writing? There is no logic at all.

See Chapter 81, Food and Grass +. The protagonist is real and unpretentious. If I were to go through it, that would be it. I would recommend whoever I love. He has his own moral bottom line, and he is decisive in killing without being aggrieved. There are some flaws in some small settings, such as physical fitness not improving with martial arts, which is the most confusing, and there are also money, titles, etc., But it is not a historical text, so the flaws cannot be concealed. Predict that a wave of emperors will get rid of the prince before and after his death, and help the children of Concubine Wan to ascend the throne. During the son's growth period, he will grow up, teach his son to instill ideas, and seed the harem. Don't think those people are too loyal. They don't care who the emperor is, as long as they have food, clothing, clothing and money.

There is no logic. I left the injured person I rescued in the inn and went to work alone for three days. I just killed half of the people and just became happy. I was drunk a few times.

Chapter 1, the name of the water master, 57 times, 114 words,

There is no physical attribute added to martial arts training. This setting is really outrageous. I can't stand it anymore and leave.

The author is in the wrong profession, and being a killer is a perfect fit. If you send this thing you wrote to the target, it will make the target laugh to death. Publish it in Japanese or English.

Others say the plot is too weak, but your plot is too fast, here and there, you could have written 10 chapters, but you just wrote one or two chapters and then disappeared. It looks too messy, each plot is not in-depth, and I feel like a glass of plain water with no taste at all.