A Peaceful Life on the Ranch

Don't keep so many pets. Don't keep so many pets. Those books from a few years ago, such as Golden Fishing Ground, Golden Ranch, American Rancher, etc., All of which had the protagonist having a bunch of pets, were both low in word count and annoying.

Come and read to me

The author's writing is very good and not a noob. But it will not exploit its strengths and avoid its weaknesses. You wrote Goldfinger Ranch. Just write around Goldfinger's spirit fluid, and then write about blue sky, white clouds, and animals having fun. Look at what you're rewriting: The land on the farm is muddy and difficult to drive to traffic, and it's inconvenient to live far away from the city. There is endless work to do and endless animals to take care of in a day. You are not tired when you write, but you are tired when you look at it.

There was an awesome golden finger, but it turned out to be used in the stupidest way.

If you are not careful, you will be blind. Poison 1: Digging truffles. Your hook can basically guarantee the best truffles. I found a few so-called brothers who were young men. Poison 2: The brain is sick. If digging truffles is for primitive accumulation, the subsequent cooperation will be an exercise in imagination and nothing. Refer to Chapter 11 and ask the protagonist to give a guarantee. Poison 3: If you don't know how to speak, speak less. If you don't know how to plan the pasture, don't forcefully explain it. Just write down an irrigation system. If you don't have the ability to popularize science, don't talk awkwardly. There are so many simple and low-cost irrigation methods, so I chose the most expensive and troublesome one. On these three points, 99% of readers will be defeated. The audience for ranch articles is very large. If you write like this, you will drive away more people.

I don't know what other people think about it. To me, the dialogue between the characters here seems to be that of an American TV series, with a sense of machine translation. It looks a bit awkward and awkward.

Too many translation accents and the "we" in the middle look a bit annoying and affect the experience.

It seemed okay from the beginning, but the further I went back, the more explanations I had to explain over and over again, and there was more and more nonsense.

Such good liquefied spiritual energy, why is it not added to the food of hounds and horses, and why is it not consumed by the protagonist himself?

I just found out that I have a new book. I really like ranching and the like. Good luck to the author.