A Different Path to Death

Ah hahaha, I'm here to comment

I want to tell a good story, but the writing style is too immature and the pace of the first chapter is too fast. It would be better to polish it up and establish the protagonist's personality and thinking.

Zhang Mo's prototype of the Ping An brand, a picture taken from a video found online, intruded and deleted

Listening to the sadness hidden under the rock melody, I finish typing, hoping that there will be no glitches tomorrow.

I just saw that the words "Ghosts hitting the wall" are missing from the introduction, 🌿