Spreading Happiness in a Matriarchal World

Stop raising it. Please click on it when you see the latest chapter. Just click it. Woohoo~ The child is going to be raised to death~

I don't know why, but it feels light and airy, as if all the settings are a bit too casual, and the plot is just going through the motions, lacking a sense of stability 😰

The writing is too fast and lacks detailed description. Slow down and flesh out the characters, especially the protagonist's image. Incorporate more life experience and write appropriately about daily life. The characters' expressions, movements, demeanor and changes after interaction are too little, resulting in the image. The story is fragmented, not very impressive, and the character traits are untenable. The writing now feels like a running account. After reading more than 20 chapters, there is no outstanding point that attracts people to read. The protagonist's personality changes a lot, which is good, but the problem is that the story of the supporting character is not deep enough, leaving the protagonist The character's image is superficial and looks like a male version of the Changing Witch. There is not enough plot to sublimate the protagonist's image. This will only make people feel that the protagonist's character is very strange. If you are writing a light novel, it is best to let supporting characters with stories appear one by one and keep exploring. The background and story behind her will then lead to the appearance of the next character. If you are writing a fantasy novel with supernatural powers, then establish a big villain who has hurt the protagonist, and write around the plots of revenge, enduring humiliation, dealing with the superstructure, instigating rebellion, and the male version of the queen.

The biggest problem with this book is that the author is too greedy. There are too many characters that he cannot grasp, and the priorities are unclear. Generally speaking, they should be added slowly, or they should be written about group portraits, which is more difficult and should be written honestly.

The heroine novel is too old-fashioned. If you change the soup without changing the medicine, you will never be able to break away from the stallion harem novel.

This writing was a bit too hasty. There were so many important female characters and so many settings all at once. There are holes in everyone's body, it's too jumpy, and there are so many people that the space is tight.

This book is an improvement compared to the previous one. It's hard to imagine how the author persists 😭😭 Come on!

As soon as it comes up, it throws out a lot of settings. How many people are willing to seriously write down notes and study it carefully? The thought of looking down is gone, okay? In addition, settings such as the power system should be simplified as much as possible to make them easy to understand and read. Reading novels is not like going to school, and readers are not obliged to memorize and recite the author's settings.

Evaluate it carefully, it is really well written. Not compared with other types of novels, just from the perspective of female novels, compared with other female novels. From my personal point of view, the setting is actually very novel in the novels about nuns. It is not the green tea nuns that are prevalent now, nor the tough-guy nuns who insist on eating soft rice. 1. The design of the protagonist is very likable, not like the Holy Mother, the front is to save the poor and the hard to eat, but there is a vest behind the back to kill decisively and not to suffer. Although it is a harem, it is not a scumbag, and the characters who have gained goodwill and received full rewards are not abandoned, and they still have their due roles. 2. The world view in the heroine novel is already very good and very creative. I like the design of the superpowers very much. Most of the heroines I read are fairy heroes, urban and ancient, which have separated many public worldviews. Well, my impression seems to be that there is a Western Fantasy heroine or something recently. Like this one, it is a relatively new heroine worldview setting. 3. As for the story line, I saw it very smoothly all the way through, without saying it was a running account or a crazy amount of information. There was a female partner who was too licking, exaggeratedly. Licking a dog is so disgusting that the protagonist chops off his heart and lungs and then licks the original one. Anyway, I'm already disgusted with this character. It would be wrong if it was one of the female protagonists. It doesn't matter just to gain favor and get rewards. My sister is very lovable. There can definitely be problems with the heroine level, but it can't be offensive. The female supporting role doesn't matter. There is also the matter of stacking buffs. I don't have a sister, but I am a cloud girl control. I really like the role of the sister, and the beauty control. I really like the fact that the main character is so good-looking. Some people just don't like the main character being too good-looking, or they don't like having a little sister. This is the same as liking popular literature and niche literature. The benevolent sees benevolence, the wise see wisdom, and it cannot be regarded as good or bad reading. I saw someone in the comments pointing fingers at my sister. 😡😡😡Wu The setting, plot and characters are all very good, nothing wrong with it, nothing wrong with it. Among the many female novels I have read, this is one of the more outstanding ones.

Author, you have three books and you are still at level 1. It's so miserable. However, one thing is that the writing style is indeed improving. I think there is no problem with the character design. They are basically normal people in reality. Only the male protagonist is a little burnt, but the rest is fine. The bad news is that Honkai Impact III, Versatile Mage, Douluo II, and Genshin Impact have been stitched together. The good news is that they are all stitched together. Let's take a look at it for now. I hope you will get better results from each book.