American Comics: Starting from Death Eaters to Build a Mysterious Organization

Come on, I like it very much. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch anymore.

Your selective disclosure of the contents of the magical world is a blow to me. You have no choice at all. You can't wait to dig out the basic settings of the magical world and tell him.

The idea is good, but you are writing about a mysterious organization. Every one of them is exposed, and it is exposed by one of your own people. It looks very awesome, but in the end, all the originality is lost.

Licking Snake Shield? Licking Iron Man? Licking Captain America?

Whether or not the male protagonist is on Earth will not affect the death of Thanos at the hands of Earth's heroes 😏😏😏😏. The Women's Federation stated that whether there is a male protagonist will not affect the final outcome.

As the title says, crowdfunding to write a book and recruiting mysterious organizations

It's true that the protagonist needs to be legendary, but if you ask your subordinates to tell you all the various settings of the magic world, it feels very fake.

Author, you are not behind the scenes! This is an exposure stream. Wouldn't it be better for other people to vaguely mention these organizations, and then Black Braised Dan and the like to investigate on their own? You've just put your cards on the table. The protagonist makes me feel like he wants to tie people up directly and tell them the information: This organization has been criticized by the boss. Are you shocked or not? Not shocked? I'm still the boss of this organization, I'm shocked! What you want is legend! Not the shock level! Is it bad for the League of Assassins to take orders to kill people? Isn't it good for ghouls to cause havoc in New York? You, the protagonist, are directly exposed, or behind the scenes?

Personal opinion: Don't jump in front of the stage if you have pig feet behind the scenes. It's cute, but it's not cool, and it's not cool. You might as well just make him a god.

Compared with Voldemort's Death Eaters, Grindelwald's secret party is more powerful! It's a bit mysterious, but the Death Eaters look like a group of terrorists

Nick Fury and those guys are all idiots compared to you.

I feel that in this kind of behind-the-scenes writing, the protagonist should not be in the foreground. There are more and more forces, but there is only one master of these forces. This way of writing, you might as well call it a hegemony writing.

I'm not very interested when I see ghouls and demon slayers. Let alone American comics, these two things will only cause some confusion in the early stage even if they are released in modern times. When the big countries react, the ghouls will only become specimens, and the ghosts will become laboratory rats. The boss and his bastards will either hide in the sewers and enjoy themselves, if they dare to show their heads, they will directly gg

To fight a green fat guy, it's really a whole family effort. It's really messy. Where is the strength? The green fat guy can still have magic resistance. I've only seen the movie. I don't understand.

It was exposed as soon as it came up, it's not mysterious at all, right? Come on, this is a mysterious organization that doesn't have to tell people everything. If you want to show off, you can lead them to discover it and package yourself as the mysterious mastermind behind the scenes. Wouldn't this look more impressive?

The description of the combat power is a bit unflattering. In the world of Harry Potter where even fire dragons are being bred, Voldemort and several Death Eaters cannot deal with a single abomination.

Content development is also too rapid. . First meeting. Basically all the settings of Harry Potter were thrown out at once. A normal person would know something strange at a glance. .

Shouldn't these organizations be exposed to passers-by, let some key people experience some of the things in these organizations, and then find out bit by bit? Wouldn't it be more powerful? How could there be such a character in the protagonist? I'm waiting for my DNF apostle to come and watch it. I'm not interested in watching American TV series or Japanese comics at all.

The creativity is great, but the writing is poor 😭. My expectations were high before reading, but then the quality dropped further and further.

It's too confusing. Each mysterious organization lacks the necessary precipitation. One after another

The behind-the-scenes organization was agreed upon, and all the characters were lost when the protagonist appeared directly. Disclosing intelligence is also very blunt, instead of arranging supporting characters to reveal the organization's intelligence.