The First Duke of Red Mansion

Your introduction is not good enough. There is no clan branch in the Male Monkey Family. He went to foster care in another family and did not read the book. If the whole clan dies, he will be the only one. I didn't say anything.

It doesn't make sense logically. Although she has a foreign surname, she was raised by her mother's designated mother Jia. She didn't inform her elders about her marriage, and she and Qin Keqing made a private arrangement for life. Such a big thing is considered a breach of morality. She went straight to the backyard boudoir without signing the marriage contract without being ashamed. How great is Qin Ye's experience! Is this still in ancient times? Isn't the author treating the two people's affairs as a modern plot? Then Fang Fang didn't know that Qin Keqing was the protagonist's fiancée, so Jia Rong and Jia Zhen ended up teasing each other. Are they preparing to sell their wives? So poisonous! This is far from the end of the world...

I haven't read the book, so I'll just give you an introduction. The prince's children were fostered in the Jia Mansion. The protagonist must have offended someone when he was born. Otherwise, why would he be fostered in Jia's house? This is obviously to make the protagonist lose his teeth.

In the five thousand years of history in China, have any male monkeys been fostered in the homes of other male monkeys when they were young? Is there any palace where the emperor has a male monkey that has no servants? Do you really think that the male monkey mansion given by the emperor can be bought, sold and given away at will? For other reasons, even if the male monkey's mansion is taken away and a servant dies, in order to show mercy, the royal family will adopt the so-called orphan, the young marquis, and will also give it to the prince or prince to study with him when he grows up and then give it to the servants of the mansion.

I was advised to quit in the first chapter. Anyone who has read historical literature will understand that a prince's mansion has nothing and he has to be fostered in someone else's house. The house will be emptied of its property and beautiful.

It's disgusting to see books written about the female family members of the family every day in the name of nephew or disciple. A real brother like Jia Lian rarely sees Sanchun and Baodai even after he gets married. Now there are a lot of red landlords who can't even be their cousins. Jiao, today I will go to that mansion to see Sister Lin, and tomorrow I will go to Lixiangyuan to see Sister Bao. What's even more disgusting is that Lin Daiyu's parents are still alive in this book. The main character can become a disciple and meet Sister Lin just because he wants to meet Sister Lin. Are you disgusted that Lin Daiyu has no parents? No one to discipline you?

Judging from Lin Daiyu's ending, it would be a dream to live in the Jia family and live to adulthood!

The author's writing style is good, but it wasn't until I saw Jia Mu's explanation of the Li family affairs that I suddenly understood where the sense of dissonance came from. The protagonist has been fostered in the Jia family since he was a child, regardless of clan (the author writes all the protagonist's uncles to death, which is as reasonable as possible), but for Emperor Xianlin, the orphan of such a great minister, when he succeeded in seizing the throne and became the king, there was not much care. The protagonist should inherit the marquis. If he is young, he can also wait until he is ten years old or even as an adult. At the very least, he should enjoy the honor and peace of the marquis's house. In terms of the most basic logical construction, there is no way to save it. Not to mention the private life-long contract with Qin Keqing, which is even more inconsistent with his status. What a pity

Mr. Hou? Is there a marquis mansion? Was it given by the emperor? Can it be sold? Is this reasonable?

There is a problem with the character's identity and background. Jia's mother had no right to raise a foreign surname with a title and status, and she could not foster him. Mrs. Jia in the Red Mansion only likes Jia Baoyu and cannot care about her other sons or grandchildren. As the master Jia, you cannot enter Jia's house, and even if you are an adopted son, you cannot enter the inner house. Besides, entering Rong Mansion is like entering the tiger's mouth. The pervert Jia Zhen needs to play the protagonist well.

Then we are all ladies. You can see the prince's daughter whenever you want. A nobleman lives in someone else's house. Isn't this a joke? You are slapping the emperor in the face. Self-righteous obscenity.

Quick update: The high-end version will turn the world upside down. Hurry up and get your girls.

Well, the background setting of the protagonist at the beginning has turned off many readers, just because of historical inertia thinking, it is very awkward to read!

Okay, yes, at least it's much better than those who have a harem.

Do you know what a king's father is? What is the queen's mother's ritual to the world? . . Xungui's only son was placed in Jia's house. . . If someone dares to let go, the Jia family dares to take it back. . .

This book is rare, very good, very good.

After the protagonist is a Wuhou, it doesn't matter if he has no relatives or generals. Before leaving the capital, he knew that he would kill a snake but would be killed by it. Then you should arrange someone to protect the Qin Mansion. If you write about it later, it would be better to say it in advance. This gives readers no sense of involvement at all. It is not like a web novel, but more like a novel.

Ignoring the minor flaws, the characterization is pretty good. Especially Lin Daiyu's words and deeds, the protagonist is in line with my heart, and the author should write it better. It's definitely a good next book that skips these flaws.

The writing is okay, but the first-class general is looked down upon!