Soul Land: Yuhao the Ice Demon

The Far North Trio

I think the three views of this book are very upright. It completely describes the protagonist's growth process. It is just that he was confused for a long time, but now he has gradually matured. I think the fun part is coming. The protagonist's early problems are because his morality is too high and he is incompatible with the entire Douluo Continent. He cares more about the common people. In the past, there was Tang Laogou who used poison to massacre the city. The original work Huo Yuhao also blew up Mingdu, and most of the people who died were ordinary people. This is something that the protagonist of this book will never do (of course, it does not rule out the later Lelouch transformation and setting off fireworks in the capital). Because he received nine years of compulsory education and had a great man like Mr. Yuan as an example, he is incompatible with the mentality of the Douluo Continent Soul Master who treats ordinary people like ants. And the protagonist was not very old in his previous life. He was in the second grade, so he was powerless and confused about the current situation. But it is undeniable that he does care about the world, but his ability is temporarily insufficient. But who can stir up the storm from the beginning? Chairman Mao went to the countryside to investigate and brew for several years. How can I put it, this is what great men have in common. They all started from passionate young people who were tempered by time and the general trend. Gradually become more calm and restrained, becoming more determined. Sometimes something does not necessarily have to be successful, but more importantly, it is to take the first step and explore in failure. And at this time, no one understands him. The Ice and Snow Emperor and Tianmeng can give him guidance in cultivation, but they are unable to accompany him in this aspect. Yi Lao has rich life experience, but it is more about enlightenment and cannot achieve ideological resonance, so he will always be entangled and impetuous in the early stage.

There is Dong Hao's handwritten book "The Abnormally Dancing Lepidoptera" on station b. I recommend everyone to read it and talk about my views on Wang Dong's character. Writing about Dou Er, Wang Dong must be a character that cannot be avoided. This character is far more difficult to deal with than imagined, because in the original work, she is a very separated person. This book will undoubtedly be anti-Tang Dynasty, so how to deal with the relationship with Wang Dong will be very difficult. What do we criticize about the original work? It was Tang San who controlled Wang Dong, obliterated her personality, and turned her into his own puppet and a tool to kidnap Huo Yuhao. Some people may say that writing a fanfic is just to make up for regrets and prevent Wang Dong from becoming Tang Wutong? But what can we rely on to maintain Wang Dong's personality? She will eventually regain her memory, and will be caught between the protagonist and Tang San, facing a painful choice. Some people may say that as long as he is stronger than Tang San and defeats Tang San, Wang Dong's personality can be preserved. But in my opinion, Wang Dong is still a puppet, but he has just changed from Tang San's puppet to the protagonist's puppet. Her pride and spirit are never worth mentioning. Can anyone give me some inspiration?

Qiuer's reissue (replenishing the character's vest)

It's so tiring to watch. One of the protagonists is a noob and the other is a master.

According to unreliable information, the heroines of this book include Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er, Xiao Xiao, Jiang Nannan, Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Mermaid Princess, Mermaid Lord's sister, Mermaid Princess' mother, Bajiao, Orange, Xu Jiujiu, Wei Na, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Nana, Weina, Meng Hongchen, Cain, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Zhu Lu, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Mo Huang, Lan Fuzi, Lang Yue, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuan En Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Ya Li, Long Yeyue, Nunnally, Long Bing, Ling Zichen, Leng Yaozhu, Cao Dezhi, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Mengqin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Sakura Falling Red, Blue Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Long Tianyang, Crimson Mother, Song Lao, Cai Meier, Xian Liner, Ye Xishui, Fengling, Duchess , Huo Yun'er, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, the three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Sula, Li Haiyang, Anya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, Mother Demon King, Lily, Phil, Tian Qin, Piaomiao, Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor, Golden Dragon Princess, the first angel god, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran, Bo Saixi, A Yin, Deep Sea Demon Whale King, Daming , Erming, Emperor Tian, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King, God of Lust, God of Light, Water God, Bai Chenxiang, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Caier, Bai Yue, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Meigongzi, Su Qin , Huo Linger, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Diyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Audrey, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Lie Yan, Dai Ying, Face

Please taste it

I wonder what other people think of this book! The overall content is good and the pace is okay. But I feel like the protagonist was written too brainlessly, especially regarding the college's handling of Ma Xiaotao. The compensation fee was simply thrown away? If you can't resist, can't you pluck the wool? Okay, let's just assume that the protagonist has a strong personality and doesn't want to be humiliated. But how dare you provoke Ma Xiaotao? Do you think anyone is your father? Do I have to tolerate you everywhere? Use your mouth to escape those who are stronger than you, and punch those who are weaker than you. In a world where force is paramount, do you still despise strength? I saw that Wu Feng couldn't stand it anymore, and I felt like he was using Wu Feng as a punching bag. If you really despise the strong, just drop out of school. After you leave, say 30 years to Hedong and 30 years to Hexi. Don't bully young people into poverty. Wouldn't it be more enjoyable to directly join the long-standing team to defeat Shrek? Anyway, I really didn't notice the disdain for the strong, but the bullying was obvious.

Posting something fun to make everyone happy😋 At this moment, a huge golden figure suddenly appeared behind the six souls. The golden halo was like appearing out of the sky, swallowing up all the six souls and six emotions. An indescribable softness, unrestrainedness, wildness, and nostalgia surged out instantly. That is... The power of love! "Wutong! I——, love——, you——" Dai Yuhao shouted loudly. At this moment, his voice turned into a colorful halo, piercing Tang San in the distance. Tang San didn't flinch, he stared at the colorful halo persistently and firmly, and shouted word by word in a voice that was almost like a roar: "Resurrection! My - love -.

The protagonist is blaming the sky and the earth, which seems awesome, but in fact, so far, he is just a clown and has written almost two million words, but he has not been able to affect the real overall situation. The ideals are lofty, but the abilities are mediocre. To put it bluntly, the ambition is not big enough and the progress is not fast enough. Do you really want to write three million words for a fanfic?