I Am in Douluo, I Am the Son of the Dragon God

Welcome readers! I am the author of the book Expedition to the Star Sea, which is the sequel to my other book Douluo: Peerless Stars Drift. Readers who have not read it can read that one first as a prequel. That book has been completed with 320,000 words. I hope you readers will like my book!

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I couldn't stand it when I reached chapter 50. I don't like Ma Xiaotao very much. It turned out that 1/5 of it was about Ma Xiaotao. A few chapters later it was still Ma Xiaotao. She was just minding her own practice and then something went wrong, and she had to work so hard to save her. I really wasn't in the mood to read it.

I'm really speechless. The reason why I don't marry Jiujiu is because it will make the protagonist's Qi Ling Pagoda lose its neutral position. But I just want to ask what will you do when the Sun and Moon Empire leads an army to attack the Douluo Three Kingdoms? Didn't you see how terrifying Xu Tianran was in the original work? The entire Douluo Continent was almost defeated. The two countries Tianhun and Dou Ling were wiped out in a snap, the two extreme Douluo were killed, the Noumenon Sect almost lost its inheritance, Shrek was so suppressed that he couldn't lift his head, and Tang San was forced to use mechanical deity to save the last city of Xingluo. Instead of worrying about your Qiling Tower losing its neutral position, you might as well take some time to think about what you will do if a war breaks out. Still confused about the neutral position of Qiling Tower? Let me go, the important enemy doesn't want to deal with it, but spends time wasting on these trivial things, are you sure your brain is okay? You might as well support the Star Luo Empire secretly, give some technology to the Star Luo Empire, and when the war breaks out, become the emperor and ascend the throne yourself. Doesn't it smell good?

I feel that the protagonist has not figured out what he should do most at all. The most important thing the protagonist should do now is to improve his strength, rather than to establish any so-called power. You must know that the protagonist possesses the Dragon God's martial spirit, the exploration of the Dragon God's bloodline, and the understanding and control of the nine elements, all of which take a lot of time. If the protagonist does not improve his strength in the early stage, he will do some of these things, diverting energy and wasting time. When do you fail to gain influence? Just use your own development time to do it. How? Do you think you are awesome because you have the Dragon God Martial Spirit? Is it okay to ignore anyone? Douluo Continent respects the strong. If you have no strength, who will take you seriously? So what if you are a genius? On the premise that you have not transformed your talent into strength, what qualifications do you have to be crazy?

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The dead Rakshasa reappears? Is this a plan to resurrect Bibi Dong? I'm annoyed when I see her now. Hey, I can't escape her spell in the second part. Bibi Dong is poorly written. I could accept it when I read the fanfic at first, but now I dislike this character less and less.

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It's been two years and I haven't finished writing yet. I'm still writing. I have to admire your perseverance.

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Ai Drawing Wang Dong'er Referring to the finished product made by two divine comic versions of Wang Dong'er The Goddess of Light Wang Dong'er

You might as well give up. There's no need to waste time there. It's been two years and I haven't finished writing it yet. If you have the time to write it down, you might as well start a new one. After all, no one has read your book, so even if you write it, it will be in vain.

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I just watched a little bit, and I feel that the protagonist is too silly and sweet, and has obviously not experienced the beatings of society. How can the protagonist 100% believe what others say? The protagonist directly revealed his Blue Star memory to Gu Yuena... It was simply unbelievable! Why. When we read fan fiction, aren't we just watching the protagonist with the memory of Blue Star rise step by step by relying on the advantage of knowing the plot? If people know the direction of the plot, how can we still play it? This is equivalent to disrupting the plot and making the future uncontrollable. No normal person would be willing to show his or her memories to others, because they can understand a person's weaknesses through their memories, and wouldn't they be able to manipulate them in the future? In other worlds this is equivalent to searching for souls! I still like Tang San and Xiao Yan, a protagonist with a mature personality. Will Tang San tell his parents and wife his true origin? Obviously impossible. It is also impossible for Xiao Yan to tell others his true origin. Because that is his own biggest secret, and he cannot let anyone know except himself. Only people like them can survive to the end! The above is purely a personal complaint and is in no way malicious.

What can I say? When you write about the relationship between the male and female protagonists, are you too generic? It didn't reflect the character at all, I just saw the end of the first competition. But what to say? It gives me the feeling that the author really doesn't know how to write emotional dramas. If you already have a harem, don't bury others. To be honest, you are not any more noble than others. At most, you are not a scumbag. You can use less pen and ink here and write more. It is really meaningless and can only serve to comfort yourself. Why is Tang San so hated? Isn't that a serious case of double standards? People have double standards, so there's nothing you can do about it, but writing it all the time will give people a feeling of hypocrisy. To be honest, I really like the soul beast camp, but what can I say? The plot is a bit boring.