LOL: the Dark Descendant Sword Demon Wants to Take Away My Body

Aatrox is a proud god warrior, not a 🤡. The powerful weapons in the past made it impossible for him to perceive the outside world like Raast, let alone interfere with the outside world like Verus. Thousands of years of confinement have made him insane. His body is dilapidated and dirty, constructed by blood magic, and is a poor imitation of the body of a god. The huge gap and his arrogance made him long for death. The proud warrior of the gods could not bear to live in this ugly posture. But he couldn't end himself at all. He wanted to die but couldn't meet it. So he wanted to destroy the world, taking himself with him. But the author's Aatrox is somewhat... Aatrox is not a street gangster who curses people. He despises everything, even himself now, but he still has the pride of being a warrior of the gods. It can only be said that he is not.

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I don't understand why the protagonist pretended to be innocent in front of the sword girl at the beginning. He knew clearly that he was going to assassinate the sword girl, knowing that he would die, but he still followed and waited for a few teammates to go in and then went in to see the situation. It was clear that he had traveled through time a long time ago, and he didn't suddenly wear it at that time. He ran to join in the fun when he knew the sword girl's combat power. Isn't this asking for death? Several teammates have all gone to assassinate Dao Sister. You don't know how to run away quickly, but you go in to look, and beg for mercy when you are about to die. After you can't fight and run away, you change your identity and join the Brotherhood. There are so many people in the Brotherhood, and most of the people who are familiar with you are dead. Who can recognize you?

I don't know why everyone is like this now. As mentioned. The protagonist is kinder to Ahri, that is, licking Ahri. Do you know the meaning of licking a dog? What is dog licking? It refers to crazy attentiveness. Even if the person being licked kicks the dog, the licking dog will still wag its tail. . . This is dog licking. Ali and the protagonist run in both directions. You see, the protagonist is being nice to Ahri, which is a normal pursuit. . . . Today's readers are confused by the word "dog licking". Your ideal target is not a little fairy, but a normal woman. Please calm down and think about the word licking a dog. If you insist on thinking it is dog licking. Let me just say, didn't the hero of Janna's book pay the same amount to Seraphine in the beginning? Help her see Zu An clearly. Accompany growth. Even from Seraphine's perspective, she is a young scholar and takes the initiative to throw herself into her arms. But the plot is that the male protagonist accompanies her to grow up. Then... Lux's Magic Penetration Rod, I don't even mention this. The Magic Penetration Rod cultivates Lux, is this right? I don't know why book friends are now licking dogs when they see someone who is slightly nicer to women. . . . I don't know what caused this phenomenon. . Many people keep saying, I really don't understand.

I really want to be Miss Zoe's dog, but Miss Zoe said she likes Ezreal. I cried. I don't know why I'm crying when I'm neither a dog nor a mortal, because I'm just a darkin. I never expected Miss Zoe to like me. I understand that all protoss likes cute dogs or mortals who understand how to use geniuses to make money. No protoss would like a darkin with a broken body... Corrupted by the void to look like this. But I still asked Miss Zoe if I could be your dog. I know I am destined not to be a dog, but if she likes dogs, I can always be by my side and watch her, even if she always holds a dog in her arms.

I don't think the protagonist is a licker, at least the plots I've seen so far are within the normal range. But I really want to complain about Aatrox's character issues. He's just sarcastic, not bad-mouthed. You, Aatrox, are full of foul-mouthed words. Are you a fallen Ascended Warrior of Ancient Shurima or a homeless man in the trenches of Zaun? Even if you tell me that he can swear, but you can't choose swear words in the game lines, I still think it's unreasonable, because the swear words he can use should be ancient Shurima swear words, rather than "Gan you mother". I feel that the author got the wrong selling point right from the beginning. Everyone came to see the interaction and bickering between Sword Demon and the protagonist. As a result, your character design of Sword Demon is seriously OOC, so what should I watch? Also, why do book lovers feel that the protagonist is aggrieved? It is undeniable that there are indeed some readers who have read too many novices and are so blind that they cannot read anything. But what about everyone else? What about readers who can accept this kind of plot? Why do they still feel that the protagonist is aggrieved? Because this kind of frustration is not caused by the protagonist being cheated, but by the protagonist not being clear. The third golden chapter does not have any personality for the protagonist at all. He is like an NPC who is purely arranged by the plot. I feel that the above paragraph is a bit vague. To put it another way, the above problem is caused by the author not grasping the selling point of his book. The author wants to write a relatively light-hearted plot-oriented novel, rather than a serious flow novel with bitter hatred, torture of the soul, and exploration of emotions. Then you should write the frustrating plot so that it is not frustrating. If your point of purchase is not the aggrieved part, then of course you should briefly write about the aggrieved part, and focus on the protagonist's struggle against this aggrievedness, as well as the relaxing plot of the sword demon. In other words, if an ordinary person travels to Rune Continent, all he can experience is grievance. This is what the author thinks, because it is reasonable from the plot logic. But you can't make readers feel aggrieved after reading it. This is a problem of perception, and the problem of perception cannot be solved by talking about logic. Finally, {"NickName":"Book Friends 20221010130818584","UserId":396551192} is a first-hand author. I hope you can write down this idea well, bring back the character of the sword demon, and make the writing style more suitable for the subject matter. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗. (ps: I'm not very good at writing book reviews. I write wherever I think of it. I feel that the last paragraph is particularly confusing. Book friends are welcome to add, correct, and discuss.)

Spanking at every turn feels like a group of retards interacting with each other, which is too frivolous. This behavior makes the protagonist look like a clown with no emotional intelligence at all.

One thing to say is that the protagonist looked too much like a loser in the early stage, and the writing was a bit watery. Does the protagonist grow up later?

The plot of Wan Hao Akali is so real. The main character fw is a coward. Just forget it. What did the author write about Wan Hao? Just the few words said by B. With Wan Hao's character, don't break him?

The main character is irritable? When you meet anyone, do you have to be sexually attracted to yourself first? The female characters are posted up like they have no brains. Is this what you said you wrote that best suits the background? That's pretty much it. If you can't improve your writing style, you still like to turn to controversial points? Who gives you so much patience in Internet articles? The pornographic article turns into a dead eunuch after a turn.

At first, I wanted to watch Sword Demon and see rivers of blood and psychosis. The plot was good, and the foreshadowing and daily routine were all taken as foreshadowing. However, the more I read Ahri's chapter, the more crooked it became. Then I saw the trailer for Akali's appearance in the next chapter. I was convinced that it was a fantasy story, but it turned out to be just a harem reskin novel.

When I saw ntr Xia Luo, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The plot was not only nonsense but also full of forced sensationalism and intellectual subversion.

I don't understand, I don't know how to play LOL, so I don't know the relationship between the characters, but in chapter 20, they were bullied no matter how much they were bullied, and they still acted like that. I don't dare to say that they should replace one, but Akali would have to be killed if she was taken away from me. Not to mention, the logic is not normal, and it pissed me off. Sorry, I'm a little angry but I think my concept is good, bye

Ah, I just watched a few pictures. I was killed by the sword girl at the beginning of my relaxed daily life. Isn't it time to take revenge? Wouldn't the person behind him who killed Dao Mei take revenge?

You want to kill the person who saved you, and you forgive the person who killed you. Really good The real poison parts of Akali and Sword Girl are completely superfluous. Although you have your own rhythm, I still want to complain, and the protagonist's establishment is too vague, giving people a real feeling.

The sword demon's men are scattered in eight city-states

Why do you feel like anyone can bully the protagonist?

I've only read Chapter 30, and I don't know what happens next, but what I saw was a cowardly, incompetent and very cowardly protagonist. I didn't expect that protagonists like Lu Mingfei are still popular nowadays. It gives me a headache.

Chapter 30, I can't stand it, it's a bit poisonous. The protagonist has lost his life once, and there is no sense of crisis. Life also depends on blood magic. After reading the chapters, there are often various self-explanations from the author. Numbing, farewell.

I can't understand it. The protagonist is so strong that no one can beat him, and his temper is not a pure pleaser. . . All I can say is: Send it!

Evelyn's five demon subordinates. The ability is stronger than Zakana, but much weaker than Evelin. . Demons are not easy to die because they are entities formed from negative energy. The first picture, Wola, is the only one in the lor who is similar to Evelin. She likes to eat people, and girls with thin skin and tender meat are the best, and they eat a lot. The Ionian dancer was eaten by her. Second picture, Surtur.... Has a good relationship with Walla, but has a small appetite, and often gives gifts to Walla of things he can't finish. He likes gold. A gentleman with a personality, like an old butler, in Demacia. The third picture is a homeless woman traveling alone. Pi City Likes to play the role of a homeless beauty, attracting sympathy from others, and then eating them. He has a rather indecisive personality and has eaten Yorde people. The Overlord of Shurima, Dom. She has a queen personality, she likes the taste of Shurima nobles, and her appetite is okay, but she has an independent personality and can't stand the crying scene of a lone woman. Think this is flimsy fraud. Then Disim is the strongest among the five because he can fight Evelin for several rounds. He has a good appetite, but likes blood. I once invited a homeless girl to live together, but she was rejected. She has a sinister and cunning personality. Is a businessman in the port of Bilgewater.

The part about Xia Luo was immediately confusing to me. In the early stage, the protagonist was completely a cowardly loser. However, considering that he is an ordinary person, it was normal for him to be depressed in the early stage, and he got better after absorbing the devil. As a result, in Xia Luo's part, if he didn't quickly get rid of the entanglement and get Akali back, he would play the Minotaur drama, and coupled with the inexplicable psychological description, he felt that Akali was completely unimportant in his eyes, and the protagonist's image has directly changed into a smelly man who can't walk around when he sees a woman, forgets the old when he sees the new, and teases her even if he can't get it, which is too unpopular. The author seems to be trying to make fun of it, but I can only say it's too poisonous.

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At the beginning, he was forced to coincide with the description of the murderer, and he had to go to trial. And then one of them was the heroine. There is a sword demon, can you show me this outrageous plot? 666, You are invincible author

Is this a writing practice for you? 🤔

The author of sry, when I saw the title of the book, I thought it was an invincible novel with a lot of words. But there is no way to catch up. In the early stage, I looked so suffocated that I turned into a caterpillar🐛. It was moisturized 🤝

Author, what do you think of your writing of the plot of the knife girl and the brotherhood?

The protagonist has too many psychological activities and is very ink! It's very tiring to watch! Abandoned!

The author is about to start a fight with readers😥

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