Konoha, at the Beginning, I Have the Core of Herrscher of the End in My Body.

'I don't know what you think about Archon's Spear being unable to penetrate Shenwei? ' Spear of Archon: Slander, naked slander, my attack method is to penetrate the space and cause real damage. How can I not penetrate the divine power as a space.

Time travel and becoming the protagonist is the most rubbish way of writing, why don't you just read the original work?

Is this protagonist stupid? There is no distinction between right and wrong Uchiha Madara killed you once and was saved by Six Paths Obito directly gave you a detonating charm, and Kushina died directly Fugaku was still the mastermind of the Uchiha clan's coup, and he also killed you by following the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Once, Sasuke beat you half-life and then defected. Another time, he was determined to kill you, killing Naruto and then the Five Kage I was so embarrassed after reading the first few chapters, he was so heartless and like a fool.

I like to read the table of contents first and then read the content. I'm most annoyed by this kind of article where one chapter is divided into three chapters: upper, middle and lower.

After reading a few chapters, my only thought is The knowledge of the 21st century time traveler is not even as good as that of Xilin who has never read a book

The author may not have played the Honkai Impact series. It's too confusing. The Archon Spear is an attack that penetrates space. It is essentially a distorted space-time fragment. If you don't want Obito to die, you can say that the protagonist does not understand the folding of space and cannot use the Archon Spear. As long as he can use the Archon Spear, his understanding of power has far exceeded that of Kamui. What bothered me the most was the last part of the fight against ANBU. Can the Archon Spear be blocked? The Archon Spear can only be dodged. Once it touches the body, it hits. It will directly penetrate the space and ignore the defensive hit. It feels like the author's understanding of the Archon Spear is more like a physical spear created with the power of reason.

Traveling through time and becoming the protagonist, knowing the plot and having a nearly invincible Goldfinger, he still has a whirlpool physique and possesses the Nine Tails. . This doesn't even dare to change the plot. . . By following the plot, does the author want to surpass the original work? When you read a fanfic, you just want to watch the main character doing things! To destroy those things that don't go your way, to do those things that you want to do but can't do,,, I said at the beginning that the Will of Fire is rubbish, can't you destroy it directly? Kakashi is already a jounin at the age of six. Your protagonist can't even hit anyone with a golden finger. He's just a jerk.

Damn, I wrote this before I understood the Honkai setting. Haha, I polished it first.

Understand reproduction, space control, electromagnetic field control, create ideal fluids, inorganic matter control, creation and decay, control of molecular motion, gravity control, energy flow control, as well as the more special Thousand Herrscher and self-aware virus characteristics.

Can only the Nine-Tails and One-Tail be considered the Judgment Level? In Honkai Impact, the Judgment-level Chi You swallowed half of China in one bite, and the Herrscher was able to tear apart the Judgment-level with his hands. How can you still have fun after throwing him into the Naruto World? The setting difference is too big

It's so fun to watch. It's not like other movies where revenge is too slow. I don't know if the plot is jumpy or not, but I'll give you some advice if it's fun to watch. If it's jumpy, just open up the world. Don't stress. Just adapt to the rules and become stronger quickly like now. I'll write more when I get to a strong world. After one or two worlds, write some other ones. You can't write a routine, otherwise you will feel monotonous and have no desire to continue reading. It can also be used as a practice. If you don't like it, you can skip it without affecting the overall situation.

For the first time, I saw that each chapter is divided into chapters of "upper, middle, lower, and end." It's okay for you to do this in some big events and long plots, but what is your situation now? Start a genre?

If you write about Honkai Impact World, please don't change the plot of Honkai Impact III, because I am a loyal player of Honkai Impact III.

As for me, I rarely read fics where the protagonist becomes the main character in time travel, because they all feel awkward.

If I update one or two sentences every night, I might as well not update it at all. .

Those who copy the original work have no creativity, no writing style and no characteristics.

Sarutobi Hiruzen is not particularly bad, all he wants to do is balance. The Sarutobi clan completely obeyed him, so it doesn't count. Danzo can also be whittled at any time. White Fang should have suppressed him because his reputation was too high, but he ignored the fierceness of playing with the knife and committed suicide in a matter of minutes. The Thousand Hands clan has integrated into the common people, and there is no one left except the young and old, who are duty-bound to revive the Thousand Hands Glory. The rope tree should have been created by Danzo. The direct descendants of the Senju clan can completely inherit Hokage and cannot let him live. Uchiha are all crazy. If you say anything, he will dare to fight you, especially when a bunch of old men are still alive. Fugaku can't suppress him. Sarutobi Hiruzen will explode as soon as he suppresses him. If there is a war with Konoha, other countries will definitely invade. I can only ask you to die. The fourth generation died because he was the Hokage. Sarutobi Hiruzen had abdicated and he wanted to intervene. The fourth generation was not dead but he was not strong enough and needed help from his predecessor. The reason why Kyuubi was knocked out of Konoha was because Kyuubi would destroy the village. In addition, the Yondaime's wife is dead, after all, if he pulls out the tailed beast, he will die, and Kushina can't hold on. Hizashi's death was because Sarutobi Hiruzen did not want war and he wanted Hizashi to reform. After all, they are the leader of the clan, and it is unjustifiable that they would not change even if their own brother died in a caged bird.

In the year of middle age, you can directly penetrate the entire ninja world, and your use of imaginary numbers and imaginary space have come out. Damn it, this ninja hero has gone directly to the sea of ​​​​trees. Even the god of Otsutsuki has to kneel down. I have never seen Houji and Housan use their authority. The world-level death spots caused by the explosion of Honkai energy are enough to destroy the world. Tell me this. The combat power is overwhelming, really dead, and then the total sum of the whole cake is not 1+1=2, right? That's a geometric multiplication. 13 Cores are equivalent to 13 output ports, and there is an intermediate one. This unlimited, infinite output port is all connected to the imaginary number space. Those who can use Honkai energy, are you telling me that there is no Big Honkai Impact? The most important thing is to connect the imaginary number space. Can we use unlimited Honkai energy? I don't believe it even if it's not connected to the sea of ​​trees. Are you giving me knowledge? Without Cocoon, he directly becomes the center. These are all Herrschers who belong directly to the tree. In terms of status, they are shoulder to shoulder with Cocoon from the bottom up. Their combat power is so overwhelming! You can end it quickly and open other new pictures in one chapter of Ninja World.

The book suits my taste, but it has become a eunuch a long time ago. I cheated on April Fool's Day, and then I was pushed back into the coffin by Uncle Jiu.