Luck in the Heavens: Starting from the Deer and the Cauldron

With the protagonist's reputation for causing trouble in the palace, no one turns to him, and yet he has to find a kind-hearted beggar to teach him from scratch. I feel like I'm putting the cart before the horse. Is this starting to suppress the protagonist's development?

I was convinced that the protagonist and Wei Xiaobao were hanging out together. Is there anyone playing with him in that novel now? Basically, they either kill him or make him a eunuch. The better option is to ignore him.

People are selfish. The more selfless they are, the bigger their plans are! Founding a dynasty and establishing a country is so awesome that we can't have any descendants? The author's 'great sentiments' make the protagonist the holy mother of the nation!

I don't understand the poisonous point of leaving a seed in each plane. The author's brain circuit is not normal.

Go find a job in a factory! The protagonist must be written as a wizened emperor who cannot lay eggs.

Produced by the studio, it must be a waste product!

When writing a novel, you have to avoid lightning. It's not about writing something sensitive. What should you avoid?

Seeing the protagonist of Yitian World loudly announcing in public: "I am Grandmaster XXX..." I was immediately persuaded to quit.

I can understand that your martial arts skills are so advanced that you can create a dragon with one slap. You actually use the system to directly create a fantasy golden dragon in the mortal world where martial arts is considered low-level. Then what is the use of this protagonist? The protagonist doesn't know how to practice, and the physical and mental training techniques are all given directly by the system. Now he doesn't even need the protagonist, so he turns into a golden dragon to kill people and conquer cities and territories... The protagonist is the tool of the system...

How can I put it this way? The author is pretty good and will usually reply to all the comments I see. But let me tell you a little bit about my feelings after reading this book. First of all, the distance from the unit to tens of feet is too exaggerated for a low-level martial artist. One foot is 3.33 Meters. How many meters do you think it is? There are also dialogues between characters. When Tiandihui talks to the protagonists, the first person to say hello is Mao Shiba. Where do you put the protagonist? We have already introduced that this is our military leader. You will offend so many people by doing this! Moreover, Heaven and Earth will talk to the protagonists. The first person to speak is Mao Shiba. What is your identity? You are a reserve force of the Shenlong Army. You took over the conversation before the military leader spoke. Don't you think it's too unreasonable? It's like you were talking to a unit leader, but the leader didn't say anything yet. Then one of your subordinates said it first. In ancient times, there was no distinction between superiority and inferiority. Anyway, it looks quite awkward, so the author, please continue to work hard, and I wish you will become a great master soon.

I just want to say that you have written two books about "Shading the Sky" before. Is your writing style so awkward?

Then I count as the second one😁😁

I haven't read it yet, so I looked at the table of contents: The plot: The Deer and the Cauldron - Yitian - The Divine Condor Shooting - Tianlong - Datang. It seems that this order is okay. Although it's a mess, it's better than just messing it up with some Western stuff. There are so many chapters about The Deer and the Cauldron, but why are they so short at the end? Mixed martial arts? Or is it just going through the motions, with one or more female protagonists? Should you lose your mind or your kidneys? What arrangements will be made after changing the world? What is the main character's goal, to fight for hegemony? Become an immortal and call yourself an ancestor? Still just wandering around

Come on, I wrote it in line with my personal taste. You killed Zhao Min well. Later, you will also wipe out Cihang Jingzhai and the so-called Love Brain witches. There are also sticks from foreign tribes. Just slaughter the country, wipe out their ethnic groups, and dig up their ancestral graves.

Save your claws and recommend a movie world gift package [Note: Many authors nowadays write about movies and TV shows, but the actual number of film viewings is really unflattering and seriously lacking] ←A:→"Macau Series", "Plan A", "Anna and the Martial Arts", "Ender's Game", "Artemis Hotel", "Love, Death and Robots Series", "Alita: Battle Angel", "Ala" "Ding Live", "Anna", "Dora the Explorer: The Lost City of Gold", "Dr. Night: Morbius" ←B:→"Crisis in Paris", "Batman Series", "Transformers Series", "Night at the Museum Series", "Batman v Superman: Justice League", "Braving the Storm", "Granny in Disguise Series", "Project Baby", "Sicario Series", "Back "Water Fight", "The Flower Series", "The Fountain of Youth", "The Frozen Man Series", "Bargeman", "Bollywood Robot Love", "Funny Bugs: MapleStory Movie", "Bad Boys", "Edgewalker" ←C:→"The Great Wall", "48 Hours", "Lucy", "The Amazing Spider-Man Series", "Spider-Man Series", "Superman Series", "Superman" "The Red Flame Series", "Assassin's League", "Superstorm", "Superman", "The Punisher Series", "Tron: Legacy", "City Hunter", "Super Project", "Assassin Schoolgirl", "Transcendence", "Red Police Dragon", "The Rescuers", "Battleship", "Beyond the Edge", "Superman High School", "Equator", "Return to Earth", "Jungle Cruise", "The Incredibles Series", "Super "School Bully", "Power Rangers", "The Bomb Disposer Series", "Reboot" and "Assassination Novelist" ←D:→"The Bourne Agents", "Mission: Impossible Series", "The Bourne Supremacy Series", "Journey to the Center of the Earth Series", "Independence Day Series", "The Day the Earth Stood Still", "Dragon Wars Series", "Raiders of the Lost Ark Series", "Raiders", "Hellboy Series", "Blade" "Warrior Series", "God of Gamblers Series", "Taoist Out of the Mountain", "Grave Robbers Notes", "Gambler Series", "Taxi Express Series", "The Third Wave", "24 Hours", "Operation Broken Arrow", "First Blood", "Dave", "The Fifth Element", "Bumblebee", "Venom Series", "The Sixth Day", "Detective Dee Series", "District 9", "Detective Pikachu", "Bloodshot" and "Westward Journey": "Origin" "The Great Illusionist" "The Past of Copper Mountain" ←E:→"2012 End of the World" "24 Hours Rebirth" "E, T, Alien" ←F:→"Crazy Alien" "Anti-Corruption Storm Series" "Mad Max Series" "Avengers Series" "Legend of the Gods" "Divergent Series" "Counterattack" "Rebirth of the Dragon", "African Monk", "Lucky Star", "Eagle Project", "The Flying Dragon", "Train to Busan Series", "Van Helsing", "Spy Agent Series", "Flying Magic", "Extraordinary Family", "Faqiu Tianguan: Kunlun Ruins" ←G: → "Kung Fu Yoga", "The Expendables Series", "Iron Man Series", "Tomb Raider Series", "Kung Fu", "National Treasure Series" "The Golden Taoist", "Ghost Blasts Ghosts", "Mr. Exorcist", "Godzilla Series", "Kung Fu Panda Series", "Kung Fu Dream", "The King of Kung Fu", "Ghost Blowing the Lantern: The Ancient City", "Ghost in the Shell", "Domestic Lingling Paint", "The Day the Country went Bankrupt", "Ghost Blowing the Lantern: Wuxia Coffin Mountain", "Godzilla 2: King of the Monsters", "Ghost Strike: Fighting Violence with Violence", "Antique Bureau Middle Game" ←H:→"Chill Series", "Phantom Driver Series", "Pacific Rim Series", "The Hobbit Series", "Harry Potter Series", "Underworld Series", "Men in Black Series", "Die Hard Series", "The Day After Tomorrow", "Doom", "The Matrix Series", "The Golden Compass", "Ghost Tour", "Once Upon a Time", "The Royal Sisters Series", "Burning Island" "Red Zone", "Royal Dragon", "Golden Island Adventure", "Operation Red Sea", "Red Sparrow", "Butterfly Effect Series", "Black Panther", "Dark Minds", "One Piece Animation", "The Dark Tower", "One Piece Animation", "Aquaman", "Hanna", "Happy Canopy", "Legion of the Living Dead", "Black Widow", "Huangmiao Village·Underground Beauty", "Red Notice", "The Matrix Reboot" " Golden Spider City" ←I:→ ←J:→"Kong·Skull Island", "Escape", "Sniper: Ultimate Hunt", "Xxx Return", "Bay Driver", "The Machinist Series", "Theft", "Cold City", "Arrival", "Nine-Storey Tower", "Sniper Elite: Reloaded", "Pirates of the Caribbean Series", "King Kong" "Wolf Series", "Elysium", "Automata", "Now You See Me", "The Rescue Series", "The Hunger Games Series", "King Kong Series", "Homefront", "Bad Boys Series", "Battle for the Planet of the Apes", "Rush Hour Series", "Police Story Series", "Mr. "Zombies Are Afraid", "Blooded", "The Meg", "John Wick", "Escape Series", "Zombie Detective", "Escape Series", "Zombie Detective", "Evolution", "Jack the Giant", "Evolution", "Captain Marvel", "Robot 9", "Beautiful Weapons", "Dog", "Xx", "Escape", "Escape", "Zombie Reincarnation", "Memory Reappearance", "Empire of the Robots", "Escape" "Sky Rescue", "Vanguard", "Giant Loophole" ←K:→"Accounting Assassin", "Anaconda Series", "Happy Ghost Series", "Fast Food Truck", "Rampage Behemoth", "Clone", "Science Fiction Master: Guardian Bird", "Kunlun Taoist Scripture", "Courier" ←L:→"The Wandering Earth", "Predators", "London Has Fallen", "The Incredible Hulk Series", "Thunder" "God Series", "Soul Tank Series", "Green Lantern", "Battle of Los Angeles", "Dragon Knight", "Flying Swords of Dragon", "The Agent Next Door", "Austin Powers Next Door", "Mr. Phantom", "Brothers of the Dragon", "Fang", "Heart of the Dragon", "Dragons in Shaolin", "Monday Hunt", "Another Earth", "Army", "Kiss of the Dragon", "Meteor Man", "Integrity", "Pray on the City", "Shazam!" "Dragon Coffin Tomb: The Wolf King of Western Xia" "Longyun Town Strange Tales" "The Mysterious Incident in Lop Nur" ←M:→"Operation Mekong" "Doomsday Collapse" "Edge of Tomorrow" "Warcraft" "U. S. "Captain Series", "The Mummy Series", "Tomorrowland", "Adventures in Devil's Mountain", "Magic Warriors", "Catwoman", "Ghost Academy", "Ghost Club", "Mini Agent", "Witch", "Skyscraper Rescue" " "Magic Teacher", "Tom and Jerry Series", "Adventurer", "Moscow Has Fallen Series", "The Sorcerer's Apprentice", "Jupiter Ascending", "Tom and Jerry 2021", "The Disciple", "Confident" ←N:→"Angry in Xiangxi", "Rescue in Time and Space", "Wrath·Serious Case" ←O:→"European Strategy" ←P:→"Break" "Ruffian Hero Series" "Prometheus", "Charlie's Angels", "Human Torch", "The Climber" ←Q:→"Global Storm", "Superman: Hancock", "Doctor Strange", "Total Recall" "The Green Hornet" "The Exorcist" "The Exorcist" "The Fighter Series" "The Bird Series" "A Chinese Ghost Story Series" "Qi Men Dun Jia" "Dear, I Shrunk the Child" "Qi Men Dun Jia 2020" "Green Faced Shura" ←R:→"Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Series", "Human Purge Plan Series", "Human Office", "Artificial Intelligence", "People on the Road Series", "The Crowd", "Human Wrath", "Daily Fantasy Guide" ←S:→"Detective Pu Songling", "Wonder Woman", "Slaying Wolf: Greedy Wolf", "Fast and Furious Series", "Bounty Hunter", "Zodiac", "Slayer" "Wolf 2", "Resident Evil Series", "Famous Four Series", "Watchmen: Age of War", "Fantastic Beasts Series", "Despicable Me Series", "Mysterious Code", "Sharknado Series", "10,000 Years Before History", "Death Race Series", "The Host", "Holy Grail: City of Bones", "Fantastic Four Series", "Minority Report", "Time Bureau", "Mr. And Mrs. Smith", "Piranha Series", "Myth", "Two Dragons" "The Club", "The Brave Cannon", "Ten Brothers", "The Inquisitor", "Death Comes Series", "Deadpool Series", "Upgrade 2018", "Time Trap", "Deep Sea Prison Break", "Life and Death Sniper", "Slay Men" " "Skinny Tiger, Fat Dragon", "War of the Worlds", "Triple Threat: Cross-border Rescue", "Mysterious Wonderland", "Tearing Apocalypse", "Ghosts of Life and Death", "The Abyss", "Dead Ghosts Prying the Wall", "Three-Pointed Tree Era Series", "Brothers Collide with Ghosts" "Death Radius" "Stupid Brain Science City" "Shrunk Life" "Lightning Rebirth" "Amateur Agent" "Walker Series" "Gemini Man/Gemini Man" "Sand Sea Candle Dragon" "Young Hackers: Alien Group" "Victory" "Water Monster" "Water Monster 2: Blackwood" "Out of Control Player" "Dune" "Shang-Chi and the Legend of the Ten Rings" "Young Class" "Uncharted" "The Instant Universe" ←T:→ "Eye in the Sky", "Special Forces Series", "Special Identity", "Predator Series", "Skyrim", "Agent Sauter", "Guinea Pig Agents", "Transparent Man Series", "Heroes", "Secret Agents", "Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng", "Ready Player One", "Escape from Clone Island", "Truant Dragon Series", "Librarian Series", "Angel Has Fallen", "They Call Me Jike", "Sweetheart Girl", "Special Delivery", "The" 355 ←U:→ ←V:→ ←W:→"13 Hours" "My Grandpa the Agent" "Kingsman: The Secret Service Academy" " "Death-defying Express", "I·Robot", "My Superman Ex-Girlfriend", "Infernal Affairs Series", "Who Am I", "Five Lucky Stars Series", "Dragon Detective", "Invincible Stars", "Death-defying Poison Master Series", "Ace" Bodyguard", "Future Warriors", "Unknown Planet", "I am Legend", "Operation King", "We are all with superpowers", "I am Legend", "I am not the God of Medicine", "Alien Hunting Order", "Alien Love", "Wu Zhuangyuan Su Qier", "Wesley Series", "Who Am I: There is no absolutely safe system", "Alien Report", "Infinite 2021", "How I Became a Superhero", "Manslaughter" ← X: → "Suicide Squad", "Charlotte Trouble", "Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf Series", "Interstellar", "Rise of the Planet of the Apes Series", "X-Men Series", "Evil Squad", "Journey to the West: Demons", "Starship Troopers Series", "Star Trek Series", "Pixel Wars", "Star Legend Series", "The Scorpion King Series", "Mr. Zombie", "Shinjuku Incident", "Summer Fortune", "Laughing Forest Series", "Tornado Kid" "The Richest Man in Xihong City", "The Leaker", "Valerian: The City of a Thousand Planets", "Star Wars Series", "Elf", "Psychic", "The Little Life", "X-Men: Dark Phoenix", "Shaft", "Joker 2019", "Stargate", "Lucky Day", "Creed", "Little People", "Juggler", "Elf", "The Haunted Bear Animated Movie Series" ←Y:→"Yunnan Worm Valley" Blade Runner 2049", "Nightclub", "British Showdown", "Ip Man Series", "One Man's Martial Arts", "Maze Runner Series", "Ant-Man Series", "Guardians of the Galaxy Series", "On Trigger", "Hawkeye", "Athena: No Spy Bureau", "Tuxedo", "Oblivion", "Alien vs. Predator Series", "Jumanji Series", "The Twilight Zone", "Music Zombies", "Asian Eagle", "A Better Tomorrow" Series", "A Good Show", "Annihilation 2018", "Another Dimension Series", "Superpower", "Solo: A Star Wars Story", "Giant", "On the Move", "A Better Tomorrow Series", "Oblivion" "Planet", "Alien Series", "Invisible Man Series", "Eternal Guard", "The Grandmaster", "The Legend of Dragon Immortal Series", "Yin Yang Suppression of Monsters", "The Eternals", "Yin Yang Watchman", "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slayer: Nine Yang Magic" "The Holy Fire Hero" "The Adam Project" "The Medicine King's Coffin·Restart" "Moonfall" ←Z:→"Wolf Warrior Series" "Bomb Disposal Expert" "Fatal Command" "Jurassic World Series" "Jurassic Park Series" "Terminator Series" "Justice League" "Best Partner Series" "Best Partner" "Chinese Dragon" "Deadly Violet" "Jurassic Game" "Deadly Black" "Lan", "Suicide Squad", "Monster Hunt", "Vapor Order", "Spider-Man: Far From Home", "Chasing the Dragon Series", "Mortal Kombat Legends: Scorpion's Revenge", "Zack Snyder's Justice League", "Mortal Kombat 2021", "Dynasty Warriors", "Chasing the Tiger and the Dragon", "Reminiscence", "Sam Fung Chang", "Spider-Man: No Home", "The Last Day", "The Intercept"

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It's too difficult, rely on love to generate electricity ヾ(￣0￣; )ノ

This book might have had some success five years ago, but now, haha, there are tens of thousands of copies of Jin Yong's five novels online, so why is there no plot?

The book is okay, the thinking is clear.