Interstellar Archon Starting from the Wasteland

This book is good, but you have forgotten the most important thing about creation, especially the creations of high civilizations. Low-level civilizations cannot escape destruction no matter how much they resist. The creator of creation has absolute control over creation. The mind and body will be completely controlled by the creator the moment they meet. Regardless of whether there is wisdom or not, this is a sign that has been there since the beginning of creation. Engraved in every cell and in the biological magnetic field of this species.

The plot structure is a bit immature, but the setting is good. Using an irrelevant little girl to promote the plot in the early stage was a failure. But overall it's okay

If nothing else, it's definitely going to be cold. After watching it, it's a mess. No way.

You have lived in the Wasteland for ten years. Even if you have been in the city, don't you know what the wasteland is like? , Why are you still so naive? And does that little girl have anything to do with you? If it is the Great Holy Mother, I must say something

What's the point of the beginning? The sister is taken away for no apparent reason, and then the protagonist searches for his sister and writes hundreds of thousands of words. After meeting her, they break up, and then the finale reunites or the sister dies and resurrects the sister. Is this a drama?

In a cold world, having a sister is a disadvantage for the protagonist. This sister will definitely cause a lot of trouble for the protagonist. Is this world a cruel place? Then I got a younger sister who was very funny. Being nice to that sister is like a holy mother. It's a little unkind to be mean to that sister. Generally speaking, it's a failure

In your first chapter, do you think how many people have masochistic tendencies? A large part of the people who can pay for novels are workers. They are already being squeezed and exploited by society, and they don't want to see a fictional person being abused in a book.

A great interstellar empire, a mechanical angel that uses dark energy, has run out of energy in just a few decades. Are you afraid it's not funny? For example, after the Three Gorges Dam power station was built, it could only be used for one month and then became useless!

Whenever this kind of article with a larger world view is written, Xinshou Cun can always write dozens or hundreds of chapters. This makes people lose the motivation to pursue it. Can't they just ignore the Novice Village and relax before expanding the scale?        ， Then just rush through it, and it probably won't take dozens or hundreds of chapters!                                                                                                This Novice Village gangster gang probably won't be able to open a new map if it doesn't have hundreds of chapters, and if it opens a new map, it's probably still hanging around on the ground. When you start to conquer the stars and compete with other cosmic races for hegemony, you will hardly see chapters 3-500!

It looks like there is a hint of Xiling smell

I took my sister with me at the beginning of Digging Interstellar, but she was so poisoned that she ran away.

Golden Chapter Three, don't understand what it means?

I feel like the author's writing is getting better and better, keep up the good work! Although the writing of the first twenty chapters is a bit impatient. But it will get better and better slowly and steadily.

There are too many stitches, and the author's writing power and plot structure ability are completely uncontrollable. It's annoying to watch.

I read a chapter... It's a game that persuades you to quit at the beginning, don't bring girls with the cruel background setting Occult + psychic system, either a warhammer setting or a fantasy setting.

I can't stand it anymore. I jumped to watch it, but even if I skipped and watched the big picture, I basically understood it, but the process of saving your sister was too annoying. You either made the protagonist weaker and completely unable to defeat Yuwen; or you made the protagonist stronger and crushed him to death. I can't think of you like this. You obviously have the opportunity to kill the boss, but in the end, it makes someone transform into the second stage. It's half the fun, and it's over in one click. It's very uncomfortable to be neither up nor down. If it were changed to Yuwen, the gene would collapse and he would die. Before death, he would have to take someone on his back, come out and fight the protagonist desperately, and beat the protagonist away. The second stage of transformation would be better. From the previous descriptions, including the conversation with Leia and the sacrifice of 640, it is shown that he was going to fight the boss. As a result, the fight turned from active to passive; second, he lost; and third, the reason for the loss was the protagonist's laissez-faire. Each of the above three points will reduce the enjoyment point, which makes it very frustrating to watch and makes people feel that 640 was wasted. Think it over for yourself, and just listen to what the family says

It's not because of my sister, I'm because the process of saving my sister was too stupid~

Is it Yang or Palace? It's been thirteen days and it's still not healed. I'll be fine in half a day😳