The Protagonist Who Traveled Through the Heavens at the Same Time

This book is very good so far and is a rare source of food. The second hypothesis is feasible and the logic is reasonable. The most important thing is that the concept of this book is very suitable for an old bookworm like me. "Clone" time travel flow + protagonist replacement flow, strong! Also, the character of the protagonist is okay. He is not a virgin, nor is he a strongman with some strange setting. He is just an ordinary person with righteous views but also desires and some double standards. Although he is an ordinary person, it is easy to find common ground. However, the introduction is not good. There are people talking about who will be the protagonist in other worlds, leaving suspense in the world of Douluo. I don't know that the reputation of the Douluo theme is polarized now. If I hadn't happened to read a book review and some people complained about it and wanted to see if there was a review by Shen Nong, I almost clicked away. I suggest the author change the introduction. I believe the popularity will get better and better.

Can you please not write about Douluo? I feel sick when I see Douluo.

I want to see the peerless Tang clan Wang Dong, whose father is a loving father and his daughter is filial. I'm sorry, father. Goodbye, my cowardice.

Tang San would scold him at any time. Think about it, you are blowing on the air conditioner, reading novels, eating ice cream, and singing songs, and suddenly the novel is blocked. So the days without Tang San are good days.

Plant one picture and reap thousands of pictures

It's getting boring The author obviously didn't write it right. Even if you learn from the original book 99 World, you know that this kind of multi-verse is not really about writing miscellaneous stories, but focusing on describing certain worlds. You write a few pictures and then jump to another world. It's only 20 or 30 words, and there are more than a dozen worlds. There is only one feeling.

Author, please do it. Don't let me see you writing another book under this account. You're still a stuffy eunuch. That's great.

If you pick a few plots that everyone is interested in and write them in detail, what if you don't expand the plot of the armored warriors, even if Xiao Yan builds an empire on the Dou Qi Continent? It's irresponsible to just follow the original storyline of Zhu Xian and write it randomly.

This book should be called a full-scale erotic biography. The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. Basically, the female protagonist who is pretty is almost sleepy. If I had restrained myself, I wouldn't feel so disgusting.

We can use more Huo Gua perspective. Anyway, Douluo will hardly appear in the later stage. Combat power is too low. So just finish writing it in the early stage. Open up and cheat like crazy. Then there is the plot of Wang Dong's loving father and daughter's filial piety. The original Shrek and the three empires of Old Road were also very unhappy. Get rid of all the unpleasant plots.

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Looking forward to beating Tang San

Is this shit over? D(ŐдŐ๑)

Daily poisoning. . Every day I'm reading and writing.

Hurry up and write Douluo! I want to see Wang Donger say goodbye, I am weak, my father is kind and my son is filial, it is best to add a martial spirit named Signal Ax Or come to the moon

Now the identities of the protagonists are beginning to feel a bit homogeneous, and they have all become a bit over-the-top. If this is the case, it would be better not to write a novel about the same time period, and just write about the astronomical stories.

There is something wrong with this Xiao Yan's character. Although in the original work, Xiao Yan did not take care of the family. A young patriarch was wandering around all day long, just criticizing him, and making enemies of the family. He saw nothing but usefulness. Being a time traveler directly amplifies this shortcoming. Can you still watch it? A lustful street gangster in his late middle school years. The author, take a look for yourself. Can you read the section about Xiao Yan? I have no experience of becoming a loser, and my mood is not satisfactory enough. What is the role of a teacher? No matter how much a medicine man loves me, he must bear the basic responsibility of a teacher, not a grandfather who gives away treasures.

This book is short and short. It may become too late in a while.

There is too little plot in the latter part, and the switching is too fast. It feels like you just tell where the original story is, then say a few words to the chat group, and then change people. I watched it but it felt like I didn't watch it again.

Isn't Xiang Zhili a god?

Refining

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