Qiao Feng Is Proud of That World

What's Qiao Feng's personality? What is Linghu Chong's personality? If it really happens, I'm afraid the whole world will be chasing Linghu. Linghu marries a holy girl from the Demon Cult as his wife, kills his teacher, befriends the Demon Cult Xiang Wentian, and the flower picker Tian Boguang? And what about Qiao Feng? In the finale, he committed suicide without taking action. Whether it was a feud between the country or the family, it was shown to be affectionate and righteous. No one around him is a villain. Ah Zi loves him so much, but what's the result? You still practice swordsmanship? Where is the brain?

Why write about Qiao Feng? Just use a name? If you haven't remembered it yet, what's the point of time travel? 1. If you are afraid that your memory after time travel will be too invincible, you can add a limit, such as what kind of achievements you can achieve and what kind of skills you can unlock. 2. What would Qiao Feng want to do after traveling through time? Do you think that I can travel through time, and whether A'Zhu can travel through time? Through this line of finding A'Zhu, you can improve your skills, unlock skills, discover the hidden clan of the aristocratic family, establish the Five Mountains Sword Sect, and so on. Isn't it also quite interesting? 3. Afraid of having too invincible memory, so that modern people can travel directly, and Golden Finger is set to be Qiao Feng's understanding and talent. 4. Now, if you just create Qiao Feng who has no memory, you don't know how to complain? !

I feel like these evil heretics are so well written that any pretender would have to be at least Yu Canghai's level to be able to barely block them. How many martial arts masters of Yu Canghai's level were there during the Swordsman era. Are there 100?

Without the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, would he still be the same Qiao Feng? I can't accept it

Can this name B be changed?

Write a thousand words and digress thousands of miles. It is said that it is written by a Xiaoao fan, what does the trip to Emei in these chapters have to do with the plot of Xiaoao? If there is no protagonist, how can the few people surrounded by Bai Jiao break the situation? How can Unbreakable echo the storyline of the original novel? Of course the author can be more creative based on the original story, but fan fiction has limitations, and creativity must be constrained by the original work. The framework is there. Furthermore, everyone who has read Jin Yong's novels knows Qiao Feng, but the Qiao Feng in everyone's mind is slightly different. What kind of writing power can portray the Qiao Feng that everyone recognizes? It can be said that using Qiao Feng as the protagonist of the new book is thankless.

The author's writing is actually very good, but the protagonist is not a time traveler, so it's not exciting enough, and it won't become popular. You can look at other martial arts enthusiasts. The writing skills of others are not as good as yours, but the author can learn from them if they have a more relaxed pace.

I read the last outline. Fortunately, the eunuch was early. This kind of original work is better, but the audience is small. If you want to be a fan, but also want to set a high point, it is too difficult. I can only say that most of this platform is fast food culture. It doesn't quite fit the path you mentioned. Enlarge the pattern. For the entire Zhutianliu, I will create some new worlds later, adjust the writing, and the results should be explosive. My humble opinion, just for entertainment.

What's the point of you two bastards crossing each other? It would actually be more interesting to have Qiao Feng cross over to Wu Dalang.

Where is Laozi Ge's insult to Hero Qiao?

Qiao Feng's time travel has nothing to do with Qiao Feng. I just used the name Qiao Feng like this. I don't know how I lost my memory. Maybe the author wanted to write a different Qiao Feng, but other readers saw you writing about Qiao Feng's time travel and became more interested. When they came in, they found that it was not the familiar Qiao Feng. Qiao Feng had time traveled but not completely.

Damn it, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this (dog head. Jpg)

I came here from Zhihu and finished reading it in one go. Here are my personal opinions: 1. It was very good at first, at least that's what I thought when I read it on Zhihu, so I started to finish it. However, the author's writing style is a bit inconsistent, and gradually moves towards fantasy 2. Some unnecessary jokes are not funny, but inappropriate. I personally feel that the author's writing style is closer to the original work, but suddenly a few jokes appear nondescript, and this problem becomes more serious in the later stage 3. The story is similar to Xiao Ao at the beginning. It has nothing to do with it, but you can re-open it if you change the name later. It has nothing to do with Xiaoao. Most of the fan fiction has to be related to the main plot. Of course, this is also related to the author not finishing it. 4. There are too many original novel masters. If one comes out at random, it will overwhelm the original novel characters. How can I put it, it feels weird to me. Many hidden sects have appeared all at once. It's like a person has been practicing martial arts for a lifetime, and then an alien comes and says this is all the people on Earth? 5. The problem of female characters. I personally don't like the character Abai. The plot is too vulgar, and the amnesia trick is too outdated. As a result, the character's behavior before and after is not contrasting with cuteness, but a sense of separation. Female characters are inevitably reduced to pendants of the male protagonist. 6. Emei Miaoyu, I guess the author wrote it based on Yilin, but it is very unreasonable. A nun from the Qingdeng Ancient Buddha has sex there when she meets the protagonist, which gives people a very hungry feeling. This point can be compared to the original novel. After Yilin was rescued by Linghu Chong, she was more grateful than thinking about committing herself to her.

I followed it from Zhihu, but it's not enough to watch.

I'm almost chasing after you. Come on, author.

The author is great, I also followed him from Zhihu! Come on, I like this idea very much. I will definitely become a master of Zongheng Network in the future! Very well written!

What did you write?

Objectively speaking, Linghu Chong has three shares of responsibility for Yue Buqun becoming the father-in-law.