Counter-Invasion of the Heavens: Water Drops in the Face at the Beginning

I finished the latest chapter in one breath overnight, and I can only say nb. The imagination and settings are perfectly harmonious, and the writing is natural. Especially the setting of power is both scientific and metaphysical. Xiaoao's writing is very stable, logical and refreshing, and all the important supporting characters are given great attention. The plot has been changed quite satisfactorily in line with the characters; Currently, Marvel's writing is much better than that of many fan authors who specialize in Marvel. First of all, it is a gentle approach to expand the imagination of various settings in Marvel, not the kind of writing a lot of side stories. It's dry and white, but it inserts character dialogues without any sense of violation. Then, in terms of character settings, it restores the characters in detail. For example, Tony and Parker's scientist characters, other novels will only suddenly ask them to take out a character when needed. The black technology is gone, but their scientific literacy can be really written in the Marvel chapter of this novel, which is really rare; The qualified writing style and the logically rigorous plot make people feel happy and not brainless. I hope it can be maintained in the follow-up and it will definitely become popular.

Keep it up, Kuroko, don't talk.

Ignore the trolls, it's good to continue this rhythm

You're welcome, please try to update. ,

Keep it up, author, and your book will continue easily and naturally.

Change your name 😤 I was removed from your book 4 times, all because of this name. It looks so much like that kind of junk book 😅😅😅

In fact, the author's writing is pretty good. If it were his first book, it would be above the passing mark. Don't be afraid of people scolding you. A newcomer's attention is better than anything else. Also, if there is Cheng Xin in your three-body world, would you kill her? Thank you.

The water droplets are almost at the doorstep. If you travel through martial arts, it is certain that Tai Chi magic can save the earth. All people can practice martial arts just around the corner. Just water droplets are nothing to worry about 😏😏😏😏😏😏

The great Xuantian God or the God of Darkness! Arriving at the United Nations Open Air Conference Representatives from various countries looked at the Asian boy and saw a man wearing silver-gray armor and glowing lights emerging from behind. The man's face was somewhat similar to the boy's and looked at Brother Xiang. Suddenly! A pair of black and colorful wings spread out from the man's back! The wings are getting bigger and bigger! Well, that's not wings, that's an alien space in darkness with endless colors! The man disappeared? The representatives saw a dark giant over 100 meters tall! The dark space also opened its giant eyes! The representatives were extremely panicked! Some prayed to the gods they believed in, and some shouted out that Cthulhu is giving out candy! This is the Old One! Okay, is this a Grammar novel reader? The dark giant made a sound! Listen, mortal! I am an ancient god! He is also the only true god existing in this world! In China, I once had a statue named God Xuantian! I should have taken good care of myself after the war and fell into a deep sleep, but the will of heaven awakened me. Told me about the invasion of evil spirits from another world! (Representatives😭Do you think you are an alien demon? No matter how you look at it, it looks like you?🥶)

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I don't know when it started. There is a popular saying that the martial arts value of Jin Yong's martial arts is getting worse and worse with time. The Deer and the Cauldron is from the Kangxi period of the Qing Dynasty. There is such a paragraph, which describes the first Prajna Hall of Shaolin Temple [Cheng Guan was very proud and said: "It took forty-two years to practice one-finger Zen. Over the more than a thousand years of this sect, Lao Na ranked third." After a pause, he added: "However, Lao Na's internal strength cultivation is mediocre. In terms of finger strength, I am afraid he ranks below seventy." After saying this, he couldn't help but feel depressed. Shaolin Temple has basically never stopped in Jin Yong's world. There are sweeping monks in the Northern Song Dynasty, Jueyuan in the late Southern Song Dynasty, Sandu of Yitian, and Fangsheng Fangzheng in the Xiaoao period. They are either first-class or super first-class. For thousands of years, Shaolin has accumulated so many masters, and Cheng Guan can be ranked among them. His level is above the first-class level even if placed in Tianlong. If you use Shaolin masters to measure the martial arts level of the entire world, even if the martial arts during the Kangxi period was not as good as Tianlong, it would not be said to be the last martial arts.

I read the article about the contained object again, and I feel that this novel is not a Wankai-ryu at all... ① The contained object named God actually knows the protagonist's experience, and what the Wankai is. It is like a different box. The world is inside the box, and the creatures in the box actually know about another box. Unless all the protagonist's time travels are in a big box, so the information called God knows everything in this big box, otherwise there will be too many omniscient and omnipotent people... God Daozu doesn't know how many there are, and there are so many omniscient and omnipotent ones. Are they really all omniscient and omnipotent... ② Main God Space. The Main God Space itself is a derivative of the containment object. It can actually break through the cosmic box and bring Superman and Godzilla to it. Returning to the original universe... Also illustrates one thing, that is, there are thousands of realms in the world of contained objects, and all the worlds that the protagonist has traveled through are within the detection range of the derivative main god space... ③The contained object named God actually calls the protagonist a child, and the protagonist is not a human at all... This contained object is a personified God, and it brings the people in its universe How can we call a child in another universe that is not a human life and call it a child? ④The original rules of the containment object are that if the same person delivers a letter to God twice, God will be angry. The protagonist gave it three times, ignoring the rules, but nothing happened. Why should God be so kind to a life in an outer universe In addition, the protagonist feels that he has been deceived. The God Space itself is a derivative of the notebook contained in it. If the protagonist makes a big fuss in the Peace Society and then leaves, isn't he afraid that someone will use the notebook to create a derivative that is designed to kill the protagonist... There is also the sixth sense, which needs to be maintained in its own setting. There is also a setting in martial arts called: The autumn wind has not moved, and the cicada awakens first. Isn't it the sixth sense? The stronger the six senses, how come the protagonist becomes stronger and more bound by the awakening of the six senses? Maybe he is fooled by God, To sum up, the protagonist is probably God's pleasure..., And all the worlds are derivatives of contained objects... Of course, there is also a possibility that God has analyzed the protagonist's system... So the protagonist can use the derivative main god space Go to other universes... It's scary to think about it...

Just calligraphy like this, but the result is more than 3,700 orders? And he is a new author? It's so scary~ Save your claws, take care of them first🐶

I feel that the rhythm is a bit off. The protagonist's humanity is still preserved too much. He is still a powerful ordinary person. Even if he takes the extreme form of a Madonna, a scientific madman, or a villain, he is stronger than the half-human protagonist now. He can't stand even a little vomit after swallowing the world. Isn't there even a toilet in that world?

In fact, I have already said it from the foundation. The author, your overall writing direction is a bit biased. Maybe the information controller is right, but when it comes to writing novels, especially a novel about the heavens, this path is a bit biased. What readers should want to see is a full and complete ladder of gradual upgrades, rather than a complete ladder. Although this setting sounds cool, the structure inside is very empty, and because this is an astronomical world, containing objects is a very challenging setting for the imagination. Because it is just a small world, it cannot be unfolded at all. It makes people confused and has a feeling of being unclear. Then the author also made a very precise The choice of life is to abandon it in order to pursue a very empty setting. So far, he has gained many abilities. This really shouldn't be like this for a novel. In addition, in recent DC, except for the speed force, the rest is basically water, which is a particularly meaningless chapter. , Author, you really went off track. You should stop and think about the outline carefully before writing again. After all, at the beginning of this book, the chapter progression was very natural, and the details were connected very cleverly. The imagination is also very good, but now it has begun to become ordinary. I hope the author can listen to this opinion.

Author, the quality of the dozen or so photos you have recently updated is really great.

Does the author want to enter the palace? From the time it was put on the shelf to now, I really can't understand it No one really wants to read about the protagonist and the trisolarans, but you keep writing, and it's all out of the sky. What I originally wrote in one stroke has been written for more than ten days, and it has not been included in the next copy If you don't have to write, my suggestion is to cut it off. What you write every day is force-fed and dry, which makes you uncomfortable and the readers even more uncomfortable 😅

My personal evaluation of the chapters I have completed so far is: Main God Chapter > Marvel > Foundation. The beginning of Xiaoao is similar to the martial arts style. It is well written but not consistent with the tone of the book. The Foundation chapter is a bit broken, but the current DC chapter is good. It has the feeling of a combination of the exploration of the fantasy world and the comedy of the end of the world.

A mature book club cannot be without idioms, just like a 3D area cannot be without idioms. I come first, you are so beautiful

One word is cool, without any poison.

It's very well written, but the introduction and title are a bit hard to describe. I passed by it 3.4 Times without even wanting to click in. After reading a little bit, I realized it's a treasure.

Is the absolute martial body given by an ordinary universe? Can it still be used in Marvel? The rules are all different. Besides, even if there is such a thing, it can be regarded as the core authority of the universe! It is equivalent to the rules that make up a world. Can this thing be given to an outsider casually?

Shuidi's face is calm, let me practice martial arts first

Nothing poisonous! ! ! Newcomers listen to me! ! Very nice! ! At least the martial arts chapter is pretty good

I read the latest chapter in one breath, and I still have more to say, because the brothers who crossed out the title of the book can be healthy🙂

Hmm... In fact, from what I saw before I gave up the book, it was very well written... Quite attractive... And there is such a way to justify it! But by the end of Marvel, it was boring, and the three-body stage collapsed... I couldn't stand it anymore, and it seemed like the author's bacteria had been cut off...

Sure enough, the author cut it himself. Maybe this kind of subject is difficult to write about. Even scientists can't understand the issue of latitude.

What to do? Did the author cut it out, or did he bite the bullet and write it down?

When are you going to publish a new book? The idea is very good. I like it very much.

Finished? Marvel collapsed after that. I don't know what the author wanted to write.