Finally Fell in Love with Idol

Criticism from the group of friends: The author's idea is quite good, but he must have thought through it. However, the setting is a bit old-fashioned, and the emotional drama is also quite strange. If nothing else, the author has little experience (he is single); and the writing power is insufficient, so he cannot express the author's inner picture well, but this is a common problem of most new authors, and it will be improved in the future (probably); the last question , could the author not make some abrupt jokes, like "Master is here, please be my disciple". I was really embarrassed when I read it... Generally speaking, as a new author, it is okay. After all, I write about Korean entertainment. It is really difficult to achieve results. It is purely for love. What kind of bicycle do you want? Ruiping is here, fifty cents a line, the author remembers to pay 🤝🤝🤝

This book has platinum status (fifty cents a piece, extra calculations in parentheses)

Well written, keep up the good work.

Fish treasure~

I suggest you write about a hundred chapters first before trying HY.

The author is great, do you have any noodle treasures?

Can I add grapefruit or winter?