My Teacher Convinces Others with Virtue

I feel like it would be much better to write about the Three Kingdoms if you have some foundation. You turned the Three Kingdoms into a fantasy. It's hard to bring over the background of previous book friends. To be honest, the quality of the previous book can be said to be above average among the Three Kingdoms novels. It is not impossible to correct some problems in the next book and write a high-quality Three Kingdoms novel.

Grandma, after reading the pirated version of the book, please support the genuine version of this book.

After reading the author's new book, I talked about my reading experience. The protagonist's beginning is very much like a dream. No matter what he does, he acts first and thinks later. When he breaks out of the prison at the beginning, he acts first and destroys it. When he breaks out later, he acts first. When the big brother comes the next day, he says what he thinks of. The rest of the plot is also done first and then thought of. Although it is all narration and can be regarded as supplementary to the plot, the rhythm of writing is very much like a dream. The protagonist is like a reckless man who does whatever others say and integrates into the world very quickly without the caution, doubts, and temptations of a time traveler. But I doubt my own golden finger, and I don't doubt whether what the native said is right or wrong. I keep following him everywhere. When I say I want to save my father, I lose my mind. The big characters are not written intelligently enough. The comparison of realm strength feels that the destructive power is very small. The protagonist is in the third realm but can't lift 3 tons of things. The protagonist hears others saying he is hungry and realizes that he is hungry immediately. It is very similar to a dream. In the dream, he should be hungry and tired, and then he is really hungry and tired. Too much to say. This way of writing may be the author's habit of not having an outline or details? The basic settings for the opening are written too much and too complicated, and the plot seems to be extremely slow. The author can just write down the words with peace of mind.

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The style of Snake Play has changed a lot, and it always gives us some surprises.

New book, don't write about the Three Kingdoms anymore, Conspiracy is good to read

The transformation is not that easy. The author is pretty good at writing historical novels, so why turn to fantasy? After writing about the Three Kingdoms, you can write about other dynasties!

It seems okay, there aren't many obtrusive points, but I felt weighed down by the title of the book.