Zhu Yuanzhang in the Cellar

After looking at the current writing, I am still very satisfied, but I kind of want to propose that I will definitely write a big chapter about crossing the East China Sea and expedition to Japan. I think it must not be possible to follow the current logic, right? Fighting requires famous masters, especially during Zhu Yuanzhang's lifetime, Japan was still fiercely fighting for its famous names. The Daimyos from Kyushu and this week are the ones who have close contact with China, among which the Ouchi family is the most successful. (This is the family that caused the Ningbo Tribute Incident in real life. They wanted to be called the funniest wine shop and went crazy. They were dissatisfied that they were not sitting on the right hand of the eunuch. They grabbed weapons and hacked the shogunate's administrator to death. Then they burned the dock and kidnapped the eunuch. Finally, they encountered a shipwreck and floated to North Korea where they were kidnapped by fishermen to collect the reward.) Japanese pirates at that time, more It was the fishermen from Fujian, Vietnam, and Kyushu, Japan who went to sea to engage in sideline business. For the Ming Dynasty, what was more annoying than robbery was their smuggling, so the Ming Dynasty created something called Zhuyin, which can also be called Kanhe, and asked Japan to take this legal trade, and then... What situation was Japan in at that time? Similar to the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties in the Central Plains, the killing of envoys mentioned in the book was the last madness of the Pelican Emperor lineage. It seemed that the country was about to be destroyed, but it would not make it easy for the opponent. Because he knew that the Ming Dynasty did not know what was going on in Japan. Yes, the Ming Dynasty did not react until Kanhefu was robbed. "You are a bit bulky in the Japanese king." So even if you want to rob the gold mine in Jiali, don't use the excuse of killing the envoy, because if you fight, "Where are you, Prince Huailiang?" This kind of thing, I hope it can be more consistent with historical data. Fighting must be fought, but it must be replaced. It is useless to kill a chicken with a knife in person. In the early Ming Dynasty, Japan was not even nominally unified. A declaration of war was sent. The Otomo family and the Jesuits who landed in Kyushu said, "My lord, what are you doing?" Then kill or leave? Kill, it's very... Let's go to Honshu, and then the Ouchi family "Sir, please find Prince Huairiang. He has already wiped out the joy of the whole family, and those who are still alive have become monks." Anticlimactic and a tail-end What we are thinking is, instead of launching a large-scale expedition across the sea to conquer a family that has disappeared, why not break Japan's national gate that was not broken until the end of the 18th century? You don't need to go to Japan, there is a Portuguese Jesuit in Fujian, issue a few trade warrants, and the Daimyo of Kyushu will be your dog. Remotely control the Japanese Daimyos and eventually become a market and exporter of raw materials, and Japan and the Ryukyu Kingdom in Southeast Asia are also strung together into an island chain. All of a sudden, the coastal defenses of the Ming Dynasty were like iron barrels Finally, let's talk about Japanese pirates. These things are deserters from the Japanese Civil War, farmers who can't survive, and smugglers from Vietnam and the Ming Dynasty.

I hope there is a door to meet Zhao Jun

How did Gandhi become a Mahatma? I think he was the one who sold his hooks to men all over India.

The protagonist's source of funds is all from Ming Dynasty gold exchanged for modern currency, which is unsustainable. Generally speaking, the protagonists in time travel novels often define themselves as traitors, buying and selling to gain profits. Individuals may be able to do this, but the Ming Dynasty is a unified feudal dynasty, and the funds required for him to complete the basic industrial revolution are huge. This is no more than the five-year plan at the beginning of the founding of the People's Republic of China, and it cannot be solved by reselling gold. The protagonist is a descendant of Zhu Yuanzhang. What makes him different from other protagonists in time-travel novels is that he can use the emperor to mobilize the power of a country. The Ming Dynasty was a feudal dynasty with a vast land, abundant resources, and a large population. The author could hire the skilled craftsmen of the Ming Dynasty to manufacture high-end handicrafts and luxury goods for sale to the modern era, such as processed high-end medicinal materials, high-end tea, high-end animal furs, high-end fabrics (such as Sichuan brocade, etc.), High-end jewelry, high-end calligraphy and painting, high-end Ming Dynasty clothing, high-end carvings, classical furniture, etc. If the rich have strong spending power, the protagonist's leather case company can completely transform into a luxury goods trading company.

Author, look at your book review section. It was so good at the beginning. What can you write that is not good? If you don't write about it, why would you dare to write like that? ! The last one has been written like this. It was originally written as a historical article. There are obviously so many stories to write about Hongwu. From the perspective of a farmer or a merchant, we can see the changes that Pig's Feet brought to the Ming Dynasty from the perspective of various classes. Also, Pig's Feet is a true feudal filial son. He talks about being the spokesperson of capital, but in fact In fact, I am working for Lao Zhu honestly. Can you please send it and write it well? To be honest, group portraits are the most suitable for this book, but you chose to write it in a film and television style. The temporary bad jokes cannot cover up this book. You are too conservative. You obviously have an amazing start. I guess this book will not get as high a score as your last book in the end.

Who is the head teacher in these two hooks?

Look like Zhu Yuanzhang in the brothel...🙂

As an adult, when I read the novels that I found interesting and imaginative when I was a child, I feel speechless. The tax department, customs department, police department, network surveillance department, and transportation department will all stop me from dreaming of becoming a bad guy from both worlds.

What would happen if Zhu Yuanzhang didn't show how Korean Smecta hacked them? 😏😏😏😏😏

The writing is really good The Zhu Yuanzhang in history should be the kind of sinister and vicious person The Zhu Yuanzhang written in this novel is good In other novels, when Zhu Yuanzhang heard that the Manchu Qing Dynasty was established, he looked like the sky was falling. In fact, the ancients did not have much national complex. Zhu Yuanzhang was disgusted at most.

Bad signs have begun. Writing about the Ming Dynasty has to focus on the Anti-Japanese War. Forensics can easily go astray.

From the looks of it, although there are some problems with the design at the beginning, it is a nitpicking type. It is the kind of problem that will occur unless you have experienced it personally. It does not affect it. Generally speaking, it is 9 points out of 10 at the beginning. But Chapter 18 was poisonous to me. The protagonist, a novelist, teaches Zhu Yuanzhang how to choose an emperor, which is a bit outrageous. Does it highlight whether Zhu Yuanzhang is stupid or the protagonist is smart? Just throw the history books to Lao Zhu, who knows more than you. Secondly, how do you know that the history books are completely consistent with the actual situation? There is no comparison between Zhu Di and Zhu Biao as to who is more capable, but it is not something that your protagonist can compare. The protagonist must have just read the history books and checked some information to conclude that Zhu Biao, a prince who died young, is more suitable than Zhu Di. The protagonists are not writing novels at home. At least they are all division-level cadres. Just because you read history books does not mean you understand this person. Just knowing some deeds may not be true. The protagonist dares to preach to Zhu Yuanzhang about choosing the emperor without having seen anyone before. Why? There is no problem in choosing Zhu Biao and Zhu Di. The problem is that the protagonist teaches Zhu Yuanzhang. I'll take a look at the rest. I'll make another post before subscribing. Currently, not counting 18 chapters, it's 9 points! Chapter 18 is minus 8 points. I will check it out after Chapter 18. If there is no big problem, I will recommend it.

As the title states, the biggest difficulty in this kind of book is to deal with the relationship between the protagonist and Zhu Yuanzhang. You can't write that Zhu Yuanzhang bows to the protagonist when he sees him. After all, Lao Zhu conquers the world with a bowl. Writing this way will destroy the character. But on the other hand, if you write that the protagonist is controlled by Lao Zhu at every turn, the readers will not be happy. After all, the protagonist has all the modern knowledge. Who do you think the emperor is? It would be better if it was a soul time travel, but like this book, it is a time travel between two realms. If you, Zhu Yuanzhang, dare to threaten me, the worst case scenario is that I will report it to the country and fight you to the death. Why should I grovel in front of you and accept the anger of your feudal emperor from hundreds of years ago?

This book is very logical, but if there is this two-way time travel, I think modern people will have to completely abandon modernity, otherwise everything in ancient times will be unattractive to modern ordinary people. The author writes about power in ancient times and explains it very well. If you want to be a dog, you are not allowed to do so. But the ordinary people written by the author are also very bad at money. From the beginning of the protagonist's family history and his father's police friends, I thought he could exchange gold for money. The latest chapter, the result is ancient understanding? ? Could it be that ancient people and ordinary things would not have traces of the passage of time when they traveled through time, but things like Tang Sancai and Song Qinghua would? If you take a Tang Sancai from more than 600 years ago, is it true? ?

There is another suggestion, don't be too angry. The Japanese plot of the veteran is very conflicting and contradictory, so you shouldn't talk about it at that time.

There must have been a lot of people trying to persuade me to quit at the beginning. The description at the beginning was full of loopholes and was so unreasonable. Moreover, it took so much time to just explain the background of the story, which was too troublesome. The main reason is that he actually reached a consensus so quickly with a group of people who have no modern moral concepts and used force to force the protagonist to kill someone. The protagonist readily accepted it and did not resist and break away when the opportunity came later. Directly persuaded to quit

The author's thinking about the social system is fully reflected in the book. This desire for expression is suitable for a platform with a relatively high level and a strong political atmosphere. However, online articles should still be based on enjoyment. It is easy for readers to get tired of long and lengthy texts that output social speculations. However, the author is very good at writing about the collision and impact of the two worlds in ancient times and modern times. This leads to readers being very confused. They want to read some interesting plots, but they are afraid that you will always write long political stories. It is a pity to abandon such plots as tasteless. Although online articles do need depth, online articles need more income. If you are high-minded and melodramatic, it is destined to be difficult to achieve success. The author is an old bookworm and an old author. I believe that the author himself knows these truths. It is up to the author himself to make the choice. The subject matter is very good and the plot is also very good. However, it was really difficult to keep reading the last book at the end of the book. I hope this book will not make the same mistake again.

Zhu Yuanzhang in the bathroom, Zhu Yuanzhang in the kitchen, and Zhu Yuanzhang in the bedroom. . .

The description of the characters is very good, but when it comes to the exchange of materials and industries between the two worlds, it seems that the author is a bit dreamy. It will take 30 years to complete informatization, even if it requires full support from the state. What's more, you can only move large quantities of materials in and out by yourself. Just because you haven't been exposed to something doesn't necessarily mean you don't have it. No one cares, just where a worker comes from and the protagonist cannot solve it. Of course, if the author subconsciously thinks that letting Ming officials and the Zhu family drive cars, use mobile phones and computers is informatization, then I didn't say it.

First, the stone tablet can only wear people, not objects! 1. Assuming that only people with the blood of the old Zhu family can travel back and forth to the Ming Dynasty, and they cannot bring items with them, but can only take away knowledge, that would be okay, and more plots can be written. The two of them are slowly building the Ming Empire, where the sun never sets😏 2. Assuming that anyone can travel back to the Ming Dynasty, and cannot take items with them, but can only take away knowledge, then some people will write about it. Lao Zhu can give money and power to talented people. In modern times, there is serious involution and there are many talented people. You give him gold to settle his family, and then take him back to ancient times to build the Ming Dynasty. Although Lao Zhu has a bad temper and likes to behead, there are many people who want to take a gamble. 😏 Two, the stone tablet can not only wear people, but can also wear things! Suppose, if this stone tablet can be worn with items! ! Then it will be difficult to suppress the plot! ! It's very simple. Lao Zhu has a lot of gold in his hands. If he takes it back to modern times, what can't Xiao Zhu buy? (Don't talk about checking for gold. This thing is in small batches. If you melt it and sell it, who can know its origin? There are a lot of second-hand recyclers in the country rushing to get it. P. S. Antiques are not good, now they will check the origin, and require inheritance records to prove that the inheritance is in order. Otherwise, if you say that the origin is unknown and peddle national treasures, you will directly enter the game.) 1. According to the golden finger theory, the stone tablet is the condition for triggering time travel! ! So Xiao Zhu, if you go abroad directly with the stone tablet and can travel back and forth abroad, let alone rice, flour, grain and oil, there are airplanes and artillery. Look at the recent wars between Big Goose and Little Goose. Everything is sold there. As for medicines and doctors, there are a lot of them in Europe and the United States, so Lao Zhu's wife, children, and grandchildren don't have to die. Secondly, when we have food, we don't have to suffer for the people. Thirdly, there were guns and cannons, plus the iron-blooded army of the early Ming Dynasty. Come on, now you can dominate the world faster than riding a rocket😂 2. According to the title of the book, the cellar + stone tablet are the conditions for triggering time travel! ! Then Xiao Zhu sells the gold to raise initial funds, and then he can buy a lot of domestic daily necessities, industrial products, medicines and other basic materials. It will not be difficult for Ming Dynasty to directly enter the electric age. As for contraband firearms, gunpowder, cannons, etc., There are a lot of drawings and tutorials on the Internet that teach you how to make nuclear bombs by hand. As long as the Ming Dynasty gives priority to building steel plants and has high-quality steel, no guns can be made. Xiao Zhu Ant moves in modern times. It is not difficult to buy some accessories from the east and some accessories from the west, send them to Daming through the cellar, and then slowly assemble and process them. 😂 But no matter what, as long as materials can travel through time, development will inevitably be rapid, and it will be difficult to suppress the plot. It's okay if you press it once or twice, but it will be uncomfortable for the reader if you press it multiple times. Because in modern society, enough money can buy almost 99% of things, and modern knowledge is cheap. There is too much knowledge that can be found online and in libraries. If you are willing to poach people and bring other talents to build the Ming Dynasty, the speed will be even faster. 😂 So, it's only chapter 4. Let's guess, this Ming Dynasty can only pass through people? Or can you wear people+things? 🤭

A book with great potential, but it is too didactic and sometimes does not feel like a dialogue between ancient people and modern people. He was too eager to explain the plot, and filled the dialogue with a lot of historical information. Who would normally speak like this, it would be a bit distorted and long-winded.

Why are officials called "sir" in historical novels? Before the mid-Qing Dynasty, "adult" was rarely used alone as an official title. Pu Songling's "Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio" mentioned that during the Kangxi period, there was no convention for the title of "adult" for officials, and it was not until Yongzheng that it gradually became common. "Sir" only became a common honorific in the middle and late Qing Dynasty. Fang Junshi's "Jiao Xuan Sui Lu" pointed out that during the Kangxi period, non-imperial officials and even governors were not called "Sir". It was not until Yongzheng that calling officials "Sir" gradually became common. In the Ming Dynasty, "adult" was used to refer to senior officials only in a few specific scenes and in individual areas, but it was not an official or mainstream usage.

I think it's better to restrict it at the beginning. Now only Zhu Yunfeng can travel, not even his parents. If the country finds out, it will have to rely on the protagonist to communicate with the Ming Dynasty.

I'm speechless. The author really didn't dare to mention the Kong family of Shi Xiu surrendering to the watch. The interest of this book was instantly halved. Should he co-author Shi Xiu surrender to the watch?

I think anyone is qualified to kill Shang Kexi, but the people from Lao Zhu's family are not worthy.

Zhu Yuanzhang and Zhu Di traveled to the protagonist's house and killed the dog thief who was stealing the protagonist's dog. The protagonist had already called the police before, and the police were on their way. The protagonist asked Zhu Yuanzhang and Zhu Di to pretend to be dog thieves and let the police arrest them. The dog thief's car is still at the scene. Two people without ID cards, no driver's license, and no social connections. The author said that if Zhu Yuanzhang and Zhu Di pretend to be crazy and act stupid, they can fool the police and let them go. The police are so good, they don't even have to work themselves, they just cooperate with the protagonist.

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It is said that Nv Chongba was exiled from Huangjue Temple (Ganye Temple): The little nun was only twenty-eight years old, and her hair was cut off by her master in her youth. I am a girl, I am not a man.

In fact, the author has a very thorough understanding of the feudal period, which is much better than that of Xiaobai Wen. He knows that the starting point of the biggest productivity leap in the feudal period was grain, and he knows about breeding and selection. Food has made a step forward into the electric age. But just because it was too thorough, there was nothing new after the transformation during the Hongwu period, and it fell into the cliché of taking Zhu Yuanzhang and the ancestors of the past dynasties to the future generations and the Ming Dynasty to slap them in the face. In fact, we should design a twist. Boss Zhu and the protagonist unexpectedly return to their old job of begging, so as to add a twist to the story. After all, productivity is crushing the feudal society, but it can end neatly without continuing, which is very worthy of the readers.

Lao Lao's thoughts after reading this book. What makes me most uncomfortable is the Zhu Yuanzhang line. The author was too timid in writing it. Every time he traveled to the world of other emperors, he would either show his face to calm the situation or solve the problem quickly. For example, when meeting Zhu Di, he would make a personal show of his sage. When meeting Chongzhen and Zhu Qizhen, he would either stage a coup or arrest people from thousands of miles away. The other emperors had no power to fight back. To put it bluntly, the author seems to always think that since they are all named Zhu, they have to save face for each other and keep everyone in harmony. But this is completely contradictory to the previous plot! At the beginning, the protagonist and Zhu Yuanzhang tested each other and were wary of each other. The tense feeling of tension is obviously the biggest highlight of this book. As a result, everything behind it disappeared and turned directly into a tender scene, which made me shake my head. As for the plot, it was so exciting when I wrote about the battle against Saibei, the conquest of Yunnan, and the attack on Japan. Especially the part about the battle against Japan made me excited. As a result, I stopped writing about expansion and stopped abruptly. It's understandable that I couldn't write the modern part. After all, there are creative restrictions. To be honest, I don't want to find fault, after all, they are all booked. But this book gave me the feeling that it hit the mark. The beginning was amazing, but the end was completely unfinished. I felt a little disappointed after spending so much money to read it.