Amber and the Mage Lord

I didn't expect there to be fans of Amber Sword, I miss you so much

If there are not enough readers, if the number is less than 100 by the end of the month, and it cannot be put on the shelves, the book will have to be cut. Readers who think it's okay, please turn to the last chapter and stick with it until the end of the month. Thank you, your support is the motivation for me to continue writing.

I haven't read it yet. I'd like to give you a suggestion. Change the name and introduction. The Sword of Amber is too niche. People who don't know it probably won't be interested in reading the content. I only know the title of the book is Mage, but I don't see the attraction in the introduction. Make sure to make the introduction more attractive so that the content can be understood regardless of whether you know Amber or not.

I've read Chapter 35, and it's pretty average in terms of writing and plot. Especially the emotional line, it's better not to write it. Then Brando didn't tell which one it was. Although Kohaku is bad at the end, he still starts strong. As a fan of Kohaku, this comparison doesn't seem good. Come on, look forward to the next book

The Amber Sword was okay at the beginning, but it was terrible at the end, with all kinds of unbelievable hooks popping up out of nowhere, with no foreshadowing. The protagonist was always entangled in self-motivation. It was so painful that I wouldn't read this book because of its name.

Let me go, Amber Sword fan

Amber Sword fan, please support me

Is this a eunuch

I really can't stand it. You analyze it from a real-life perspective and then analyze it from a game perspective. You explain it mentally again and the other supporting characters' inner perspective again… How do you continue to watch this?

Welcome to read. If you have added it to favorites, please follow up and read. This is very important. It won't matter after it is put on the shelves. Please follow up and read before it is put on the shelves. Thank you.

Even if you can't learn the style of Queen Jiu Yao, you still need to get the planeswalker card. Brando feels better as a pure swordsman. I feel that the planeswalker is not very suitable for him. Don't learn the style of Queen Jiu Yao in element space. It is better to learn the flash sword.

The background is pretty big even if I'm not lazy. What should the protagonist do in the later stage? Some things have been decided by default.

It's not written properly. The progress was too fast and no details were written down.

Make Eruin great again

Come on, Amber Sword fan, the writing is very good, I have voted for the recommendation.

I would like to make a suggestion, can we talk less about flashbacks in the future? It's a bit hard to say...

Dear book friends, who still remembers where Yan Castle is? Or a chapter describing where it is.

Is the author a fan of Fei Yan? But his reputation is already bad

Ah, I finally found a Kohaku fanfic, but it's gone now? The author should not give up 😭😭😭

Alas, the book still needs to be maintained. The updates are too slow. Just wait. It will take three to five months to read and then you can enjoy it.

Please change the cover, this man is too ugly, as if Africa has not fully evolved.

The good news is: the collection has exceeded 3,000 (applause, congratulations). The bad news is: the follow-up reading is still less than 100. Siskin.

Amber Sword is okay, but I hate the card

I like reading Lords stories. This is an abnormal lord. Still selling dog meat on sheep's head.

Sword of Amber, alas, west Huan is in trouble, the early stage is really great.

After reading a few chapters, I feel a bit confused. Especially the simulation, I really don't know how to describe it. Also, the battlefield experience and general levels feel too confusing.

1. Didn't write a game with a wide range of players 2. Rebirth plot, must write a non-repetitive story, otherwise it will be defeated 3. The writing style is more refined and bland 4. Lack of temptation, mystery, crisis or anxiety that runs through the main line 5. Write more to attract the audience, and the more you add, the more you add.

The worst thing about writing for novices, and the worst thing about jumping up and down monsters. Xuanxian fighting - one by one, learning is too much World setting - Thief Girl Small chapter outline setting, Chapter 33, finishing a short story - three days and two sleeps These great gods all have something to say.