Pioneering the Information Age in the Hokage World

I have read more than 20 chapters so far. Here are my thoughts. The author has a good idea. The goal of changing the ninja world through the Internet of Everything is also very ambitious and can support the plot. However, the specific changes have not been written at this stage. The poisonous points that I personally think are, one is going to the appointment to see Danzo, knowing the danger but still going there, and being unable to defeat him even though he was there, and the Aburame insect memorized part of his chakra. The most important thing is that there are no benefits at all. I can tolerate you saying it is high risk and high reward, but it would be outrageous for the protagonist to go there with no benefits and only pure risk! The second is the inner monologue of an encounter with Naruto. Naruto is living a miserable life, but the protagonist understands the village's behavior and lists some reasons to support it. Please, I really can't understand a word. Is it difficult for the third generation to block the news? Is it difficult to block the news and tell the villagers that he is the son of a hero? This is completely pua for this kid! The protagonist is still empathizing with himself as an orphan at this time. Why are you envious of Naruto's situation? ? I thought he would look good after surviving the Danzo period, but he is still too young... But I have a good brain, so I plan to cultivate it and see if it works. My personal opinion is for reference.

Danzo asked you to go see him, and you agreed. I thought it was the clone or Ye Cang who went there, but I didn't expect it was the original body. If he asked you to go, just go. Is there any benefit? Come on, I'll withdraw

Only a forum with no text, how attractive is it? Without the mall, natural people can typeset ninjutsu scrolls and upload transactions. You only need to pay transaction intermediary fees.

What the hell was the first time you met Mei Terumi? Although it is not stated clearly, I feel that the protagonist smells like a loser, unable to walk when he sees a woman, and keeping his hands on everything 😅

The theme of this book is novel, but there are many problems, such as the protagonist of a diaosi style. Nowadays, no one likes to read the protagonist of a diaosi style. It would be better to change to a knowledgeable ordinary person. The second point is that meaningless things are used to enrich the plot, such as the meeting with Danzo. Danzo knows everything about him, and he still goes to meet him. The third point is that the protagonist's IQ is not good. If diaosi is innocent and ignorant, then a lack of IQ means a lack of brains. As for why the IQ is not good, everyone who has seen it can feel it.

Get rid of Konoha plagiarism and redundancy. The protagonist is for the amount of chakra, which does not need to be widely spread and can gradually become stronger. The liver interconnection function is unnecessary and redundant. The Internet has an unlimited function information transmission function, and the Mist ninja has to use it. Cooperating with the Mist ninja is redundant, fighting the Mizukage is redundant, and interfering in the internal affairs of other villages is redundant. It has the content of teasing the fourth Mizukage for self-pleasure. There is no need to argue with Konoha about plagiarism. It should have been set up from the beginning so that plagiarism is impossible and the author should be given the appearance of a modern corporate business competition. The protagonist saves Shiro and intervenes in the plot. Shiro's mother becomes a servant, intervenes in the Kong Ninja, transforms the fortress, and defeats the Kong Ninja leader after maxing it out. The protagonist is arrogant about the author, and the plot begins to become inexplicable. Yesterday's eunuch, the update was delayed, and there was no commitment in the end, which also proves that the author has no ideas. This book has no outline. It was written incorrectly since Leaving Konoha. The protagonist left Konoha and went on a long journey. I don't know what to do with the original plot. The author was too greedy and failed to write every character well. The protagonist himself was also very empty. The only Uzuki he wrote was lost and he refused to go to the harem. Shisui didn't know what to do with it, so he did some boring work of handing out leaflets. It is said that the protagonist is trying to change the ninja world, but he has no intention of doing so. It is fundamental to let most civilians use the Internet to learn ninjutsu to transform the world. The Infinity Scroll is a pass, but if civilians have no money and cannot refine chakra, how can they get it? Isn't it still a tool for nobles and daimyo to enjoy themselves? If you increase your strength in the Ninja Duel Arena, you will have more chakra to continue surfing the Internet. Isn't it true that the strong, the weak, and the weak are still awesome? The meaning of the Internet's unlimited distance is that except for ninja wars, you can't do bad things near my village, otherwise I will send you messages every minute to beat you. Just like Itachi and Kakashi went to Kirigakure territory to cause trouble, they would have died without the protagonist's rescue, but they might die because of the protagonist. Infinite distance chat has changed the ninja world, and the protagonist does not need to do extra things at all, so Konoha's plagiarism is simply a garbage plot, forcing the protagonist to constantly update. Information can be transmitted regardless of distance, but ninjas cannot. From this perspective, the ninja world is actually at peace. Taking the analogy of Konoha's development, with infinite distance, the villages are getting bigger and bigger, and the villages don't even need ninja defense. They only need to go out to spy and prevent the army. Therefore, the battle pattern has become a big war, recovery, and war recovery. Ninja wars are constantly happening, because small battles are useless, and they cannot cut off the opponent's territory and resources. From this point of view, the protagonist should join Akatsuki, or establish his own organization. Akatsuki saves a lot of money with your intelligence, and chakra is no longer a restriction. Or become a high-level intelligence agent in Konoha. As long as there are people in every village, the information will not be exposed in person. Intelligence dealer is the most suitable route for the protagonist, so there is no need to leave Konoha. It's really not interesting to write it like this.

The idea is very good, but the author's writing skills are too poor, and his thoughts are very childish. There are constant small poisons and big poisons in every ten or twenty chapters. It is recommended that those who want to read it lose their minds and read it again.

The idea is good, but it is a castle on the beach. What is the foundation of your Internet? Chakra, and then how does chakra come from? Chakra contains the will of the Six Paths Sage Ten-Tails Otsutsuki Kaguya and others. Who can be sure that there is no backdoor to chakra. If there is a backdoor, all you create is just a wedding dress for her.

Why are you so close to Kirigakure and your identity is discovered? How can you remain neutral? What's the benefit of exposing your identity? Apart from letting you pick up girls, won't your butt become even more crooked after doing so? Terumi Mei is the kind of person who is devoted to you wholeheartedly? I will definitely betray your information in the future. How much moral level do you expect from a ninja?

There is a flaw in this book, that is, the protagonist is actually a kind-hearted person? What the hell, this development path obviously follows chaotic neutrality or absolute neutrality. What the hell is this?