I Opened up the Information Age in the World of Naruto

It's not enough. It's not enough. Please update more. The foreigner next door saw it and thought I looked down on it 😡

I have read more than 20 chapters so far. Here are my thoughts. The author has a good idea. The goal of changing the ninja world through the Internet of Everything is also very ambitious and can support the plot. However, the specific changes have not been written at this stage. The poisonous points that I personally think are, one is going to the appointment to see Danzo, knowing the danger but still going there, and being unable to defeat him even though he was there, and the Aburame insect memorized part of his chakra. The most important thing is that there are no benefits at all. I can tolerate you saying it is high risk and high reward, but it would be outrageous for the protagonist to go there with no benefits and only pure risk! The second is the inner monologue of an encounter with Naruto. Naruto is living a miserable life, but the protagonist understands the village's behavior and lists some reasons to support it. Please, I really can't understand a word. Is it difficult for the third generation to block the news? Is it difficult to block the news and tell the villagers that he is the son of a hero? This is completely pua for this kid! The protagonist is still empathizing with himself as an orphan at this time. Why are you envious of Naruto's situation? ? I thought he would look good after surviving the Danzo period, but he is still too young... But I have a good brain, so I plan to cultivate it and see if it works. My personal opinion is for reference.

Danzo asked you to go see him, and you agreed. I thought it was the clone or Ye Cang who went there, but I didn't expect it was the original body. If he asked you to go, just go. Is there any benefit? Come on, I'll withdraw

Only a forum with no text, how attractive is it? Without the mall, natural people can typeset ninjutsu scrolls and upload transactions. You only need to pay transaction intermediary fees.

What the hell was the first time you met Mei Terumi? Although it is not stated clearly, I feel that the protagonist smells like a loser, unable to walk when he sees a woman, and keeping his hands on everything 😅

Get rid of Konoha plagiarism and redundancy. The protagonist is for the amount of chakra, which does not need to be widely spread and can gradually become stronger. The liver interconnection function is unnecessary and redundant. The Internet has an unlimited function information transmission function, and the Mist ninja has to use it. Cooperating with the Mist ninja is redundant, fighting the Mizukage is redundant, and interfering in the internal affairs of other villages is redundant. It has the content of teasing the fourth Mizukage for self-pleasure. There is no need to argue with Konoha about plagiarism. It should have been set up from the beginning so that plagiarism is impossible and the author should be given the appearance of a modern corporate business competition. The protagonist saves Shiro and intervenes in the plot. Shiro's mother becomes a servant, intervenes in the Kong Ninja, transforms the fortress, and defeats the Kong Ninja leader after maxing it out. The protagonist is arrogant about the author, and the plot begins to become inexplicable. Yesterday's eunuch, the update was delayed, and there was no commitment in the end, which also proves that the author has no ideas. This book has no outline. It was written incorrectly since Leaving Konoha. The protagonist left Konoha and went on a long journey. I don't know what to do with the original plot. The author was too greedy and failed to write every character well. The protagonist himself was also very empty. The only Uzuki he wrote was lost and he refused to go to the harem. Shisui didn't know what to do with it, so he did some boring work of handing out leaflets. It is said that the protagonist is trying to change the ninja world, but he has no intention of doing so. It is fundamental to let most civilians use the Internet to learn ninjutsu to transform the world. The Infinity Scroll is a pass, but if civilians have no money and cannot refine chakra, how can they get it? Isn't it still a tool for nobles and daimyo to enjoy themselves? If you increase your strength in the Ninja Duel Arena, you will have more chakra to continue surfing the Internet. Isn't it true that the strong, the weak, and the weak are still awesome? The meaning of the Internet's unlimited distance is that except for ninja wars, you can't do bad things near my village, otherwise I will send you messages every minute to beat you. Just like Itachi and Kakashi went to Kirigakure territory to cause trouble, they would have died without the protagonist's rescue, but they might die because of the protagonist. Infinite distance chat has changed the ninja world, and the protagonist does not need to do extra things at all, so Konoha's plagiarism is simply a garbage plot, forcing the protagonist to constantly update. Information can be transmitted regardless of distance, but ninjas cannot. From this perspective, the ninja world is actually at peace. Taking the analogy of Konoha's development, with infinite distance, the villages are getting bigger and bigger, and the villages don't even need ninja defense. They only need to go out to spy and prevent the army. Therefore, the battle pattern has become a big war, recovery, and war recovery. Ninja wars are constantly happening, because small battles are useless, and they cannot cut off the opponent's territory and resources. From this point of view, the protagonist should join Akatsuki, or establish his own organization. Akatsuki saves a lot of money with your intelligence, and chakra is no longer a restriction. Or become a high-level intelligence agent in Konoha. As long as there are people in every village, the information will not be exposed in person. Intelligence dealer is the most suitable route for the protagonist, so there is no need to leave Konoha. It's really not interesting to write it like this.

The theme of this book is novel, but there are many problems, such as the protagonist of a diaosi style. Nowadays, no one likes to read the protagonist of a diaosi style. It would be better to change to a knowledgeable ordinary person. The second point is that meaningless things are used to enrich the plot, such as the meeting with Danzo. Danzo knows everything about him, and he still goes to meet him. The third point is that the protagonist's IQ is not good. If diaosi is innocent and ignorant, then a lack of IQ means a lack of brains. As for why the IQ is not good, everyone who has seen it can feel it.

The idea is very good, but the author's writing skills are too poor, and his thoughts are very childish. There are constant small poisons and big poisons in every ten or twenty chapters. It is recommended that those who want to read it lose their minds and read it again.

The idea is good, but it is a castle on the beach. What is the foundation of your Internet? Chakra, and then how does chakra come from? Chakra contains the will of the Six Paths Sage Ten-Tails Otsutsuki Kaguya and others. Who can be sure that there is no backdoor to chakra. If there is a backdoor, all you create is just a wedding dress for her.

Why are you so close to Kirigakure and your identity is discovered? How can you remain neutral? What's the benefit of exposing your identity? Apart from letting you pick up girls, won't your butt become even more crooked after doing so? Terumi Mei is the kind of person who is devoted to you wholeheartedly? I will definitely betray your information in the future. How much moral level do you expect from a ninja?

There is a flaw in this book, that is, the protagonist is actually a kind-hearted person? What the hell, this development path obviously follows chaotic neutrality or absolute neutrality. What the hell is this?

Well, author, you obviously have such good ideas and can write in depth, why do you have to deal with plots that Kishimoto couldn't explain clearly in the original work?

Why can only the protagonist be developed? Are you special

As for Naruto, the only explanation for the Third Generation is that the Third Generation deliberately allowed Naruto to be isolated by the civilians, but at the same time tacitly allowed the Ninja clan children (Shikamaru, Hinata, etc.) To get close to Naruto. The purpose was to make the Jinchuriki become the Jinchuriki of the Ninja clan, not the civilian ninja, or even the Jinchuriki of all Konoha.

I can't help but remind the author - the chakra extraction method has never been an object of control, and the public has always been with it. You don't need to look at anything else, just look at the example of the ninja school: Regardless of the source, the school accepts even war orphans. Students have to learn how to refine chakra after entering the school. It is just a public required course there. Anyone who has entered has learned it. If they have not graduated or retired, is there some kind of curse seal that prohibits them from speaking out? But the Akatsuki organization also knew that no one cared about Jiraiya's advice, and Orochimaru just thought it was a waste of time and didn't care at all. Don't you think that the school will not assess whether a person can refine chakra at all, but just take the teaching exam to graduate? Even if you take a step back, the school must first test whether it can be refined before recruiting people - so if orphans can verify whether they can refine something, is there any need to impose a technical blockade? ———— And from the original work, we know for sure that chakra exists in everyone's body, including awakening, in various ways. I believe that no one with a normal IQ would be able to spend so much effort on such a meaningless and ineffective blockade... ———— Another example is Uchiha Izumi. She didn't live in Konoha at all. She was taken to Konoha by the Uchiha clan after awakening her "ninja talent". This can show that "ninja talent" is what everyone thinks is the criterion for becoming a ninja - this is also clearly stated by Xiao Li in the original work. Xiao Li lacks the ability to "guide and cast ninjutsu" and is judged to be unsuitable. He can only continue to learn only by meeting Akai - so what if he drops out of school? Is it possible that Konoha wants to send someone here to brainwash and erase memories? So "having ninja talents" is the biggest gap between civilians and ninjas - then the question is, do ninjas monopolize ninja talents? Just look at whether the ninja schools running in various countries are recruiting students for civilians, and you will know the answer... Unless you deny civilian ninjas from the root, you can draw the conclusion that "ninjas consciously block the chakra extraction method".

I really like the subject matter, but the author writes some plots like a piece of shit, like it's stuck in my throat, and I'm afraid of giving it up.

There are too many poisonous points. The author probably wrote this stuff to disgust readers.

There is a Uchiha master number 2 in the book. He was slandered by the village, betrayed and abandoned by his family, and finally framed by Obito to the point of betraying the village. Even after turning on the kaleidoscope, he still took into account the feelings of his fellow villagers and was unwilling to take action against the heroine's team (anbu pursuers). The heroine's team chased her like a dog-skin plaster, forcing her to take action, only to be killed by her eyesight skills. They spent more than ten chapters writing about such a normal-thinking, affectionate and righteous Uchiha, but it was just for the hero to show off his bastard spirit in front of the heroine? I feel like vomiting when I step on a horse. The male protagonist has no right to be angry. This horse riding is more disgusting than the villain.

Are you being exploited by capital in reality, and then writing a book to obscenely exploit others? What kind of dragon slayer eventually becomes a dragon?

Otsutsuki can absorb chakra, but taijutsu is useful, and taijutsu is a physical attack, so it is better to use a large number of clones to channel kinetic energy weapons: Accelerating to one hundred thousand revolutions, one million revolutions, ten million revolutions, what can Otsutsuki do to stop him?

If you don't know how to write emotional scripts and power scripts, don't write them. Isn't the subsequent writing pretty good? Just do it directly and punch hard. In the face of absolute strength, any conspiracy and trick are pale and powerless!

This book is very good. As an old bookworm in 2009, I guarantee that this is a very good Naruto fanfic. The protagonist gradually changes the fate of the characters in Naruto by developing the Internet in the ninja world, changes the fate of ordinary people in the ninja world, and achieves peace in the ninja world. There are basically no major logical bugs, and the ideas are relatively clear. It is definitely one of the top Naruto works.

I've read more than 20 chapters, but I'm still not satisfied. Isn't it good to be a big boss behind the scenes?

I was plagiarized within a few days of setting up Unlimited Internet. It was the first time I encountered such a rubbish Naruto fanfic written by the main character!

I can't accept it after seeing more than 100. What kind of emotional drama should I write? If it's such a big deal, don't write a drag.

I have collected more than 30 Naruto fanfics in the series, and you are the slowest to read them. No matter how much you read this book, you will not be able to fatten it up.

I remember there should be a section in the manga and animation where Naruto treats a guest to ramen, but ends up running out of money. How should I wash this?

Write about the Internet, but there is so little Internet content 😒😒😒

Although I read it through QQ Reading as a member. But that's pretty good. The content is very good. And it's over. Much better than those of the eunuchs.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.