Return to 2011

I just read a chapter, and I try to express my personal opinions as calmly as possible. I feel that the author is not very old, and many of the contents are not rigorous. It's not that I have to read the novel with my head in mind, but the flaws are too concentrated, and there are many in one chapter. I will still invest and vote. After all, there are many female protagonists and few stories. At the end of the day, I still have to support it. First of all, many people say that you can pass the exam well by reviewing it the day before the college entrance examination. This is true. Don't talk about the college entrance examination. How much can you recall about the most profound thing you remember ten years ago? Can 80% of the details be restored? He also criticized the readers and said that you are not reborn, how do you know that it is not possible? I have never traveled around the world, but I know that the earth is round, so I have to have some common sense, right? It's not that it can't be done like this, but wouldn't it be enough to write for two more days and add a sentence to find that my mind is much clearer after being reborn, and I can remember many details that were forgotten before? If you don't explain things before, you won't make up for it later. The second is that the heroine opens a law firm at the age of 28. If you want to highlight her genius, you have to make an issue about her age in advance. Or she has to graduate from a graduate school, and she is required to work for more than three years, own real estate, and have a security fund before she can open her own law firm. This 28 is too reluctant. It would be much better if she is a partner, or it would be more reasonable to explain later that the heroine has a strong background and ability. Then there are some details. For example, the manager is a virgin. I don't think it's good for men to be clean. But you are a manager at a young age and you don't know anything about business reception. How can you take the bosses to have fun? Lead the people over. You guys have a good time and I'll leave first? Are people relieved? Also, being reborn before thirty, the lack of life experience will affect the development of the male protagonist. The ancients said that when you reach thirty, your life will be very different after crossing the threshold of thirty. Of course, this is not important, by the way. There are also Internet words like scum, which cannot have existed in 11 years. It was still the QQ era, and people were still posting Martian texts. WeChat was just born in 2011, and it was used as an Internet walkie-talkie. Many words came about after WeChat became a daily communication tool. I hope this book can be more logical and self-consistent based on a plain foundation, so that it can contain more content. If you have knowledge in related fields, you can check the information a little. Baidu is very convenient, and you don't need people in the circle to see it. Anyone who has read the book for a few years will find it unreasonable. Finally, I wish you great achievements and a speedy success.

Without opening the system, I went back to the day before the college entrance examination more than ten years ago. Not only did I remember the test questions, but I also did better than before, 666.

This is a new book written by a newcomer. It is the first time I write about the themes of time travel and multiple female protagonists. The author still has many things that I don't understand or have problems with. I also hope that all the readers who are so handsome will point them out. The author is grateful here.

The most handsome readers in the universe. The humble author seeks to read and collect online! I hope everyone can support the newbie.

Such a reborn protagonist, even if he is reborn, it is difficult to live a cool life! !

The writing is a bit bland but it is comfortable to read and suits me. I invested, I hope it will yield good results

I've given you the monthly pass, please update

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There are less than 7k words. Has the author saved the manuscript? I have invested a lot of money that was less than 10,000 and got scammed before signing the contract.

Wasn't Fairy Tale released in 2005? I remember someone was playing this song when I was in elementary school. What's the author's timeline in 2011?