The Hogwarts Peeper

The combination of Slytherin + Secret Peeper is more suitable for behind-the-scenes or scholars. The author is great. Don't rush to the front like Gryffindor. If you want to cause trouble, you can also act like Professor Moriarty.

Seeing the basilisk here feels too reckless, and I can't stop it. I have to explore. To be honest, such a little wizard will have problems when encountering many things. There is no need to make the original for the sake of the original. Is a real world really full of such curious babies? Ask yourself what would happen if you encountered curious things when you were eleven years old.

The main character at the beginning is so good, Shapi. If you don't change it, some people will be discouraged 🙂

This is too reckless. . . . 😅

To be honest, I think this book is likely to be bad. The mysterious system is much higher than that of Harry Potter. Unless you go to infinity, you don't need a demigod. Sequence 5 astrologers can be invincible in Harry Potter, let alone demigods. Sequence 7 seems to be called a wizard, and sequence 6 scroll professors are unprecedented in Harry Potter. The level difference is too much.

I feel that the author intentionally shaped the world of Mystery + Harry Potter into an innocent world similar to Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf. It has a dark side, but it is warm and warm from beginning to end, which is outrageous.

How can I put it this way? It has too much time and is forced to be rounded (I don't mean to curse). It feels unreasonable. The main character seems a bit speechless and just follows the plot. It's a bit like trying to sell dog meat with a sheep's head. According to common sense, there are quite a few poisonous points.

In this case, how will the blood of the mythical creature used in the protagonist sequence 4 come from?

This is a great beginning. . . The protagonist sees this as less lovable than Malfoy. Yin and Yang strangely fired map cannons indiscriminately, firing cannons at all the pure-blood wizards in front of everyone. The secret spy had no sense of calmness at all, but the time traveler was quite arrogant and arrogant.

So this book is about changing several people to experience the same adventure.

According to the Cthulhu Mythos, all stars in the universe, including the sun, black holes, and gaseous planets, are transformed into the immortal bodies of the outer gods who died because of Azathoth. Looking at the stars with spiritual vision is no less than looking directly at a lot of gods.

Does the author have an outline? How many sequences are you planning to write before putting it on the shelves?

I came in after reading the title of the book and felt quite disappointed.

Good guy, this is the end of the book...

The two world systems are fundamentally different! What the author shows is just rough putting it together! It seems very inconsistent! Different things need to be refined to their essence and eliminate any unsuitable settings! Add some logical secondary designs (imagination) of the author After all, this is a fanfic based on HP! It's better to eat less if you mess around.

Have you gone to the palace to serve Lafayette? !

Can you recommend a complete book with 57 chapters?

The content of Hogwarts is indeed relatively small. I would like to make a premature suggestion: the author can simply turn to a comprehensive comic and use Hogwarts as the main world.

Can anyone tell me a bit about what the Secret Peeper is and what its sequence is?

I haven't watched it yet, has the hermit turned into a hegemon?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Is there a protagonist in the Witch series? Ha ha

Hehehe

The author just sticks to himself

Don't you look down on my eternal sleeper path?

When I saw the basilisk, the atmosphere scared me to death. The sense of immersion was so strong and it was so well written 😰😰

This is the first time the author has written a novel. It is very good. Please readers, please have some empathy and be more merciful.