Naruto: Starting by Breaking the Caged Bird Seal!

To be honest, the setting of the Hyuga Clan is outrageous. Logically speaking, the Clan should only consist of the head of the family, his wife and children, and everyone else should be separated, right? After all, brothers have to form families. There is something wrong with what the author wrote. How can there be so many clans?

The writing and plot are quite good, but there are too many clan members, which makes me feel that there are not enough slaves for the clan, and there are not enough people to work. . . Also, do you have a vest? Let's touch it.

A loser like Uchiha Fugaku still wants to be Hokage? He can't even control the people in his clan or even his own son. Who gives him confidence? Being a thug is just fine, but considering his personality, it's hard to find much use for him.

It started well, but as soon as I saw the four-year-old take off, I was instantly impressed. If the protagonist is eight years old at the beginning, and God rewards those who work hard, I think it would be good, but four years old is really too inconsistent.

There are too many emotional scenes, and they are too long. Maybe the author thought it was well written, but I felt it was dry. Moreover, you can write tens of thousands of words about a woman's emotional drama, but in fact, it's just a few sentences that get to the core over and over again. It's too watery, too watery. I really don't dare subscribe to this method of writing that can write two 10,000-word chapters for each relationship scene. Even if he wanted to give the original characters a happy ending, he wouldn't give it like this. Does the author think that writing emotional scenes in a romantic way is particularly literary? I don't feel anything at all, I just feel that the money I spent is not worth it.

I regret that I ordered all of them. The front part is well written, but the back part is full of settings + anecdotes. The scenes are huge, the pace is fast, and the details are small. The protagonist's strength is severely suppressed. I feel like I have to follow the plot. I have to wait until the end of the Ninja World War. He was able to be promoted to SSR. He was so powerful in the early days. He was a Jonin at the age of five, a Kage level at the age of eight, and he started having sex at the age of 5 (this was one of the few uncomfortable moments in the early stage. He was five years old???), And then he became Hokage at the age of 12. It was really awesome! Then there is the problem of not being able to do it well in the later stages. When he reaches adulthood and has not yet reached the sixth level, he is simply useless, so he is forced to follow the plot. The more I read the full text, the more untroubled I feel. Why? Just like what the author said, he wrote what the protagonist wants to do, but he didn't write how to do it, and he didn't have the confidence to write how to do it. Is this interesting? Since I don't have the confidence to write the content of being a Hokage, I will write other plots. It is really regrettable to write like this.

Just a personal opinion, I think the caged bird is a destructive seal. When the seal is engraved, the Byakugan has already been damaged. The Byakugan of the Separation Family cannot have a 360-degree field of vision and is automatically destroyed after death. It is like drilling a hole for the Byakugan so that the bomb (seal) can be put in.

The author is very good at writing about women, so don't write about women next time 👍

Personally, I really can't accept multiple female protagonists and a harem, even though the writing is really good and the story flows smoothly. Abandoned!

Are you familiar with this family? Why so many