Simulation of the Heavens: I Am a Strange Evil Dragon

Is the protagonist not from an orphanage? To be honest, if it becomes weird, don't involve your family. Just watch it from a distance. If possible, just leave something behind. Which master would dare to write about a protagonist who brings up a whole family? The author also has a big heart

Don't write about family members in novels. There's really no sense of immersion. In reality, it's normal to have parents. It's good if novels focus on orphans. Otherwise, your parents will be everywhere and look at them every day, which will make you sad.

The second chapter directly lowers the quality of this book to the limit. The protagonist is a first-level warrior with a thousand pounds of strength. To have such strength, you must have a strong body to support it. Turns out you said at the beginning of the first chapter that the protagonist tortured himself to death by watching pornographic videos? Don't you think your second chapter and your first chapter contradict each other?

The part about stealing a mobile phone to make phone calls was very awkward, and one dared to say it and the other dared to believe it.

There is no sense of substitution, they are no longer human beings and they still have family members. It feels very awkward written by the author. It is neither a horror novel nor a suspense novel. It's more like a fantasy trap... It also adds the feeling of an urban system... You have all the buffs stacked up...

The name is good, the content is average and the plot is good.

This book basically captures all the poisonous points of heterogeneous literature.

The setting itself is problematic, or confusing. A good book must at least have basic logic, be consistent, have a clear system, and have no contradictions. Does your weird upgrade have anything to do with your brother? You have to wait for him. He has an awesome background and can travel through time, but he learns from others, but he doesn't have core skills. Other weirdnesses do, and other weirdnesses can be upgraded by yourself, but you can't. What the hell skills do you need to learn? I'm confused when I read it. I'm afraid you confused Weird and Weird Master. What is weird? Your strength will naturally upgrade when you reach it, and your abilities will be unique, fierce and weird. You are just a badass young man wearing a weird skin.

With the author's writing style, he couldn't grasp what he wanted to write. What is written in the three golden chapters?

When I saw the pig's trotters and my family, I wanted to leave.

Is this really recommended by the editor? ? Are you out of your mind?

The first few pictures just piqued my interest, and when I saw him looking for his brother, I instantly felt like I didn't want to watch anymore.

Damn it, this is a eunuch, you wasted my two dollars, this eunuch will be blacklisted from now on

The introduction looks like a dark text, right? Support first, hope and selfishness last.

The main character is not an orphan, bad reviews, I can't get used to it.

After reading one or two chapters, I didn't really like it. The main character was just a joke. Written in a comedy way, the main character's IQ dropped several levels, and the atmosphere was gone. There was no longer that weird, evil, serious atmosphere.

Damn it, you are a eunuch.

This is why the orphanage at Qidian is the largest institution and is larger than the eunuch home. Something practiced by countless authors. It would be difficult for novel writers to write if they are not urban. Bring your family with you.

I basically skipped through the chapters of the weird main world that made me laugh at the protagonist.

Then don't write about the martial arts moving the world and swallowing the stars. It's not a waste of time to write something that is destined to attack.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't figure out what the author was thinking. The first three chapters were written in a confusing way, and they were obviously weird. Why would you want to learn the art of cunning? What's so weird about the big stomach king's organ replacement? Can you not share the same cultivation system as humans? What's the difference between your normal system?

I feel so bad. I just saw the results yesterday and it turned out to be a eunuch.

This article should have been written by software, I can't read it at all

The protagonist's name is Fang Yuan. Can a brother tell me whether his behavior and personality match this name? I hope to have the same character as Daai Xianzun

Yes, but I feel that it is much better for the author to write dungeons than the main world. Should I write more about the main world? Write more about other worlds?

It's over, this book is killing me

There is no need for eunuchs. You can write whatever you want. You can update it once a week.

Another book to keep alive😅😅

The book review section is a bit cruel, but I think it's quite good.

Author, can you tell me more? Full subscription and a monthly vote for you.