Ordinary Road 2010

What I feel after reading Chapter 146 Advantages: The writing is good Disadvantages: 1. The rebirth is embarrassing, the previous life failed, and the rebirth is not very good. 2. The rebirth novel is very annoying with this routine of renewing the love in the previous life. Even after being reborn, I still see this small forest, the layout is too low, 3. Why do you insist on the heroine being a trainee? The setting country is China, not South Korea or Japan. The social advantages of being born in a major are something trainees created by capital flow can never surpass.

It is suggested that the author should focus on writing about campus love. The first volume is S-rated, but the business parts of the subsequent volumes are too novice. Maybe it's because I didn't pay attention later, and the quality dropped too obviously.

Let's complain, today's male and female pig trotters are either surnamed Lin, Gu, or Ye, or they have compound surnames.

The IQ is online, close to life, reasonable and sophisticated in writing. Definitely a god-level writing style. Right now, Lin Yi's career line has not yet been focused on. I speculate: In high school, he still focused on studying for school career. After all, high school students look childish. If they only indulge in making money in society, it would feel somewhat inconsistent. Moreover, the male protagonist's grades are average and he is not a top student. If he is still obsessed with making money or trying to get close to the big guys who have not yet grown up, how can he still pass the college entrance examination? Lin Yi was a programmer in his previous life. When he was in college, he could make a lot of money just by tinkering with an app. I think it is reasonable for the heroine to join the entertainment industry, for the following reasons: 1. The heroine has proven in her previous life that she was born to do this. There are geniuses in every field, and she is the genius in this field. The greatest professional joy is to develop your hobby or expertise into a career. 2. The entertainment industry is indeed dirty, but it is not suitable for geniuses. In fact, all industries are dirty, but industry geniuses are immune. 3. If the male protagonist is rich, he can bring money into the group to protect the female protagonist.

How to put it this way, I felt a little uncomfortable reading this book. It is a good book, but it is not suitable for me to read. It feels like watching a current campus love drama, but there is no sense of immersion, because my high school has no student union, no school belles, and no clubs. There are very few activities. At most, there is a Spring and Autumn Sports Festival and a New Year's Day party, so there are many things in the book. I couldn't feel anything about it, including the supporting characters in it, who were in love, because they never appeared in my high school career. To put it simply, this book didn't look like a rebirth story in the early stage, but more like a campus love story with a relatively mature and smart male protagonist. I subscribed to it after a few chapters and stopped reading it. The author's writing is very good. I hope the author can have a daily novel that is suitable for me to read in the future. Thank you to the author.

I think I found the biggest bug When Peng Yuchen first appeared, there was no need for Lin Yi to keep pulling the heroine to force her way into the entertainment industry. With Lin Yi's future development, it would not be a matter of minutes for him to debut as a female star. In addition, Gu Caiwei is good-looking and should definitely be admitted to a good art school in Beijing. If Lin Yi is on the rise in two years, he will be able to have a steady academic qualification and become famous. The heroine has never considered debuting early, so why are you in such a hurry? For Boss Peng, her first few appearances were too utilitarian and too aggressive. It is indeed important to show one's strength, but I really think Mama Gu is right. You are too anxious to set out the conditions for your debut and college admission. Isn't this just a grassroots team eager to grab people to turn over? I feel that the biggest problem in this section is Lin Yi's image creation. You already know that you are a reborn person, so why bother to recruit the heroine into the agency again. To put it bluntly, my account is full of Bitcoins, and my personal assets may be more than your company's assets in the future. Why do you teach me how to do things? Why should I rely on you to make my girlfriend famous. So I feel that there is something completely wrong with Lin Yi's portrayal. You keep saying that girls should make their own decisions, but in the end, you lie to relatives, show photos to relatives, ask for a chance encounter, and fight with Gu's mother. This is not the rebirth of an adult at all. Besides, in your previous life, you were a key high school student in 1985, sleeping with two competition bosses. Do you really not know how important academic qualifications are? If I were the parent of a girl, everything would be easy after the college entrance examination. There is still one year left before the college entrance examination. If you interrupt my girl's study, you will not be able to do anything even if you are worth tens of billions. I have been divorced and have suffered setbacks in the opera industry. How can I still not know that what is in the handshake is the most stable? Furthermore, what is yours will always be yours. If my girl is as good as you say, then you have to wait for me. After the college entrance examination is over in a year, you can talk about her debut. Anyway, my girl is excellent. At least now you are just a pioneer instead of a winner. What if your company is gone in a year and you change from a pioneer to a pioneer? Will you not delay my daughter's life?

I recognize that the author's writing style is good, but the frequent "touching of noses" and "wry smiles" really come off! Also, I support Gu Changge who does not recognize the male protagonist emotionally. After all, it is not appropriate for high school students to fall in love, but!! I believe many people have watched Nirvana and Rekindling, right? The heroine's family background is better than that of the male protagonist; an elegant mother figure; blah, blah, blah... Really, after seeing this way of shaping too many times, I feel it's... How should I put it? It feels very awkward. It looked fine before, but now it's 2022! Why are there still characters with this template? The template of a poor boy falling in love with a rich princess is really starting from not only 1,000 but also 800. I am really tired of aesthetics. Also, the protagonist returns to his student days. Since his primary identity is a student, why can't he study hard? Why do you want to give me a feeling of being idle? To be honest, you can take your time with your career. I feel better if you arrange your career while you are in college? Personally, I feel that it is enough to have a small amount of wealth and be content with it. Before rebirth: loser; after rebirth: business giant. Hmm... I don't want to comment. The above are some of my personal complaints. After all, I am just a reader. I cannot look at the problem from the author's perspective, nor can I really teach the author to write a book. I am not that capable yet.

I really don't understand the author's 2 points: 1. Why do you insist on pushing your girlfriend to go to a small economic company and sign a contract that only earns 5% or even lower? 2. Why don't you introduce your girlfriend to your friends, at least to people at the company's vice president level, so that everyone around you will mistakenly think you are single, so that the women around you will misunderstand you.

Very well written, it would be better if it only has a single female protagonist

It's been six years and I haven't had sex yet. Do you think you are a monk? I want to ask. Her mother is like a lamp😅😅😅

How to put it, I feel that the word "self-promotion" is suitable for summarizing it. The male protagonist has returned to high school, and I can't see where he is more mature. It seems that a person who had no regrets in the first place traveled through time. The only regret? School beauty? Maybe, when I returned to high school, I took advantage of my own advantages and did two things. I gambled on football and bought coins. I didn't work hard at studying, and I didn't show much interest in the school belle. The entire high school period was boring and unexciting because of the lack of conflict. I don't know why I feel so self-confident after time travel. The capriciousness of fate and life. Logically speaking, the protagonist should know that as a time traveler, self-requirements and pursuits are too low. Forget it, it's pretty boring overall.

The author's writing style is good, but the title of the book is wrong and the format is low. We are already in a big factory, so how can we be ordinary? What big impact will you have on this world after you are reborn? What promotion will you have? Let your girlfriend join the girl group with restrictions? Wouldn't it be better to invest in your own company and be the boss behind the scenes to support your girlfriend? In terms of career, I also went to the track where I wasted money and made connections twice in a row. I was also drunk. Where is the pattern? Contempt it.

Is the author using rebirth as an irony? People's rebirth is to realize their dreams and create brilliance. Lin Yi's rebirth is to participate in witnessing Caiwei's entry into the entertainment industry. Caiwei was a relatively successful artist before her rebirth. What did Lin Yi's rebirth bring to Caiwei? It's the same old path, without any solid backing, just adding Lin Yi's feelings, so the author probably has some ideas in reality...

The campus is okay, but the business war is too bland, which may be related to the author's lack of workplace experience. The business war is well written about the rebirth at the turn of the century, and the memory war is thrillingly written.

The writing is very good, but the pace is too slow, and the protagonist's halo is relatively weak. Basically, this kind of rebirth doesn't bring much excitement when it comes to this kind of encounter. . I was a 985 before, but after being reborn, I didn't make much progress. . It's really useless!

Fa Zhang is close to the current aesthetic style and close to Cai Wei in my mind

Looking at it now, I personally feel two points: 1. The protagonist clearly knows in advance that there are many tracks that have not yet been explored, but he still insists on participating in the industry that has been discovered. It would be fine if the protagonist has any core competitiveness that can stand out, but it seems that the protagonist wants to use his internal strength to defeat these predators. I just want to ask, why? 2. Emotional line. The author seems to treat the male and female protagonists more like the relationship between idols and fans. The result is that half of the campus idol drama has basically no entrepreneurial content, and then it takes a sharp turn, and half of it is all about entrepreneurial business wars. Overall, the separation between the front and the back is a bit too severe...

It's really rubbish, I really didn't do anything before going to college. The level of study is only the same as in the previous life, and a lot of the writing is inexplicably childish. Brother, were you 28 before you were reborn? Are you still acting like a high school student? Also, removing 80% of the daily routine before it is put on the shelves will not affect the subsequent plot at all.

When the wallpaper is nice

Don't brag or criticize, the author's writing style is good, but I may not have read many novels, and most of the plot designs are wrong. It can be said that they are completely deviated from normal novels. You can read more similar novels, and you will know why they say that your plot is not correct. I can continue to read it entirely because of your writing style. , The plot is barely attractive, and it relies entirely on the writing. To be honest, it's a pity. If you had studied more similar novels, you probably wouldn't have written it like this. However, as a newcomer, it is still very good. I look forward to the progress of the author's next novel. Seeing it on the shelves is the biggest support. Come on!

This book was published at about the same speed as another book of the same type at the same time, going against the trend for ten years. To be honest, the writing style of this book is better than that one, but the business aspect is really a piece of shit. I have been reborn and started a business or a big factory. At this time, the mobile Internet has a golden start. You have an industry like food delivery that is very competitive for money. Aren't mobile games good? What is lacking in this time is game creativity. Isn't Toutiao great? At the same time, there are no competitors, and in the later stage, I can start a cultural and entertainment ecological chain by myself. It's so business-like that I'm speechless.

The gap between high school and college suddenly widened. On the one hand, the heroine insisted on letting her take the path of becoming an idol. I had no idea whether she was afraid that she would not be able to arrange it or because she just wanted an idol wife. I didn't see this in reading the book. Especially now when I look back at those chapters, the protagonist's decision is as if she has a sense of mission. Rhetorically, let the heroine make the decision, but in reality, I want her to become an idol. Whether it is through live broadcasting, personal up creation or self-media, it is all the same. No matter what, a completely new life is not an option. On the other hand, starting your own business. One is that the school is now completely reduced to the background. The other is that I have not watched it. This decision to take out food is very much like a decision that a coder in a large factory should make. To get a start-up capital, selling oneself to Meituan is naturally a good choice. But one must also pay attention to the thoughts of acquaintances. To be fair, if you only consider this life, whether it is a senior or a brother, it has only been a short time since we met. For example Considering the emotional basis of the past life, I don't understand the mentality of the protagonist who is looking at the heroine and thinking about the senior sister in his heart. "Are you cheap? Or should I choose one honestly? Or should I choose one but I want it even though I say it? I didn't understand the plot of drawing lots in front of me and deliberately looking for that lot. This mentality of a man can't see his things being robbed by others?" There will be a sense of separation between the front and back of this character. I have been following it for a while since it was released. Recently, I have no desire to follow it. The more I write the story, the more mediocre it is. If I didn't feel that the author should still be able to write something, I might not have left.

Suddenly it switched from a campus romance drama to a commercial drama, causing the heroine to run away far away. The content of the business war is just that, and it is very boring to go back and forth with more than 10 chapters. I skipped to Chapter 15 to read the rest of the content, and I didn't lose track of the plot at all.

The relationship is okay. For business, I chose an industry that consumes the most money. It's really hard to understand. If you don't have much capital to start a business, you will definitely be in an industry with large cash flow.

The first and middle stages of this book are very good, but the ending is too rushed. It can be seen that the author's enthusiasm has burned out by the end. If it is indeed the first book, I think the author has written very well. The success of this book lies in the description of campus life. The failure is that the role of the senior sister ends too hastily in the later period. However, nothing is perfect. The author thinks it is good. We readers are just companions on the road of this book.

I really liked the part about daily life on campus, so I'll try to make the most of its strengths and avoid its weaknesses in the next one. I have been reading this book since I started writing it, and now it suddenly ends. I really didn't expect it. I wanted to see the final ending, not like this.

Gu Caiwei = Ju Jingyi? Besides Yang Chaoyue, who else in the Chinese girl group has a little bit of popularity? Who else? Who else?

The writing is very good, and the business war is also very exciting. A few characters are a little exaggerated. Overall, it is a good rebirth story, with the shadow of Nirvana.

To be honest, it was nice that it ended anticlimactically. Because there is a "senior sister" who is really disgusting. It would be great to end it like this.

The protagonist's rebirth is also a waste! ! !