In This Mysterious World, My Daughter Handed Me over to the Demon Suppressor

As of now, the main frame of the story is basically clear. In terms of storytelling alone, this invincible novel is the most novel and excellent one I have ever seen. There is no big problem with the writing, but the narrative pace is a bit fast, so the rendering of some atmosphere and environment is sometimes thin. I suggest that the author can add more pen and ink, and don't rush it. In addition, there is the problem of blurred realm that many people have mentioned. Personally, I prefer this kind of film that does not depict the small realm so rigidly. (Otherwise, what else is there to write? Just reveal your realm before fighting and admit defeat.) And although the article does not directly describe the data of each level, through dialogue and fighting, you can still clearly detect the strength gap between different realms. In terms of characterization, except for the Demon Suppressor who deliberately pursues the suppression of the protagonist at the beginning, the logic of everyone else's actions is self-explanatory. If you want to read novels for entertainment, pay more attention to the storytelling of the novels. I personally highly recommend reading this novel. If you are looking for depth and introspection through reading novels, then I would not recommend it. (I don't even recommend you to follow online articles) In short, I still hope that the author can stick to the original intention of telling a good story. I like this novel very much. But you should also pay attention to the overall advancement speed of the story, as well as the overall outline of the following story. The most difficult and most challenging thing about this kind of invincible novel is whether the following story can still be logical after being completely invincible. I'm also looking forward to seeing a good story, come on

The author is short and weak😒😒😒

I have not read this book, but I feel that the introduction is very interesting and reminds me of the days when I was young and bragging in the countryside.

If Wudiliu is not well written, it will be boring at best. 😅 However, there are a lot of Invincible novels in Qidian, but the protagonists are written to be low and aggrieved. They can ridicule any bad character and give the protagonist various restrictions. That's really disgusting. ————Dividing line———— I really didn't expect this post to get so many likes. It seems that everyone is disgusted as usual.

Brother, how can you keep reading? It's so embarrassing. He was thousands of years ago. He was invincible in the world. He, he, he, it's 2022, brother.

MD, it's amazing, the text display of the playback bar in the notification bar is incomplete... I thought why the title of this book is so outrageous? !

Weird version of "The Return of the Dragon King" and found his daughter living in a doghouse

Can this thing go to Sanjiang? ? ?

He killed gods and demons for his daughter, but couldn't give her a drop of water or a grain of rice...

I have profound skills and am immune to all kinds of poisons. 😃Come, let me see. Poof...( ✘_✘ )↯ 💀 Death

This is the legendary Great Holy Scripture. The authorities have been trying to kill you, but you have helped them again and again.

Good guy, after reading the table of contents, Chapter 267 is completed. Chapter 216, the protagonist comes out of the coffin... I immediately lose interest.

It's really outrageous. This is still selling well. Isn't it money laundering at Qidian?

I thought the introduction was enough to persuade me to quit, but I had never read this book three times. I was in a book shortage today, so I finally mustered up the courage, but I didn't expect to be persuaded to quit after reading a few chapters. I didn't have any writing skills at all, so I just pretended. Isn't that embarrassing?

How did he write that the color of heaven and earth changed, the great road was annihilated, and then he released a Qigong wave?

This book is so tiring to read from cover to cover. I must have liked it before I was sixteen.

I'm curious about why humans in the novel haven't perished yet? They are ridiculously weak, but there are so many monsters and monsters that their combat power is completely unequal.

If you are not good at the earth level, you will still have the heaven level. If you are not good at the heaven level, you will be the quasi-king level. If you are not good at the quasi-king level, you will be the king level🤣

It's too hasty and unfinished. With such a big world view, I wrote something like this.

Just watching it, the beginning is refreshing, but the rest of the content is not interesting at all!

I've read three chapters, what about you?

If your ending is written like this, won't your conscience hurt?

If you don't have a top-level poison resistance brother, you can withdraw.

In the later period, I felt that the writing was off track. The first part was okay, but the second part developed too fast and suddenly.

King level. . . . Is this novel a sketch? Not even childish, mentally retarded. . . . .

The writing started to fall apart at the beginning. The more it went on, the worse it got. Especially the writing on combat power was really miserable.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Try your best

The situation changes at every turn. As long as the fight does not change, it is not a fight.

12 Monthly passes, are there any fine