Sorry, I Turned Down the Class Flower

The current situation is that one wants to be portrayed as a straight man, and finally he is portrayed as a fool, and the other wants to be portrayed as a grown-up, and then shaped into a love brain, and then, it is a very classic water word count routine, straight man fool, heroine I just like you but I won't say it, so stretching the word count can only be said to be very classic. Romance novels with a single heroine are not very long. It is normal to increase the number of words by stretching the characters. But is the character you create like this really likable? The male protagonist also repeatedly emphasizes that he will not like the female protagonist. It is not difficult for people to think about whether you will add a wife-chasing crematorium later to increase the word count. Although it may not be possible based on the character of the heroine, but who knows. The reason for living together is hard to describe. Why do you say this? The female protagonist doesn't know about saving the male protagonist's life. From the female protagonist's perspective, inviting her to live in your home itself is a feeling of hope, and then the male protagonist also emphasizes the so-called "I won't like the female protagonist's remarks."

Our dedicated and long-lasting heroine.

The more I watch, the more I feel that the heroine is a love-minded licker, rather than an outstanding and beautiful cold beauty. The characteristics of the female protagonist need to be strengthened, and the specific aspects are excellent performance and beauty As for the male protagonist, except for his appearance, there is nothing outstanding. . Brother, this is a reborn dog. At least give him the feeling of a reborn dog, not to mention the economic development mind. After all, love stories are not understandable. But at least he is a social worker who has been around for a few years. He must have emotional intelligence and a way of doing things. I haven't seen it yet. The female protagonist likes the male protagonist, please give a specific plot of why it is his. Bai Yueguang is a beautiful story, not a reason for cataracts The male protagonist has repeatedly emphasized that the female protagonist is not his type and has a seriously low emotional intelligence. As for the heroine, there is currently nothing outstanding about her. Could it be that she was moved by the heroine's true feelings later on?

Oh my god, are you deliberately abusing the heroine? ? ? I can hardly stand it anymore. Can you not make the male protagonist so smart?

——Book friend's homemade ending The prosperous Tang Dynasty was silent. He held Wen Zhanyan as he walked home. On such a cool night, the two of them could only feel the heat from each other's bodies. Wen Zhanyan closed her eyes. In fact, she felt a little regretful and a little relieved when she gave out the kiss. There was silence around her, and the vibration of her heart in her chest was particularly clear. She felt the surroundings of the prosperous Tang Dynasty, and with the help of drunkenness, she began to daydream about his clear face and the happy ending they were destined not to have, just like every lonely night since graduating from high school. Let's keep these thoughts sealed for this night together with that kiss. Wen Zhanyan sighed in his heart, and also sighed away his remaining courage. Sheng Tang looked at her in his arms, his heart in confusion. He looked at the shadow, watching the two heads on the ground slowly overlapping with the footsteps as they approached the street lamp. Sheng Tang liked cute and gentle girls, but Wen Zhanyan was cold and reserved, but so what? She was the one who pushed him away at the critical moment of life and death, it was she who looked at the broken lipstick in despair, it was she who collected the box of sundries, and there was even a new item, this kiss, it was also her. He was not an idiot. Wen Zhanyan took ninety-nine steps towards him from an invisible place, but Shengtang kept giving hints to himself and retreated step by step. Too slow. But maybe it's not too late. The part between the two street lamps was the darkest. He held Wen Zhanyan in his arms and walked steadily forward. When he reached the illumination range of the next street lamp, his two heads quickly stretched out from the steps. When he arrived at home, Sheng Tang gently placed Wen Zhanyan on the sofa, took off her shoes, covered her with a thin quilt, and sat on the side of her head. The lights were not turned on, and the room was very dark, but the little night light outside the window was enough for Shengtang to see the outline of his face through the reflection of the TV. He looked at this face, the face of the person who fascinated Wen Zhanyan. There were some stiffness, some coldness, and some confusion in the outline. In fact, Wen Zhanyan was already mostly awake from the wine, but she was greedy for Sheng Tang's embrace, pretending to be asleep and letting him hold her all the way. Unfortunately, the beautiful time like a fantasy has ended. She didn't know what Sheng Tang was thinking. After this night, they might gradually become passers-by who only laugh awkwardly when they meet on the road, right? Maybe he would attribute the kiss to her drunken antics, and they were still just friends after they sobered up. She suddenly felt a little lost. In this room, one person is lying and the other is sitting. They each have their own thoughts, but they use darkness to block the strange emotions and dare not reveal their existence to the other party. Alcohol can make people lose their sense of time. Wen Zhanyan's thoughts gradually let go. She entered a state of half-asleep and half-awake for an unknown period of time. Suddenly, a soft and unforgettable voice came to her ears. "Can I date you?" She suddenly woke up, but soon suspected that it was an illusion, but the soft male voice soon continued to come, "I know that I am an emotionally weak person, and I have always been," he paused, and then said, "But I suddenly found that I fell in love with you," Looking at Wen Zhanyan, whose eyelids were naturally closed next to him, he hesitated for a moment, "Go to bed... Good night then, I will come again tomorrow..." Sheng Tang couldn't say the second half of the sentence, because the four lips were already pressed together. His eyes widened in shock, but after the shock, he clasped the other person's head with his hands, and strengthened the gradual joining of the lips again. Bang bang bang. Shengnian opened the door, and an excited voice squeezed in through the crack of the door, "Mom!" "Mom is not at home, why are you here?" She looked out the door, and Shengtang was standing at the door. "She! She, she, she! Huh? The prosperous Tang Dynasty?" Jiang Lai stood under the stage, chewing something while looking at the beautiful couple on the stage. "Groom, are you willing to abide by your wedding vows from now on, no matter you are poor or rich, sick or healthy, beautiful or eclipsed, successful or frustrated, you are willing to love her, comfort her, respect her, and protect her? And are you willing to be loyal to her forever throughout your lives?" "I do!" "Bride, are you willing to marry the groom as your husband? Are you willing to love him, comfort him, respect him, and protect him in sickness or in health, poverty or wealth, success or failure? " "I do." In the future, there will be one less person who cannot be loved.

At present, the male protagonist is unreliable, not to mention the main plot. Subline, his sister's actions and actions were all passive and waiting for things to happen. His sister was blocked because she was passively discovered. His sister had no action at all. Could it be that she waited for something to happen and just opened her mouth to persuade her? Take the initiative when it comes to rebirth. These two are the most important people to the current male protagonist, and they are also the people who must change their lives after rebirth. Such actions are not thankless. Now that he has no job, the plot can be unfolded at his sister's place, not to mention picking her up every day, going to the school to get to know the teachers, or even transferring schools, or even bringing her back to live with her. The male protagonist just didn't move. He just went to pick her up once and saw that his sister was blocked. This arrangement was too coincidental. As for her sister, to be honest, as a younger brother, it was normal for her to care about her, but in the end she didn't do anything at all. Reality doesn't need logic, fiction does, and the current male protagonist's actions are illogical. For the female protagonist, it is logical. After all, love does not come, but it is like this. However, his sister is not love, but family affection, and it involves life and happiness throughout his life. He just talks about it, so the male protagonist feels unreliable and illogical. After being reborn, how can you give happiness to the one you love without even flapping your wings? Of course, as far as the plot is concerned, after all, it is just the beginning, and the male protagonist should have some subsequent actions. If it continues like this, the book will not be read, and the male protagonist will not be able to stand up. Sister's rescue operation, sister's marriage battle, two sub-plots plus a entrepreneurship line interspersed with the main plot, this is the structure. As the saying goes, the hero's thoughts are just fantasy. If he doesn't take action, the story will become an accident.

The male protagonist is really annoying, this is really annoying

M's virtue is really amazing. The male protagonist emphasizes "She won't like me anymore" and "She's not my type" in almost every chapter. I really can't bear it. If I don't write these two sentences, I won't be able to write, right? Do you have to make the male protagonist a fool? This is not a straight man, this is pure stupidity! I have never been so angry while reading a novel! Farewell!

I was a little annoyed after reading it. Even if the protagonist is clueless, the article keeps emphasizing that he doesn't like the heroine and doesn't feel it. What should I do next? I really like the way the heroine is portrayed, but the hero is not good enough.

Hurry up and update the image of the male protagonist. Few people will follow you at this delay.