Ask Qingyun

You are the most serious person I have ever written in Zhu Xian fan fiction. Unlike other people who plagiarize a lot and keep a running account, it can be seen that you have your own style and are willing to accept readers' comments and modifications. Come on! ! !

Never want a harem! The author is great. And who is the heroine?

Hmm~ I see that you are still updating, so I would like to remind you that I don't know if you are writing Zhu Xian for the love of power generation, or if you are planning to write to make money. If it is for the love of power generation, pretend I didn't say it later. If you are planning to make money, you can cut the book. It's not that your writing is not good, but that Zhu Xian fans can't write, and even famous websites on the Internet can't write. I have suffered a loss, and it's true that I have suffered a big loss. You will know it by reading my book reviews. As for how you want to proceed in the future, you can refer to me, or find another way. I wish you good luck. If you continue to write about Zhu Xian, you can leave a message py

First of all, thank you very much for your support. The author is a newcomer. The original intention of writing this book was also because of his love for Zhu Xian, which can be regarded as fulfilling a dream of his. Then I hope everyone can be kind when reading. Some people are really malicious. I don't know what impact real life has had on you, which makes you need to vent through the online world. I will delete any unpleasant comments. The author is more Buddhist and does not expect to make money by writing books (I still want free recommendation votes). I will be scolded for generating electricity for love. I am not used to some people! ! Above Salute (heehee)

There is no immortality in the Zhuxian world

It's very carefree. I fight monsters all the way and flirt with girls. I have to fight monsters and flirt with girls. It's fast-paced and not procrastinating. I just don't know if I can create original content until the plot is over. The writing is also quite good. Liangcao

Not bad, although I haven't read the original work

It's very well written, I hope I don't end up in the palace

Come on update! 🤭

The writing is quite good. I like the character of the protagonist very much. Good luck to the author 👍

It's well written, I hope Baguio can have a good ending

I remember it was written very clearly in the original book. Senior Sister Ling'er has always been like a sister and brother to Xiaofan. She has never been the kind of woman who is always around, and I really can't accept your devilishly modified version of Senior Sister Ling'er, gg

Readers, if you have better suggestions or ideas, you can post them in this post. The author will refer to them carefully. If you have different ideas, you can also discuss them here. Thank you everyone.

The first few chapters are well written and the writing is sophisticated, but what are you trying to do about Fen Ji and the intrusion of otherworldly beings! It feels like a piece of shit has been lost in the delicious food.

First of all, I want to say that the writing is good, that is, after leaving the Blood Cave, you should look for his junior sister. After all, you need to look for it in a formal way, and support the harem! ! ! Baguio Lu Xueqi Tian Linger Jin Linger Xiaobai I wonder how many the author plans to include?