
Building a City Across the Heavens in the Divine Realm
我在神界打造诸天城
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 51k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
25Chapters
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Reader comments 11
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The theme of Zhutian City is great. After reading The Shopkeeper and I Have a City of Zhutian, there are no other good novels with this theme 🙂
Let me tell you my personal advice, don't comment if you don't like it😭
One thousand people is too few for a city. How much can these one thousand people trade? The city entry order can be set to invite a few people to enter Zhutian City (you can also ask how much plane power must be spent), or you can use the plane power to buy some low-level tokens (of course these people cannot be counted as residents and can only work from eight to five). The low-level tokens can be given to some subordinates and let them guard the shops. Because now the city lord's things can only be purchased by some high-level people. In the future, it is impossible for everyone to come from high-level planes. With a few more people, a small auction can be held. Those who come to the auction can also spend the power of the plane to become residents, which will definitely cost a lot more. Moreover, the city lord also needs to communicate with the residents. Now it is the residents who are communicating. The city lord seems to be just an NPC that provides experience opportunities What I said is that it may be because the plot has just started and nothing has been written yet. If I add these in the future, I will treat it as if I am lonely. I apologize in advance 🥺
Let me briefly talk about some of the problems I personally think with this book.
Will the world level of the characters who come at the beginning be too high? What to write next? Moreover, after Ying Zheng leaves, the original world will be easily chaotic. If the original world is in chaos, the power of the plane will definitely be reduced. Which plane will you place him in in the future? And where will Qin Shi Huang, who has newly entered the plane, go? Should the soul be reincarnated or die directly? When people came later, Xiao Yan and the others were tied up. Does this mean that Zhutian City can fight? Then Zhutian City won't attack? In the future, when enemies come in, they will fight directly. Where is the majesty of Zhutian City? The method of obtaining the power of the plane is not explained in detail. The city lord is only providing goods to mid-level customers, and then the original world is showing off. At the beginning, some regulations that should be set up in Zhutian City and the method of obtaining the power of the plane should be stated. It will not be easy to make mistakes in the later stage. You can start writing while it is still early
Are you just doing business? The good guys just give it to a cabbage house.
In the current environment of copying the same things, Lao Zhu can still write Zhutian novels without forgetting his original intention. We must support him!
Third place report🤓
Just install the anti-inflammatory and buy Vulcan Drive. It's too cheap to be able to fight with Huang and get up and down.
Is the old pig out of date?
This time the cover is finally normal. When I saw the previous cover, I had no desire to read the book. It was so ugly.
The author is here to give you an accurate answer. Is there a female protagonist? If so, it's still a harem