Ming Dynasty, Starting with Princess Shang

I have to say that Xu Da was killed by Zhu Yuanzhang. Have you read too much unofficial history?

Brother, can you check the information? I can't stand the second chapter. Luo Guanzhong was a novelist at the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty. He got up early and worked as a counselor under Zhang Shicheng, making suggestions and defeating Zhu Yuanzhang's subordinate Kang Maocai Later Zhang Shicheng demoted to the Yuan Dynasty. Six years later, Zhang Shicheng became king again and refused to listen to the advice. Luo Guanzhong returned to his hometown to write books In the third year of Hongwu, "The Popular Romance of the Three Kingdoms" has been written to the twelfth volume.

You started the 18th year of Hongwu, but in the end Queen Ma was still alive and well.

After all, I was a history teacher in my previous life. Are you the same in class?

Are you really knowledgeable? In the early Ming Dynasty, did you have lengths measured in meters? Be more serious about writing books

Queen Ma died in front of Zhu Biao. Queen Ma would have died long ago at that time. Do you have some common sense? It's really poisonous. 😤

The punctuation marks are so uncomfortable that the author doesn't read them after writing? Is it right to have a double quotation mark on a page of a book?

The writing is really rubbish, come in and tighten the screws 😅

Ming Dynasty's Fu Ma was so pitiful that it was not for a grown man to care for him.

I am too young to understand elementary school students?

I personally think that Zhu Di did not want to rebel at all at the beginning, because all his plans and steps for rebellion were done after he had no military power. If Zhu Di had long been rebellious, it would be absolutely impossible for him to rely on a palace and 800 servants to rebel. You must know that other vassal kings and vassal towns in history led tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands of people to rebel.

I specifically read the history books and found that it was really dangerous to be a hero in the Ming Dynasty, with a mortality rate of 76%. After the death of his son, he became even more perverted.

This is the beginning, I have no interest in reading further.

In the twelfth year of Zhizheng (1352), Ma married Zhu Yuanzhang, who was a general of the Red Scarf Army at the time. In the first month of the first year of Hongwu (1368), Zhu Yuanzhang proclaimed himself emperor in Yingtian Mansion (today's Nanjing City), and the country was named Daming. After the founding of Hongwu, Ma was appointed queen. In August of the fifteenth year of Hongwu (1382), Queen Ma died of illness at the age of 51. She was buried in Xiaoling Mausoleum of the Ming Dynasty and was given the posthumous title of Queen Xiaoci.

It's not too unpleasant to say, but you still have something of your own in this story, but firstly, many things are taken for granted, and organizational structures cannot be copied mechanically. Secondly, this sentence is not as good as a composition, and many of the words used are too dramatic.

You must have a big heart when writing historical novels, because here the research party is the most important.

There is no sense of immersion in this novel. I feel like I am writing a running biography or reading Lu Xun's diary😒

Don't you understand that Lao Zhu is so small-minded?