Chiyunxian

You. . . . If you start a book because you like it, it's hard to stick to it! Especially for books written by ordinary people, it is difficult to judge whether the writing is good or not without writing tens or even millions of words, and the results must be accumulated over time! I'll save it first, and then come back and take a look when I've written four to five million words.

In the ancient setting, calling parents is really a drama

The person who knocked on the door and pushed me over, since he is a mortal, hopes to have some persistence from a mortal.

If you don't make a good cover, very few people will see it 😥😥😥😥

Come on, author! Never be a eunuch! It may be difficult for a newbie to start a book, so I hope the author can persevere. The book suits my taste, so I kept following it and read a small part. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. I hope that like Lao Wang, there will be a Taoist companion who will support each other along the way, hahaha!

Just like Lao Wang, come over and take a look.

After reading more than ten chapters, I can see that although the author is writing a novel for the first time, his writing style is smooth and skillful, the plot is neither rushed nor too slow, reasonable and impartial, and the protagonist's character is calm and affectionate, which is very appetizing, and the writing is excellent! I hope to make a good outline and keep writing!

Just asked, I will support you with recommendation votes every day

Coming from Qinglian, I would like to give you a suggestion. The title of your book is too difficult to pronounce, and it does not give people an easy-to-understand and unique feeling.

The protagonist's hang-up has no sense of existence, or does the protagonist have a hang-up? Didn't feel it. I feel that the writing is good, relatively slow to get started, but not very exciting. The protagonist's skills are powerful but they are not reflected. You can show the protagonist's absolute suppression when fighting with monks of the same level. You can also arrange plots such as cross-level challenges, where you are chased by others, and then fight back. The protagonist keeps hunting. It's a bit boring. There is more than one way to get rich. You can intersperse it with writing about killing people and grabbing treasures, making a small copy or something, or suppressing a bandit, destroying a few cult strongholds, and designing some exciting plots. In this way, you can also show the protagonist's combat effectiveness through fighting skills, otherwise the plot will be too bland.

Lao Wang asked me to come over and take a look! I don't like it very much😍,

Why raise a deer instead of a flying spiritual bird? Breeding deer for barbecue?

The subject matter is good and the writing is not bad either. Lao Wang, the guy who came here is here to cheer you up.

I voted for the recommendation. The name is indeed a bit convoluted. Is it a family tradition?

The writing is very good, why don't you sign the contract?

I just voted for recommendation and wanted to take a look 😅

When I was in junior high school, I was able to write a book of 50,000 words, but luckily someone pushed me to write only two chapters.