Perfect World Reborn Lightning Child

I'm really speechless. Why do I think the protagonist is stupid? ? ? I think the protagonist is just an ordinary college student who has just traveled to a perfect world. He is very strong without actively hugging his thigh, okay? In the first few chapters, it's normal for him to be a little worried about destroying Emperor Huangtian's growth! And he has always been looking forward to breaking this fear and shackles. Wouldn't Chapter 8 break it? I strongly support the author's idea. It is not contradictory at all for ordinary people to enter the perfect world. It is a joke to simply say that the heart is invincible!

People of the same generation are afraid of karma. Without the past, what's the future? Those who have grown up are called Huangtian Emperors, and those who have failed halfway are called short-lived ghosts.

Read, disliked

Watch Pindao add a buff to you

What kind of skill is it to mess with Xiao Shitou's wife?,, If the protagonist really has the ability,,, go and seduce Liu Shen,,,

Does the name Thai Dog Man sound good? You may find it humorous, but I find it disgusting

Always afraid of cause and effect, worried about this and that. If the Immortal Emperor could change so easily, he wouldn't be called an Immortal Emperor. He has become an Immortal Emperor. No matter how you change him, he will still embark on the arbitrary path of eternity, and the fact that you traveled through time is the biggest cause and effect.

It's too stressful for the protagonist. Dao Baoping is a disciple of the Immortal King and there are so many tricks, but the result is that he is on par with Ning Chuan and the others? He is slow to level up at the bottom of the realm. He can't beat anyone. He is also arrogant and arrogant. The double undercover next door is almost flying. This one is still hanging around in the novice village. I saw that I wanted to become an alternative god and stopped watching. Isn't it strong to become a normal god? If you insist on suppressing it so hard, the protagonist will be like a waste Contrast that, The protagonist is a disciple of the Immortal King, has a treasure vase of the Great Dao, and has a supreme ancestor. He still practices the Nine Realms Thunder Scripture, has a background and resources, is a time traveler, and has a vision Others have the most immortal-level and supreme-level scriptures and treasures, that's it? Still can't dominate the Nine Heavens? Still hanging around Novice Village? Are the disciples of the Immortal King too useless? I don't know if the author wants to suppress the protagonist by making him a different kind of god. What? Is the protagonist a loser? Can't you become a god normally? Do you have to become a different kind of god? Author, you can refer to the book "Perfect Double Undercover" next door. The writing style is quite good and the protagonist is not suppressed. I have followed it from the beginning. When the protagonist has the idea of ​​becoming a god in an alternative way, I can't stand it anymore. I feel so frustrated. 😓😓😓You are suppressing it too hard, so stop it, author. Stop suppressing it.

Sending the first generation to the nether world was a failure. It was originally in the sea, but ended up going to the pond. It was really just for the sake of the plot.

Being arbitrary for eternity sounds great, but in fact it is a helpless decision for the parties involved.

Come on, unless the protagonist wants to be a passerby, the butterfly effect is inevitable. He asked his ancestors to send him down to the Eight Realms. He is still worried about this and that. What a fool.

? Shouldn't you kill You Tian decisively if you know it will affect the future? You talk a lot of nonsense and end up with nothing, you jump to it for no reason, and you can't grasp the fun of the early plot, so you've already jumped on this one.

A very good fanfic, and don't listen to the guy above, it's pretty good so far. Just cultivating the thunder method is of no use, and it is a waste of golden fingers. A Tongtian and Ten Thousand Dao practitioners are the road to the top. Stick to your own ideas and write them down. Come on😄

No wonder, it's too frustrating, too low-key, and doesn't have the style of a perfect world!

Something that everyone is paying attention to: the protagonist has a change of mentality. It is not a dog licking, it is indeed a harem. So far, the plot is not bad.

I feel like the protagonist hasn't taken off yet. The double undercover next door is quite good. It's a real genius. The protagonist feels a bit overpowered. He's just strong, not super. The descendant of the Immortal King is at least not that useless, right?

If someone provokes someone like that, the result will still be anticlimactic. I'll look at it and withdraw.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

Sigh... Invincible articles are the most boring. Wouldn't it be nice to have people who share the same ideas? Why are all the fanfics carved out of the same mold? Ye Fan in the world of Zhetian is still not invincible in the end, and even Shi Hao is not invincible in the later stage of the holy ruins world. Moreover, in the perfect world, Shi Hao has achieved such great achievements because he has experienced so much heartache and pain, the death of friends, the death of relatives, and the huge pressure of the destruction of the world, before forcefully forcing him to the state where he had to be invincible. If you can portray this kind of sadness, blood, and tears, then you can be arbitrary for eternity. Only with enemies can you realize your friends, only with death can you understand the value of life, only with pressure can you transcend a realm beyond the reach of ordinary geniuses, and if you want to reach the level of Shi Hao, the price you have to pay is probably something that your author may not be able to bear.

I think this point is quite poisonous. If Lightning Son doesn't major in thunder, why should he engage in all kinds of magic? So why did you write about Lightning Son? The thunder method is already strong enough, but the Wanfa method falls to the bottom.

Come on, author, write well. Your book is really good. Although the signing is a bit late, I believe you can do better, come on

I just want to ask the author, when you face someone whose status and strength are not as good as your own, don't you think it's awkward when you use the title "I'm under", a title used by ordinary people, in an extraordinary article? Isn't it good to use "I" and "I"? When you write about extraordinary, you have to use extraordinary thinking. The title "I'm under" was used by ancient literati when they faced people who were stronger than themselves. Don't you feel uncomfortable reading it yourself?

The writing is quite good, especially in the first few chapters. After the protagonist's mentality changes, the editor should ask the author to sign the contract!

The writing is too messy and there is no sense of hierarchy. It is difficult to read.

Do you have no confidence in yourself? Can you be a genius if you accept everything?

Will Liu Shen accept disciples if he is too good at writing? . . . .

At that time, I thought the writing was okay, but why did it stop?