Prehistoric: a Filial Son of the Dragon Clan, Who Imprisoned His Father at the Beginning

I just had to work hard to gain some brainpower while playing Stone Man. After reading your book, I immediately said, "Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba, Abba,

😁😁So handsome Cute. . .

When I saw Chapter 19, Yuan Feng's private life was in chaos and he ruined Kong Xuan's mother, so that he had Kong Xuan. This paragraph does not seem to be written by a normal author. Yuan Feng, an innate god and demon, actually ruined the maid and gave birth to Kong Xuan. It's impossible to think about it. He was conceived by combining the energy of the five elements and the two energies of yin and yang. Where did he come from?

Having a system is a cheat. Many people cannot understand that having a system is also funny. How is it different from hating the rich? But this article is not just a system article, it is a brainless system article...

If you don't know how to write about the ancient system, then don't write it. The protagonist was born during the Great Tribulation of Dragons and Phoenix. The Ancestral Dragon is the first dragon in the world. Where did the ancient dragon clan come from? And can you stop being brainless? What are fellow practitioners from Three Thousand Avenues?

There is a feeling of "the emperor cultivates the land with a golden hoe". If you don't want to brag, you can check how the Great Luo Jinxian is set up in Chinese mythology. If it doesn't work, go to the fan group of ancient novels to try it. If you don't want to lose face, go directly to the author group to ask. I really feel sorry for the author who has written so many words but the results are not good enough. Use love to generate electricity.

This kind of novel can be put on the shelves, and you have accepted Qidian. How much will the author pay you?

I can write more than a thousand chapters in this book? Even if the cultivation level of the legitimate son of the ancestral dragon is low, it is still not a level to write? Dragon and Phoenix wars are calculated in trillions, you say the number is small? To increase the population of the dragon tribe, how many tribes are you going to be breeding dragons? How about fun? For his income, Kong Xuan still needs spiritual materials to hook up with him? Who doesn't know that Kong Xuan Dapeng was pregnant during the Yuanfeng War and died not long after that? Is it written as abandoned child here? Junk books

I was rewarded with a lot of things, but in the end I was still a novice. I was just a novice and ran around all day long. I tolerated running around, but one second I was in the starry sky and the next second I was back in the East China Sea. I have no concept of distance?

A loving father and a filial son! Great filial piety! Bring filial piety to the emperor (Emperor: the chosen son) 😂

I feel sorry for the author, this book's performance is a bit poor

Qidian's own son 😄 Newcomer registration is a second-level author

I beg the author if he can force his wits down in order to have a follow-up.

Although it is a piece of scrap paper, it is okay. It is just a piece of scrap paper. In the end, I wrote it a little too hastily. Maybe the author didn't want to write it anymore, so I simply went through it briefly. Also, the part about the battle against Tiandao was a bit long. My evaluation is average. After all, reading cool articles doesn't use your brain.

Why don't a few authors explain how the system came about?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I only updated two chapters yesterday, and I will update four chapters today.

After reading it, I think it's very good. The author keeps up the good work and hopes to have a side story to tell a more leisurely story QAQ

What rubbish novel? Decrease wisdom. Brainless. Vulgar. I can't even type the words clearly. The protagonist's name changes from one name to another. Called for a while. Ao Xuan. Later he was called Long Xuan. The names of other supporting characters change from one to the next. Who would be disgusted if this kind of rubbish novel was published? There is also a fee. This kind of novel is also charged

This is a novel that you can read just by looking at the chapter titles🙂

I stepped on a big trap, 1. I changed my name. I came from Baidu. I saw the recommended advertisement was "The Dutiful Son of the Ancestral Dragon", but the title of the work at the starting point was "Ancient Ancients: The Dutiful Son of the Dragon Clan". I was so stupid that it took me a long time to find it. This wave of advertising is equivalent to a big discount 2. It is a very blunt pretense and a slap in the face. When the Qilin and Feng clan were besieging the front, they must have waited until the entire hall was opened before activating the formations, props, and instant kills, and then praised them. It looked like a tomato style, maybe It is for the sake of word count, but books like Qidian are not popular. Instead, they are considered to be intellectual plots 3. The description of other characters is very intellectual. During the siege of the main hall, some dragons who were the main force cried, and some elders jumped when they returned from the victory and were unstoppable. Come out to ridicule, (although the author has patched it here, the elder seems to have a halo of wisdom, but this kind of plot will make people very uncomfortable and unnatural when seeing it, and affects the overall reading experience. It is not a problem of the setting, but a problem of reading habits. Even if you accept the setting But the reading habits developed at the beginning are also very uncomfortable to see such plots, and the frequency of this total plot needs to be reduced) In addition, there are many other small pitfalls that have also been stepped on, such as the previous time issue, thousands of Years of recovery, but the protagonist did not receive any rewards and did not do anything (it felt like a waste of time) A few days passed, and later Fate said that thinking of the war ten years ago, if the combat power data was wrong, maybe readers would forgive me, but It is very easy to read this for a long time, which will make people very uncomfortable. I feel that the author does not take this book seriously Finally, the plot of this book actually has a lot of laughs, but it does have too many tricks. It makes me very suspicious that the author is a newcomer transferred from other websites. It's a pity that this book has written more than 1,000 chapters and I spent a lot of time and effort, but I didn't get the corresponding results. I can only leave you with a little advice. If you want to start writing a work again, don't use the pretentious routine to quickly set the word count (pretend to slap the face) You can have it, but it can't be so obvious or classic), Before writing, you can read more of Qidian's more popular works, get to know Qidian's taste, and write a book. If it's already on the shelves, but there aren't many readers yet, you can consider changing it to another one.