Pirates: Platinum Star of the Charlotte Family

When one of the protagonists has a stand-in, I feel that if the book is well written, it will definitely become popular. But when the second and third characters have stand-ins, the book will be unreadable.

Forget about all the substitutes. . . .

I feel like the protagonist is a bit vague. How is the protagonist's strength now? Can he be domineering and domineering in two colors? I feel like there is no latest protagonist data. There are also Devil Fruits, especially the Blue Dragon Fruit and the Yamata no Orochi Fruit. Why are you keeping them and not eating them? The correct way to use the Devil Fruit is to eat it early and develop it, and turn it into strength. If you don't plan to sell it and feed it to your family, then hurry up!

Star Platinum has a strength of tens of tons at most, and Luffy, who was able to throw manatees away in the East China Sea, has at least a thousand tons of strength.

There are stand-ins in One Piece, OK. But what the hell are you trying to do to get me a land for a wealthy couple? In this case, Fat Tiger has nothing but only one fruit. Then why be a general?

Young Charlotte Lingling

This book is quite well-written... Although the comment section is not very friendly, I think if I keep writing it, when the number of words increases, my grades will not be too bad.

There's too much nonsense, it's quite convoluted to read😅😅

The author, Black Maria, can also be subdued. She was also in Wano when she was a child. As one of the six flying packs, she is still valuable.

It has been cut and the book can be deleted.

The name looked promising at first, but in the end, all the members were introduced as stand-ins?

There are too many explanation words, which are superficial and a bit boring. Moreover, the protagonist has no talent but no fighting ability and just "learns knowledge" all day long, and he doesn't know what he is doing after learning. There's nothing outstanding about it, it's just that the original One Piece was stiffly added with the stand-in and the protagonist as a time-traveler, without any major changes or impact, and the time-travel experience was lonely. The writing and description are not smooth either. From time to time, "dang" and "ke" pop up, and then use these emphatic words to explain why the family members look weak but are actually "strong". In fact, the author is not creative and cannot write well for fear of being out of touch, which is very embarrassing. All I can say is that the idea is good, but that's all, it's not well written. I look forward to the progress of the author's next book, keep up the good work😊!

Why is the Charlotte Family's Platinum Star missing?

This is the third novel about the Charlotte family that I have read. Broken Beast Erlang, wrote the book, The Pirate Emperor's Son Song Huangling, wrote the book, The Pirates: Charlotte's Eldest Son The guy from Jing B, Grumpy Erlang, is a super liar and a eunuch Song Huangling is also written as a eunuch So I think you are the two of them