When God Begins to Evolve Again

The reason why this book ended so quickly is probably the same as playing games. It was not very popular and the early pace was a bit slow. But Twelve's writing style did write a good story. At first, I thought it would cover the main universe. But now that it's finished, it feels like it's fragmented. It feels like it's over just after it started? It's hard to let go And in the whole book, Han Ling'er has very few scenes. In the end, I don't know if Han Ling'er will come back. Personally, I think it might be better to include the part about Han Ling'er coming back? But in that case, the ending seems to be a bit repetitive with the game. It is another ending of going to the big world and leaving suspense. Such a happy ending can be considered satisfactory. I still hope to see the protagonists of several books competing on the same stage. Every time I see the end of the novel, I always have an inexplicable fantasy. It would be great if this story could be written forever. It is indeed a very unrealistic idea. But I am still looking forward to Twelve's next story. Maybe Twelve will not write a book in the future, but at least as long as Twelve continues to write, I will always support you. I will write a paragraph after finishing one in the future😎😎 It will be a kind of memory to come back and look at it in a few years. Thank you Twelve for bringing this story, I will continue to look forward to and support you, come on Twelve. Finally, I wish Twelve good health and take a good rest😃

It is a book that I am hesitant to pursue. I always felt that "Li Xiu Xiaodao" was very oily, and the communication with the president's daughter was also very oily, and the people who cooperated with his pretentiousness were also very oily. Of course, depending on their status, they may indeed communicate in this way, but I just can't like these characters (according to my preference, it would look much more comfortable to be as indifferent and detached as the characters who let me laugh). In addition, since it was already very powerful from the beginning, it is difficult to feel the excitement of pretending to be awesome (the author chose a more difficult path to write). Now looking at the various trial places does not really bring a sense of freshness. From time to time, the small inventions and the background are well integrated, but they are not beyond imagination. The reveal of demon spirits and the culture of the demon kingdom, as well as Li Xiu's life experience, is indeed worth looking forward to, but as it seems to be the only main line, it must happen far away - so these chapters now seem to be watery.

I used to read Super Gene in school, and now I work to support Twelve's new books. I have always liked books written by Twelve.

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As expected of a great writer, are the books he wrote only a few years ago?

Why can't the world's best magician forcefully occupy a door? Don't you have any power? Isn't it number one in the world? Are you going to come to someone else's door? Wu Yanzu: Are you good at fighting? Being able to spank is useless. When you come out to hang out, you need to talk about your power and background! Call God? It turns out to be Xiaobie Fan! ! !

Regarding the consultation post, I saw that a big boss opened the book, and the comments were pretty good, so I was eager to get into it. Then after reading a few chapters, I felt weird. The main character, the boss, is the number one in magic equipment. Then he emphasized that this is mental, and the physical body is meaningless. When he saw the talent of the protagonist in Chapter 7, he said that this talent is also the golden finger. As long as the body can keep up, I can copy it. I think I can become a genius. No, I have already achieved the number one in one aspect. I am already a grown-up boss. How did I finally come to the conclusion that the body is useless to me anyway?

It's been so long, and you still have the homepage recommendation 🙂🙂. So ranked.

For people who are at the top of a field, why do they need to start a field from scratch? Even if they cannot directly control a door, it is not enough to find someone to cooperate? Is the first magician so shameless?

Shuangwen is Shuangwen, and behind the scenes is behind the scenes. Don't name it so much like Shuangwen, but it's not Shuangwen. Don't name it so Shuangwen. Of course, you don't have to read Shuangwen. But if you give a Shuangwen title, the content is different. How do you want us to substitute it?

I miss the five updates a day back then 😆

My personal style is still so distinct. I have written so many books that are exactly the same, with many pitfalls and weak content.

In the previous part of the trial, he looked like a third-rate writer, but as soon as he was put on the shelves, his level improved a hundred times. What are you doing 😊

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Filling Festival Wishing Season"} It's the old style. Many plots are never foreshadowed, just like new settings. Many things have inexplicable reasons and are not explained. It is the aura of the protagonist. For example, the rules in many copies do not work for the protagonist. It's good to watch, but it just feels a bit out of place. It's like the protagonist is being dragged forward by a thread. I don't know what the end point is, I don't know what I encounter on the road, and I don't know why I encounter those things on the road. I just know that things keep reversing, and the protagonist appears to be a saint.

The simplest question is that the magic costume is very strong, but the body of the magic costumer is very weak. So will the body of the magic costumer be transformed or transformed by the magic costume? Otherwise, won't the muscles of the ordinary body be injured after making the magic costume?

It's full of flaws. You specifically set up a hundred contribution points just to make this money. You might as well read the previous book. At least I read the previous one. This sports is divided into life and death. Did you get inspiration from watching the World Cup? And this God code name gave me a feeling like a crooked dragon king. I kept reading and reading, and I didn't even finish the twenty chapters.

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Bibi Dong to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch.

This writing style and this plot are really average.

"Gene" is the first online novel I read, and then I read "Game" until the update was discontinued. I just saw it updated again the day before yesterday. I burst into tears. Come on, twelve 🌹🌹🌹

Alas, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. The details include pretense, shocking the audience, and a plot. But really, I always feel that there is a lack of emotion. It is completely set up that the protagonist has to pretend and find reasons to act. There is no living character. There is no sense of participation and no seasoning. It's very boring.

Is there a possibility that this book was submitted to the wrong division? The author originally wanted to submit it to the sports division.

When will the new book come out, or maybe I'll finish writing the sword suit😡

Author, the name of this book should be more attractive to readers. At least it should be no worse than the Super God Gene.

Brother, please, please read a new book quickly. I can't live without your book (please ignore me and think about your new book)

General background: In an initial world, the origin of the world (Suppressing Spirit Stone) gave birth to 16 ancestral spirits. Then Tang Tianzhen polluted the origin of the world with a drop of his own blood. The origin of the world worked hard for a long time to expel the pollution and formed four evil spirits. Li Boyang (president, the Heavenly Emperor of the Demonic Kingdom) led the primitive people to create the Demonic Kingdom. The Demonic Kingdom built the Soul-Suppressing Palace around the Soul-Suppressing Stone. Then Li Boyang came from outside the world (the sky was cracked), shattered the Soul-Suppressing Stone, and released four evil spirits to form three forbidden areas. Later, the Demon Kingdom disappeared inexplicably, and the capital Tianmen became the fourth forbidden area. Li Boyang went to the earth and founded the Changsheng Heaven. The first half (the protagonist enters the Immortal Heaven) is okay, but the subsequent settings are very messy.

Waiting for new books😭

It's been a few months since I started using Qidian. If I don't update it, I'll uninstall it.

The realm is poorly written, as if it was thought up on the spur of the moment.

I wipe it! ! ! The author has published a new book. Please go to his page to support him. He didn't notify us in the old book 😡😡😡

A great book weighed down by its title! Twelve's books are as beautiful as ever. Like it!