Zhutian: Starting from Xiaoao and Pretending to Be a Divine Calculator

This opening is quite speechless. It's a good idea to play the trick, but you have to get involved yourself. The benefits of the chess player changing into a chess piece are not too big, right?

The protagonist is extremely talented and can just practice the Sunflower Manual. What else can he learn about Shaolin Internal Kung Fu?

There are too many Jin Yong, I'm tired

It's boring. It's covered in the skin of a divine calculation, without the "core" of divine calculation Telling the plot and documents that will happen is not called divine calculation. It is called divine calculation. It is broad intelligence, deep influence, good at planning, and has plans Telling someone what year and month, meeting someone, which road to take, whether it is good or bad, this is divine calculation. The approach was wrong from the very beginning. The two concepts of intelligence and fortune telling were not clearly distinguished.

This... After reading it for a while, the subject matter is good, but the entry point is not good. To enter Xiaoao, you have to dig the grave first, the ancient tomb, and the Vulture Palace. Okay, you don't have to go, then wouldn't it be nice to go to Huashan? Yue Buqun's character starts out as a gentleman, with the lowest risk factor. So let's talk about the most low-level person, how about making a name for yourself in the world, and doing some magic tricks? Let others come to you to reveal secrets, so your B rating should be higher. Reading your book now, it gives the impression that you forced yourself into it, which is very embarrassing😓!

Absorbing stars and merging them into a power-transforming method? Isn't that degeneracy? The star-absorbing star can absorb internal energy, and the rubbish that transforms into energy has an egg effect.

Don't just write about Jin Yong, okay? All five martial arts writers can be okay~

Another novel about Buddhism

I can't watch anymore when I see the protagonist being surrounded and killed by Ren Yingying. To be honest, the author has too many secrets and can't justify it. Just like this, why can he build a nuclear power plant? Because we have genius scientists. Why can he reach the full level in one day? Because we have genius players. Why can he cure terminal illnesses? Because we have genius doctors. Who can read this without being confused? In order to complete his own original plot, the author does not care whether the logic is smooth or not, but just writes it like this. People who read it are baffled.

When I clicked on the character list and saw that except for the protagonist, all the others were female characters, I immediately didn't want to look at it anymore.

Why did I feel so awkward at the beginning? It felt like this god was not cool. It was inexplicable.

To be a person who will leave a name in history? You have a system. Don't you want to live forever? You just want to be a knight and leave your name in history? I haven't finished reading three chapters yet, and there are poisonous points everywhere.

The only martial arts warrior in the world is Jin Yong. Hahaha

July 1st is a day worth remembering. Sign and set sail! Fight again at the starting point! This time, never give up!

The novel is fine, but the core of the fanfiction is correct. Come on, author.

After reading Chapter 29, I felt a bit boring. It's not that the writing is bad. Zhu Tianwen has been grinding in the same world for a long time, which tests his patience.

Jin Yong has seen too much and is really tired. The whole point of Gulong, Huang Yi, Jade Dynasty is also acceptable.

After gaining strength, he becomes a complete villain, becoming more and more swollen.

What the hell are you writing! There are too many private items added, so don't write if you don't have the ability to get it back! The writing is nondescript!

I'd like to write about the story of Fighting Swordsman in the Snow earlier. Why is my combat power ranked behind Zhu Xian?

I like Guo Lifei's version of Yin Susu, especially the wife character. I haven't read the book yet, so I don't know what it is like.

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After chapter fifty it's stream of consciousness.

Author, please write a hundred or eighty chapters later. Is the Emperor of Zhai Zhu good?

Why do all the astrologers like to start with a smile? ? ? Tired of seeing it all