Makino Iron Blood

Recommended words: The pace is good. Everything that needs to be explained in the first five chapters is explained, and a small climax is reached, which is quite gripping. Although the classification is martial arts, it is more like history. I can't tell whether it is from the Southern Song Dynasty or the Northern Song Dynasty. In short, conflicts and disputes are inevitable. And the overall writing style is more delicate, and the perspective of the heroine at the beginning, so the author... Rating: C Category: Martial Arts-Traditional Martial Arts Attributes: Song History Heroine Poison testing suggestions: A little standard. The use of punctuation in the article is not very standardized, including but not limited to the inability to use ellipsis (...), Misuse of quotation marks, inappropriate commas, etc. It is recommended to modify it. A little theme. The classification is martial arts, but the story is written like an ancient novel. There are a little bit of martial arts elements, but the perspective of the heroine, some scenes, and detailed descriptions... It really makes people feel that it has nothing to do with martial arts. A bit of blood. After the female protagonist and the male protagonist (probably) met, the whole plot became ridiculous and witty. There was no such thing as resourcefulness and humiliation and blood feud. It was just an inexplicable kindness and trust. It really didn't look like a martial arts novel. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

I've written 540,000 words. It's so powerful. I get a lot of inspiration when I want to write. But when I don't want to write, I just don't want to write.

It feels good, but it seems that there are not many readers, which is a pity. Waugh had a way to get the book noticed by a wider audience. Wowei: CCJCCJ129

I am the original author of "Makino Iron Blood". The work has not been completed yet. I want to continue writing now. Why can't I see the continuation page? Please help me restore it and let me finish writing.

Brother, the martial arts genre is not a great one, don't touch platinum, and has no fan base. Who watches martial arts? If you change the city, fantasy is easier to sign than martial arts. Editor signings also depend on data. No one has watched martial arts now. It is a niche within a niche. After all, the number of people on other channels is there. Nowadays, writing about martial arts is done for love, and editors also have quotas for signing contracts.

How often the sky is filled with fireflies, how often the moon sets and the stars fall. I always realize after writing a chapter that time passes like water. . . . . I hope that the words I wrote with my sweat will be liked by my relatives. Xilou Tingyu would like to express my gratitude🙏🙏

Very good, but has some paragraphing errors, as well. . . . . It doesn't look right. Is it a layout problem?

The writer's assistant is here, and the recommendation vote is for you.

These weird periods and colons seem to really affect reading, but try your best

Your vote recommendation makes me feel that my machines are not human machines. How did you do it at 18? Can the drones be sent to you?

Come on, come on, I think the writing is good, but the paragraphs are a bit long when I read them on my mobile phone, and my eyes are tired.

Come on, boss, your writing is good!

Brother, you didn't sign a contract for 130,000 words. How do you keep going? . . .

Writing a book should be a quick thing If you feel unhappy writing this novel, I suggest you start a new one It feels like your writing method is relatively old. Learn from the more popular genres and hone the text I wish you happiness