Beginning with the Black Robe, the Heavens

This book asks you to write it like a running account. Who is Arthur? Is it the protagonist? What makes you write like a fool? And he's still a dispensable supporting character like Yakuza🤫🤫

In the new episode, the soldier boy is a native of the motherland and his father is probably not going to have sex with the protagonist and the others later on. It is estimated that Butcher and Hughie will take No. 5 To permanently gain superpowers. 🤫

Does the protagonist of this book have any of the bullshit problems of his ancestors? That is, brain degeneration or deformity due to lack of love! ?

Another person who foolishly thinks that there is a word "god" in the name of Super God Universe, and thinks that he is a stupid person. Please, would you like to find out their settings? Don't blame the sky and the earth just because you have a divine word. Their concept is that the supreme leader of a civilization capable of interstellar colonization + the holder of the highest individual force is God.

People who love watching this TV series want to be citizens of the motherland. What does your friendship with a bunch of beautiful Chinese losers mean? You are not a compatriot. If you don't cheat them, you are considered a good person. If you don't go to China, you are a hero!

I only read a few chapters of this book, and then I couldn't stand it anymore. The plot is one thing, but the other thing is that this book doesn't have many words to describe the scenes and character dynamics. The pig's trotters are written like the characters in the plot and are dispensable. Please, what you wrote is pig's trotters. There has to be some close-up or inner monologue, right? The technique used is like a picture passing through a mirror, without any characteristics at all.

Well, it can be seen that the author is a newbie. From the beginning to the end (no, I only read ten chapters), there is a running account. There is no transition, no excessiveness, no psychological activities of the characters, no details of the characters' characteristics, no details of the characters' demeanor... Etc., Etc., Almost nothing. My suggestion is that this book should be used as a practice. What I mentioned above is written on a card and stuck on the wall. You can see it when you look up when typing, so practice more. There are also things like article structure and plot rhythm that cannot be explained clearly in a few sentences. It is best to sign up for a class and learn it.

Can anyone tell me what the character of the protagonist is? Whenever I see a protagonist with a hometown character, I just hope that someone will come out and give him a beating and teach him how to behave

If you go to the super god shit pit, you will really become shit.

Can the protagonist go to the world of Witch? I just watched Witch! I think these two sisters are a bit beautiful, so the world should be ruled by justice, and the protagonist should use justice and love to influence these two sisters,,,

Doctor Strange in Marvel's darkened fusion summons has permanent soul abilities. Can the power of Zansa and the superpower of killing and looting be combined into a permanent ability? . . From experience card to permanent After all, if you want to become a top person, why can you only have the experience version ability? Normal and permanent Zanza is the way to go. The trial version of Zanza, which can be transferred, also has the ability to suppress encounters with obvious shortcomings, allowing you to forcefully shout Zanza. . . . This is funny

I thought it was the black robe in the sequel to Journey to the West. The result is not, bad review

I can't find who the protagonist is🤣, bye~

The protagonist will keep talking, keep talking, keep talking

This is not the type of people from the motherland, this is Tang San

Other people's novels are written at double the speed, and even slowed down for the sake of literature. It's good for you, it looks like double speed or triple speed. I skipped through it and started directly from where the protagonist was at the Mutant Academy. I just felt that the writing was not smooth at all. I don't know how to put it specifically, but it's just the writing, dialogue narration, etc., I feel that it lacks that kind of lubrication. There are some missing words between the words, which makes it not look smooth at all.

Kill Godzilla instantly, and then go back and forth with the claws and other miscellaneous soldiers... He can't even destroy the claws without relying on the lightning that transforms into Shazam... I can't understand this fluctuation in power.

I watched the part about the spiritual cage directly. I felt that the dialogue between the protagonist and Bai Yuekui and the others was too awkward. This writing needs to improve the characters, especially the dialogue between the characters. As your strength increases, your character will become higher, but you can't still be a loser after becoming powerful.

If you don't create multiple heroines, you also travel through a shitty world. Come to think of it, Bai Yuekui, Jing Nan, and Xia Dou all seem pretty good😍😍

Do pig's feet conquer the universe like Jupiter? ?

I can't stand your plot and writing style.

The protagonist is not normal and can easily be killed.

Close combat soldier boy suppresses the motherland in all aspects, the advantage of the motherland is flying

May I ask if this novel is a single or a harem?

You might as well write about cultivating immortality as much as possible

Luo Ji, who was given a three-body animation, was given a Kryptonian physique, and then awakened and became a native of the motherland at the moment the girl was hit (activating the dark personality)

Please tell me if I can do whatever I want🤓🤓🤓