People in the Heavens Are Panicking

The author has no common sense, which makes it uncomfortable to read

The novel is written in a hurry, as if someone is chasing the protagonist, and the plot develops very quickly.

The previous one was okay, but Zhu Xian is simply extremely poisonous.

The pace is so fast. There are only three worlds in just a few dozen chapters. In such a rush, when the number of words increases, will there be so many worlds to write 🤐

Why resurrect Baguio? It's better to resurrect Baguio's mother!

This is a detailed outline.

I suspect that the Yitian that the protagonist travels to is from a TV series with good special effects. The martial arts that the protagonist practices and the people he summons are summoned from a TV series with poor special effects. Otherwise, it cannot be explained that the protagonist has practiced so many magical skills and is still weak.

Finally, there is a book that makes me willing to kill Zhao Min after passing through Yitian and Slaying the Dragon.

Why do I feel like the main character is a bit of a virgin?

The Quanzhen Seven Sons may not be able to defeat the Wudang Seven Heroes

The title of the book is breathtaking, and the content is okay and quite fluent.

The skill of summoning helpers at the beginning is pretty good, and the next two worlds don't feel a bit monotonous with no one to do anything.

I feel like the main character is a bit crazy

There's no writing style at all, it's just talk

The writing is very good, not out of rhythm and not too clumsy.

The writing is good. At least it looks cool. Some people in the comment section like to watch slow-burn movies.

Why are there so many authors who don't have names?