This Devil's System Is a Bit Tricky

The subject matter is very good and the writing style is quite humorous, but the content connection is not very appropriate and needs to be improved.

Staring: Congratulations to the author for not changing his mind and returning to his old career to continue writing novels.

Author, I personally feel that the biggest poisonous point of this book is that the system is too coercive. In more than ten pictures, almost everything the protagonist does is caused by the system issuing tasks for him to do. Will it still be like this later?

It's too messy, as described before, you need to restore 20% of your cultivation level to build the foundation. I can't bear it anymore

You might as well report to the system every time you want to eat or go to the toilet.

I had nothing to do yesterday and finished reading this book. To my surprise, what the author wrote is not a traditional fantasy novel. It does not blindly upgrade monsters and equipment, nor is it a harem stallion novel. After the protagonist Han Yunqing escaped from the execution ground in the beginning, he fled to a barren land where bandits were rampant and established his own power. While conquering the surrounding bandit forces and developing his own territory, he pretended to be a wild prodigy and a loose cultivator to sneak into various major sects and amass money for himself to earn development funds. At the same time, he is investigating the enemy who framed him. The multi-line narrative is quite stable. The story is also humorous, light-hearted and enjoyable. It requires some patience in the early stage and it will become more and more interesting as it becomes more and more interesting. It is worth joining!

Nowadays, the pace of system-streamed writing has taken off at a fast pace, and the first twenty chapters of many books are full of routines that make it fun to take off. But after it was put on the shelves, it was a mess! As a bookworm for ten years, I don't want my books to follow that same path! I have been thinking about whether the system flow can develop a good story that can make the protagonist have distinctive characteristics without losing the group image. Can we develop a worldview that is as complex and exciting as historical literature? The answer is yes, but the price is that it requires some eloquent stories! I don't want to simply use the system as a panel for the protagonist to fight monsters and upgrade. Instead, through some seemingly nonsensical requirements and incomprehensible tasks, I gradually introduce the protagonist into the chess game, from a chess piece to a chess player. The middle process requires experience and patience. Similarly, a good article can make people keep reading. The more interesting the article is, the more you read. It also requires a certain amount of patience in the early stage. If you are pursuing fast-travel writing, it is true that my writing is not suitable, but if you want to slowly enter a good state with the story, I would like to ask all readers to give me some confidence and support! It's not easy for a newbie to get started, so gentlemen please give me some encouragement!

It feels like the task of this system is to forcefully push the plot.

The entry point at the beginning is really good, at least it aroused my interest.

The heroine is quite unique and lovable, and the author did a great job in portraying her.

As a new author, please be considerate and considerate. Some minor points can be ignored.

I don't know the reviews either, the beginning is ok but then it's boring and gives me a very confusing feeling

There are too many tricks to challenge masters and rebel against disciples. It doesn't look good.

If possible, please polish it up a bit, use punctuation marks in a standardized way, and make the layout tidier.

It can be seen that the author has a good command of writing, especially the psychological description of the heroine, which is very delicate.

It feels like the protagonist is completely led by the system😡

If you have a good book, please support it and give it a recommendation!

Is it possible that the protagonist traveled through time and then upgraded to the Demon King, and in the end the reincarnation skill caused him to lose his memory and only remember the memory before time travel?

This is a sand sculpture novel, I bet 50 cents

It is recommended that the author finish writing one book after another. It's the end of the month, I'm lazy, I clicked on it and it was okay, so I voted. Usually investors will avoid multi-openings by new and old authors. Especially new authors who don't know the book. As for the old authors, please pay attention. They rarely publish more books. If they publish more books, it must be because the previous one is rotten or just rotten. The reason is that a person's energy is limited. At the beginning, the passion is still there but he doesn't feel tired. After the passion, he is often like a chicken.

It's okay. It's a good book with a wonderful plot. It's worth following.

That's great. It's not a bit hard for the author to write such a good novel. Come on. Looking forward to the update.