Hunting the Sunbreakers

It's so awkward. The writing is okay, but the various prehistoric tropes, such as starting as a useless character, being looked down upon by everyone, hiding his talents, and getting into trouble because of unrelated beautiful women, are just indescribable.

I just don't understand. The first part of the previous book was clearly well-written, so how did it fall apart later on? The ending was even worse, so ridiculous that it left everyone speechless. And that female lead surnamed Mu was never even mentioned again. Is this how you treat your readers?

Why not start a new book to continue the story of Dragon Seal? You could write about Sun Yan's younger brother, or even a prequel. You could write about Wu Yanqiao, Bai Xiuluo, Lin Xinghe, Sun Xiao, or Dongfang Huang. Filling in the gaps in Dragon Seal's plot would be much better than this terrible book.

I still think Xiao Ao is yyds

Those who are commenting must be long-time readers, right? The online game "Shield of the Sky" and "Dragon Seal War God" were clearly written so well, and the hype for "Supreme Sword Emperor" was also well done in the early and middle stages, but what kind of garbage did they write later? I saw that you started a new book before, and I was excited to follow it because this big shot is a bit sneaky, but I found that it also had a bad ending and was not interesting.

Dragon Seal was so amazing back then, how come the later books have become increasingly disappointing?

Even now, when I'm experiencing a reading slump, I still reread "The Proud Tycoon" from the beginning. I really love it. If the author continues to write about online games, I will definitely support them. Among online game novels, "The Proud Tycoon" is the only one I can read multiple times without getting tired of it.

I've read *Shield Guardian* repeatedly from middle school to university; it's truly captivating. I also really enjoyed *The Legend of the Condor Heroes*. The author hasn't written any more online game novels since then, so I hope to see more from them.

Writing books casually? He disappeared for over a year, and when he came back, he didn't say anything. Is this a case of "if it doesn't become a hit, it'll just flop"?

It's finished, so it's time for a final verdict. It's understandable that Banbu cut the book due to its poor performance. Banbu needed to change his writing style; the simple "golden finger" leveling-up and monster-slaying with a constant companion grandpa just doesn't work anymore. You can see Banbu's attempt to change things up: incorporating game-like equipment into fantasy novels.