Beast Control Begins with Evolution

It's great, I feel it's well written, it's a very realistic and cruel alternate world. Very strong. It's just too shallow, I entered the pit too early, and I was trembling. Come on and work harder! ! !

If serious people play any game, I just skip it.

The author may not discriminate against women, but the stereotype is quite strong. The heroine is quite sassy, ​​but it's a bit unbearable that the excellent supporting characters are basically all men. It would be better to open a harem and write a prostitution novel. And let's not talk about anything else. Your logic is very problematic. There is no saying in this world that women are less talented, right? Why are there situations like "a little girl falls in love with a big man and can't quit" and "there are only 8 strong women out of 25"? The uniqueness of the heroine should not be shown by portraying the weakness of women. At the beginning, I could keep watching because of my love for the heroine, but by the end I couldn't stand it anymore. Moreover, the author said that writing excellent male characters is like a male author writing beautiful women. For this original intention, is it really uncomfortable to have a harem? Others write about beauties for prostitution and to add flavor to their dominance, but you write about handsome guys who are equal competitors to the heroine. I:?

Quite an outrageous setting. I won't say much about personality. Everyone's personality is different. If the contract does not have a favorability bonus, it is normal to feel a distance from the unfamiliar pet beast that you have just contracted with. 16 years old, after graduating from junior high school, I went to test my talent, contracted a pet, went to high school, and in the middle two months, I entered the pet school. When the school started, I had to have an entrance ceremony in the secret realm and stay there for three days. One moment he left a message saying that he was wary of strange beasts, and the next moment he asked them to share life and death in a secret realm full of dangers. Isn't he looking down on them too much? I spent 3 days in the wilderness. I didn't bring anything with me, and I didn't learn how to survive in the wild. There were all kinds of pet beasts that lurked around the clock and came out at night. If you wanted to kill them, just tell them. The classes are not divided, and none of the classmates know each other. I don't know whether the pet is an auxiliary treatment or an auxiliary combat or a simulated environment. There is no team formation. Does it mean that there is no team for a one-on-one challenge? Is there such a thing? Before entering the school, I didn't mention that there was a mortality rate on the admission notice, nor did I mention that I needed to prepare supplies. This is not a military school. The army is also divided into logistics, cooking, weapons research and development, reconnaissance, etc. Do you think everyone has to charge forward? Pay attention to the beginning and not the end. The author also takes the single-digit age martyrs during the Anti-Japanese War as an example. Those were also very rare. After only a few years, there was at least a height or age limit. Since the heroine's world is so difficult, the heroine can't contract at level 10 after graduating from elementary school. After three years, she rushes to fight directly. She also waits until she is 16 to awaken her talent before contracting. I was really stunned.

Hello author, I didn't feel you were misogynistic at first, and I don't care until now, but I feel that the recent chapters have deviated from the original character image. The original cold heroine has become a heroine who likes young ladies? ? ? ? I'm full of questions. Even if you want to appeal to misogynistic stereotypes (which I don't care about!) Don't do it! It's uncomfortable, and it even portrays female cps. . . . Don't go astray anymore. In the end, I was a little unable to buy chapters. This is a female channel. I like male-female CP. It is a normal thing. But I am not opposed to female-female CP. It's just very abrupt. . . I hope to return to the image of the heroine from the beginning

I'd like to give you a suggestion: write more stories about female characters with strong female characters, and have good female supporting roles. It's always a male, a male, a male, a male protagonist, a male, a male, a male, a male, and a male. It's not interesting.

Really, I almost missed an appetizing beast-control novel. It is not a beast-control novel in the traditional sense that focuses on partners and bonds. The heroine will treat the pet beast more realistically and regard it more as part of her own strength rather than companionship and warmth. As long as you ignore the obvious descriptions in the first few chapters, there will be no description of the daily life of the beast-controller in the later chapters. The heroine upgrades and strengthens herself, and the emotions between her and her classmates are well described. It is really beautiful. Actually, I think the author should really consider deleting the previous description of the heroine wanting to make specimens of Teng without making good use of resources, and also feeling that she spent so much money on Teng and didn't make it back. Maybe the original intention of the plot was to make a joke, but part of the original intention of most reading the beast-controlling novels is to interact with the beast-controlling, or Pokémon-like elves. It's too normal to be unable to accept this kind of description, but this article deserves to be read by more people. We shouldn't lose users of beast-controlling articles because of the overly realistic descriptions in the previous chapters. I really hope that female beast-controlling articles can become popular and more and more people write about female beast-controlling I would like to express my gratitude again for writing such a good article. I really like this article.

Run quickly, even pets are engaging in female competition! ! Don't look for articles in the trash can! ! If the writing is good, you can barely forgive it if you do something sexy, but if the writing is rubbish, don't be too outrageous.

The writing about beast control is quite good. So I don't know where these posts went. The point is to control the beast. What kind of discrimination between men and women? I'm speechless about these posts, and why don't you talk about the obvious discrimination against women in many male pornographic novels. Talking about this in beast-controlling novels, when I look at it now, all I see is that the heroine is constantly working hard to get resources for her pet beast. There is no such thing at all. Don't show off your sensitivity😁

The beginning was okay but it got uglier towards the end, especially the mute man. How many chapters were wasted and he kept raising the brother and sister and the virgin 🙂

To be honest, before I saw the mermaid party, I always thought this article was okay. After that, I thought it was really speechless. I think the heroine's character in the early stage is quite cold. She is even so cold that she may not even like her pet beast. But I think it may be because the author wants to create a contrast in the later part, so the previous behavior is understandable. But inexplicably, the character of the heroine later became the kind of sunny girl who grew up under a red flag. The heroine didn't even have parents. It was very difficult for her in the early days of her life, but inexplicably she changed to a situation where she had to pay all kinds of things for her country, even pet animals had to be given priority, and only those who could make the country develop would be contracted. (PS, one more thing to say here is that the heroine is only 16 years old. A 16-year-old girl, both parents are dead. If a country relies on a girl like him to make contributions, then this country does not need to exist. I think) But the problem is clear. Ming already had two directions for the development of Muto. He announced these two directions without any money. As a result, ordinary people couldn't afford the contract, and the rich looked down on it. As a result, for the fifth pet, he still wanted to contract something as ordinary as this. How else did he want to do it? Come out to develop for the country, but the problem is that the lower limit of this kind of ordinary pet is too low. If you want to train him to be very powerful, he will have to spend a lot of resources on him, and these resources are beyond the reach of ordinary people, and if you have these resources , even if it is used on better pets, its upper limit must be higher. This is the natural elimination of the fittest. I feel that the author wants to express himself through the talent of the heroine, and then bring good development to the country. But the problem is that as it is written now, it is a bit different. Then I went on to say, what I mentioned before in the comment section, the female competition, I think it was actually described well before, until the point about the mermaid, the heroine is obviously already so powerful, and she defeated Jiang Yun (can't remember the name). What's the result? The mermaid doesn't even look at the heroine. She just falls in love with this disgusting man. He treats the heroine with all kinds of contempt and malice. To be honest, I don't understand these two characters at all. Why were they written? It seems that they are purely for the purpose of disgusting the heroine. Other than that, they have no effect. After getting here, I feel like I really can't understand this article. It's obviously a strong female character with no CP, so what's the use of describing this male character? If she is a male partner, in order to describe that the female protagonist is excellent and there is a person who likes her, so she will describe how well-off the man is, how handsome he is, and how talented he is, but he likes the female protagonist, to set off the heroine's character. But the problem is that the current man is relying on the female protagonist to show how handsome he is (even his own pets have to look like him). But if it is not to set off the female protagonist's male counterpart, and if he does not like the female protagonist, then it is to be a stepping stone for the female protagonist to defeat. Since it is a stepping stone, and the female protagonist has defeated him, we still need to write about the mermaid. Even if the female protagonist defeats the man, she still has to make a contract with him. What is the purpose? There is a feeling that there are two protagonists, but in order to emphasize that it is a strong female novel, it makes up for the man in various aspects, the most important thing is to make up for the man, but the man is not the male protagonist, just a supporting role, which is really nonsensical. And then there is the article about pet beasts, but I feel that the heroine has very little emotional description of the pet beasts, that is, I can't feel that he has any deep bond with the pet beasts. Of course, Mu Chu and Lei Lei in the front are still well written, but the last three are not impressive. I can't feel the charm of these three pets? There are too few descriptions and stories between these three animals and the heroine. Finally, I still want to emphasize that point. The heroine is only 16 years old. She is not yet a minor. She is still a child. Even though she has shown great and powerful talents now, she is still very young and has great potential, which shows that she has more room for growth. But he is really still young now. Going to the front line and other dangerous things are really She shouldn't do it, and I think it's necessary to send someone to protect her. Didn't you, the author, describe it before, (a powerful person, he can change the situation of a battle), the heroine's potential, I can feel that it is unprecedented, and I am not sure whether there will be anyone in the future. She is so powerful, why don't you send someone to protect her? ? ? ? As long as she grows up, the heroine will definitely be a killer, provided she grows up. It's not that she needs personal protection or anything like that, but someone always needs to protect her. In critical moments, there is always someone who can save her life. Even the author, if you describe it like this, you can enrich the heroine's character and write out why she loves her country so much? There is always a basis for him to love his country, right? (Because his country values him very much, maybe because when he grows up he can help the people of their country kill more ferocious beasts, but even so, his country also values him, so she likes her country. For this reason, he can contract with these level-caps. A low-level ferocious beast, just to help the country. Doesn't this have some basis? ) And the heroine is the only one left in the family, and she is still so talented. If the country can't protect her, wouldn't this chill the soldiers fighting on the front line? (Don't talk about soldiers, there are more important things, going to the battlefield, and so on. You can ask those who are retired, old, or disabled to go to the battlefield to protect the heroine. But there are still people who are strong. This is also a chance for those people to rest and get paid. Moreover, it is not the kind of choice that makes the heroine and the people in the city die. I just want to protect him alone.) And I I feel that no one should face the battlefield before college. If humans and ferocious beasts have really reached an irreconcilable point, then ordinary adults, as long as they have pet beasts, must play, instead of letting underage children face it. What's more, the heroine's school is only the fifth-ranked ordinary beast control school, and it is not a military school. Let these children who are not yet 20 years old on average face these things. But if the relationship between humans and ferocious beasts does not reach this point, then this group of children who have not yet graduated should not be allowed to face these ferocious beasts. At least they must be allowed to grow up, instead of an ordinary university that can kill so many children. Is this going to school or risking one's life? I think the author can really revise this article.

Why?

I really don't like to change maps suddenly in the middle. As expected, I can't book all the books at once. The description of the beasts was pretty good at the beginning, but not so much in the later ones. They only described how many levels they had upgraded to, so I had no real sense of the beasts. Only the first two had a strong sense of existence, and the rest only described the levels they had upgraded. The last three were written not like beasts, but like equipment. So I quit, what a pity. I like Mu Chu so much.

If you don't look down on your own beast-controlling articles, then why do you still write about beast-controlling?

I would like to make a suggestion, the author can write more plots with distinctive women, who are high-ranking, have many appearances, and have many plots and positive characters. You can evenly divide the male and female characters. For example, now I only remember Jiang, A Lang, and A Zi, and then A Zi is female and similar to a vase. I think that A Lang and A Zi are turned into siblings. The one with A Lang's talent is the sister, and the one with the vase like A Zi is the younger brother. It will not affect the writing, and it will be more interesting to watch, not popular.

I came in when I saw a strong female beast master.

In fact, I don't think you, the author, need to elaborate on those misogynistic things. You may think that the other party mentioned this problem, but in fact, most of us readers do not feel this way. I feel like this is a bit nit-picky. People don't have to apologize for, how should I put it, some universal concepts.

The previous one was too poisonous. When there is no intimacy with the pet beast, the protagonist feeds the pet beast to determine the direction of its strengthening. However, the direction of strengthening is probabilistic and requires massive resources. In the fourth chapter, the protagonist said to the pet beast, if you don't work hard, I will make you into a specimen. Please, who are you? You just met the pet beast. You blindly feed resources like this, which is a kind of extortion, and you also threaten others. Too poisonous! ! !

The purpose of watching female beast control videos is to like girls and pet beasts accompanying each other, being warm and fighting together. There is relatively little interaction between the heroine and the pet beasts, and the setting of the pet beasts basically not requiring the heroine to direct them to fight or anything like that. I don't like it very much, but I can accept it, but seeing that the heroine is so immature in the early stage, the war is so cruel, which is still a bit incompetent. Aaaaa The novel is not linked to reality, and reality is already very painful. I came to novels to find warmth, and it was very uncomfortable to be stabbed in the end 🤓😭

In Chapter 22 of the University Chapter, the heroine is only over level 30. After being threatened by the 8th level Qimu Fairy, she saved her growth and planted something in her heart. She will die within 10 years if she doesn't come back. Beyond level 1 and 2 is experience, and she has already exceeded level 5! What kind of outrageous plot is this?

Can Thunder change its face? It's disgusting to have this man's face. I originally had a crush on him, but in the end, he actually defended the uneducated young lady who inexplicably provoked the heroine. She turned into an indiscriminate man. Why did Lei Lei have the face of that man? Why wasn't it the heroine's face? Didn't the heroine and Lei Lei have a deeper relationship? , Do you want to say that Lei Lei wanted to seduce the heroine and then he had sex with the man because he had a good relationship with the heroine? Isn't it better to have a better relationship with Senior Mu? Or is Thunder simply controlling their appearance? Could it be that his feelings for the heroine are not as good as his appearance control attributes?

To be honest, I don't deny the heroine's patriotic heart. After all, after her parents died, part of her life depended on state subsidies. In addition, after seeing many people die in the beast wave before, I understand that she wants to open up the Mudeng route. But I really feel that even if the heroine doesn't want it, the country should give some symbolic subsidies, but there's nothing. Moreover, the heroine is quite poor, so she can give it to the country at a low price. . Why does it have to be free? . If you are very wealthy, then don't do it. But seeing as the heroine is still tight, it's not too much to ask for more resources 😥😥

It feels like someone has changed behind the author. The front was fine, but after the heroine selflessly released the Mudeng evolution route for free, something was wrong, especially the mermaid princess. Don't you feel embarrassed and weird that a beast master is called "Brother Jiang"? The descriptions of the two of them are the same as those of male protagonists. There is also this mermaid princess who is inexplicably targeting the female protagonist, and it feels like Jiang Shi has changed her character in the later stage, which is weird, and the female protagonist's character is not the same as before. She starts to feel patriotic for no reason, and then The selfless dedication began, and the fifth one was even more outrageous. She signed a contract for the country. It felt like the heroine in the back seemed to have no resources. Her golden finger felt like it was for her to serve the country. And she evolved for the country. Did the country give her anything? Then she was only 16 years old, and the state did not send anyone to protect her. When I saw the mermaid article, I felt that the heroine's two favorites were of no use and were not mentioned much. Shouldn't the beast-controlling article focus on the situation between the heroine and her beast-controllers? And there are too many descriptions of Jiang, so he feels like a male protagonist. The mermaid part feels like the heroine specially sent him resources. Seeing this, I completely gave up on the story.

As a reminder to future readers, if you see a mermaid appear, run away quickly.

The article so far is generally good (I saw the mute brother and sister contracting a tiger cub), but! I feel that it is inexplicably frustrating to look at the heroine's pet beasts and then look at the pet beasts that the heroine has just found for the siblings. Although the heroine's pet beasts are powerful, it is good, but most of them are evolved from popular and ordinary pet beasts, and the heroine also wants to use her talents to take this route to benefit mankind and the country. How to put it, the starting point is good, but it is frustrating and uncomfortable. The heroine has evolved from an ordinary pet beast, and the heroine is ready to reveal it to the country. It is not possible that the pet beast that the country will evolve according to this route in the later period is stronger than the heroine's. I don't know if it is more likely, but it is definitely not impossible (the heroine's experience is very magical and will have an impact on her pet beast, but the evolutionary resources are fixed. If other people, especially soldiers, are active on the battlefield, they may not be unable to have other opportunities). Okay, I'm going a step further. I just think that I have seen five of the heroine's pet beasts so far. Two of them have mediocre backgrounds and are not very good-looking. The Moonlight Dog is awesome, but the main reason is that it has a special talent. It doesn't have much aggression at the moment. It's just some auxiliary skills. It feels... Nothing special (just My feeling haha), it can only be said that it is as cute as a pet dog. Shadow Demon doesn't even have the appearance, nor does it mention whether it is rare or not. The elemental elf is the only one with a relatively good appearance😭. It can be said to be handsome, but the gray-black skin and three-color sky-high hair are really difficult to judge. Jumping a bit further, I think that if the tiger cub makes a contract with the heroine, he must be very powerful, handsome, good-looking, and looks powerful, unlike the pet beasts that the heroine has now... Hmm 😥. I'm not saying that the heroine is required to be beautiful or anything like that, just beautiful girls. Now I have a feeling that neither the heroine nor the heroine's pet beast are very good-looking. People always like beautiful things (although I can't see it, but I can imagine 🐷). As far as I'm concerned, I still hope that the pet beasts after the heroine will be good-looking. It doesn't matter if they are good-looking when they first contract or become more beautiful as they evolve in the later stages. They can also be rare or special (I can't describe how I feel about it. I just feel that if the heroine contracts ordinary pet beasts from the public, I will be a little bit broken 😂). Finally, ahem, I admit that I saw the heroine give a tiger cub to each of the brothers and sister as their first ferocious beast. They couldn't hold back and broke their defenses 🔨. The brother and sister in front of them were talented and practiced faster than the heroine. I couldn't bear to ignore it. I still like the plot where the heroine has the strongest talent and strength 🔨.

Go through the timeline. The first book is "I Rely on Cultivation to Save Blue Star". This is the first book I entered into the writing circle. It is a very ancient leather-covered novel based on love and sweet pets. Leather-covering is one of the most disgusting behaviors for readers today, but I must be honest about this, because when I first started writing, I was thinking about what I would do if I were XXX. I do not recommend that you read it. One million words and 68 collections have already shown the level of this novel. The second book is "Offline Marriage and Online Marriage". This is also a typical love story based on sweet pets. The beloved wife is also one of the most disliked characters among readers. But I was still young at that time and had not yet fallen in love. It was when I was longing for love. The words I wrote were about domineering men falling in love with me. However, this book is not a cover story. At this time, I have consciously distinguished myself from the characters in my novel. I do not recommend reading this book. The third book is "I Got Rich by Relying on Red Envelopes". This book is also a sweet favorite, but it is not a spoiled wife. I have realized that women should not rely on men for everything. Women can also get what they want on their own. The evaluation is that I can read it. The fourth book is "Beast Control Begins with Evolution". This is the first novel I have tried with a non-CP heroine. It is also the most popular and the most scolded one for me. A large number of readers accused me of misogyny, misogyny, and disrespect for women. I responded many times, but the effect was not very good. But I still need to express my thoughts. I am not a person who hates my own gender. I am not ashamed of being a woman. I am not misogynistic, but I have stereotypes and subjective androgynous behaviors. Trying to conquer the female protagonist, but the reason why the female protagonist does not like the female protagonist is that the boy she likes admires the female protagonist, so I must admit that this is considered a content about female rivalry). Of course, the biggest problem with this book may not be this. The content, writing, plot development, and thought transmission are all very immature for me now. I can barely read it without thinking, and I can completely skip it. After that, there is a premature palace fighting essay. A reader was very angry and said, "You are the author of the previous book "The Heroine" and the next "Gong Du". You are really interesting. I can only smile bitterly. The previous book received a lot of criticism, especially the criticism about misogyny. I am a stubborn person. I wanted to write a story about women growing up and gaining power under extreme oppression, but my editor killed it. Let's not mention it for now. Then there was a male-only novel "Becoming an NPC, I had no choice but to do my best". Readers who read this may be confused. Are you saying that after you were scolded for writing a non-CP female protagonist, you went to write a non-CP male protagonist to prove that you are not misogynistic? No, this was originally a female channel, and the protagonist Wu Jiuchu was a woman, but I asked all the editors I knew if I knew them, and they were all rejected. In anger, I changed Wu Jiuchu to a man and put it in the male channel. I signed the contract on the first day it was released... I continued writing. This book was very awkward, but it seemed to be readable. After that, there is the heroine of the female channel but with CP "The Evil Master Looks Like All the Members Changed Long Aotian". This is the first novel that I wrote the outline first and then the text. It is the most satisfying one I have introduced so far. You can read it. Next, there is a coming-of-age story for a female protagonist called "When a Coward Enters Modern Supernatural Literature". This is my most fluent and mature work in terms of style, thoughts, writing style, and plot. You can read it. Finally, a summary. You can also see that after writing 4 million words, I am still an unknown author. I am not an excellent, talented, or mature author. However, if someone really stays with me for two or more books, you will find that I am really making progress in all aspects. I do not deny that I have had wrong guidance, naive words, prejudiced thoughts, etc., But I am really a female novelist who is making progress and awakening. I like writing, even if I don't make much money, even if I don't have many readers, I am still willing to write, thank you all for your company. Of course, the most important thing is that the purpose of writing this book review is that everyone can choose to eat it. It is normal not to read it. It is normal if you don't like the subject matter, writing style, and thoughts. Don't force yourself. Well, please don't use vicious language to scold me. Bow. Jpg

Last reply. First, once again, the author is a woman and is neither misogynistic nor disrespectful to women. However, the author perceives from readers' feedback that he has a stereotype of women and is changing this stereotype in all aspects. Secondly, the reason why I say that it is impossible to portray a female character without an emotional line is because when I originally started this article, I wanted to write a pseudo-harem story that would compete with male videos, or a stock-buying story, and write a heartthrob without changing the tone of the heroine, so I focused on portraying the character Jiang. Later, I found that I couldn't write a harem story, and the writing was a bit disgusting, so I removed this setting. The characters I mentioned at the time were those that revolved around the emotional line of the heroine (later I thought about it, in addition to love, there are also many warm feelings that do not need to be divided into genders) Third, let me respond to the female competition. The character of the Little Mermaid comes from a very domineering little cat. Her hostility towards the heroine is not because the heroine is a woman, but because the heroine is strong and beautiful and she senses Jiang's appreciation for the heroine. Furthermore, I actually really hate the term androgyny. I don't know why anyone who writes about women being hostile to the heroine will be labeled as androgynous or misogynist. I have obviously written about many bad men, but the comment circle is very confusing. I wish I could pour some of the beautiful things in the world into my heroine. Why do so many people still think that I hate girls? Or is it that the heroine in my novel has too few female characteristics? I will improve slowly, thank you all.

Not Lily! It's no CP! No female competition! It's a normal slap-in-the-face scene. Not only is the female jealous of the heroine, but also the male is jealous. It's just a small episode. The heroine slowly develops a friendship for the beast. I think the author writes it very well. I don't think like Sister Li's current readers. Although the author's writing is not perfect at the beginning, it becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. I hope you don't listen to Heizi's nonsense and read this book yourself. Come on, it's very interesting! Come on come on! Do what you think is right and don't listen to what others say!

The plot is very interesting, but the battle part is easy to omit. Can the strong opponent win so easily? That's not to say that you can't challenge beyond the previous level, but it still feels weird.

I think the flaws outweigh the flaws. When I first read this book, I didn't think the author was misogynistic, but there was still some controversy in the comment section. For this part, I don't quite understand why the mermaid princess is so hostile to the heroine, and writing him as being so hostile doesn't have much effect. Or it may be that they are not perfect as mentioned above, but they also play some roles later when human beings are faced with the end of life. A few brief introductions may be able to show the shining points of human nature~ In addition, there are several more attractive supporting characters who are indeed men. If you don't pay attention to this gender issue in this part, it is actually okay. After all, this is a non-CP book, and the difference between men and women is not that big in my eyes. But the plot of this book is structurally complete from beginning to end and is logically self-consistent. Overall, I like it very much! It would be better if there were more extras.