People Are Devouring the Stars, Just Joined the Chat Group

Sure enough, after reading the comments, I felt relieved. Just as I thought, this person's brain is too obscene and I don't know what to write.

It's too toxic and the protagonist is too useless!

The more I watch, the more disturbing I become. Isn't it that the clone behind me is doing something? What's the difference between it and the main body? It's better to say that the clone is the main body. How can the clone directly give the mastery of the skills to the two women? It's so easy to fool, so what did you tell Shen Gongbao about your mother before? Just licking the dog? Moreover, these two skills can be said to be the life-saving foundation of the protagonist. They are given away so easily, without even informing the main body, and the exchange points are broken points, which are not many. They are given as promised without even any insurance. What can they say when they hand it over to others? A message of great mercy is sent out. Use your things to give gifts. You are not good at all. Isn't this a pure clown 🙂.

This novel is so poisonous that the author almost wrote it as if he had never read the original work.

I was a little disappointed after reading the latest chapter. To be honest, people born in the high-level world should have their own pride. They will naturally look at things in the low-level world with contempt, not to mention that the universe or Babata's eyes can see the nonsense of these things at a glance. Swallowing follows the path of the law of the divine body, talking about the qualitative change of energy, your inner strength, etc. In the eyes of others, it is just a waste of time and useless martial arts, which is meaningless. Before immortality, it all relied on energy accumulation. This is the official and fair answer of Devouring the World. The geniuses selected by Virtual Universe Company for the genius battle all use this method. It clearly shows that this is something that has been tested by the strongest people in the universe and even more advanced civilizations. Why do you practice it yourself? As for different abilities, this one is even more meaningless. Who wants you to be an all-rounder in mainstream battles that devour the world? Specialize in one thing and break through the limits. Who created a fifth-level secret method and still uses other fourth-level secret methods? The meaning is this. If you don't understand it, there's nothing you can do about it. To sum up, there is no need to change your early training system. These are not as good as Devouring the World, and the God of War Catalog can compare with the planet level 🤓🤓 This is funny. The essential gap, can you still compete? The cultivation system of the low-level world in Devouring is simply crooked and out of line. In the later stage, it is better to go for large-scale integration, but doing so in the early stage will only lower the strength. Also, the martial arts techniques in the world of martial arts cannot really be put on the stage in the extraordinary world. It can be said that they are practiced entirely based on imagination.

There are so many plug-ins that it's like feeding the protagonist. It's okay to travel to the early stage of Nirvana and have the opportunity to develop ahead of schedule. Another chat group is not enough to add a proficiency panel. Okay, author, can you control such a complicated and complicated thing? There are too many points, can you balance them? With so many important points to look at, which one do you want readers to look at? Advanced development in the early stages of the Great Nirvana? Or the interaction in the chat group? Or become the Shilipo Sword God to maximize your proficiency? I was tired when the proficiency level appeared. There were too many points at once and I couldn't understand them. Go ahead yourself.

1. There is something wrong with the protagonist's mentality. This is definitely not the mentality that a normal person should have 2. The group leader is too redundant and I don't see her use. Is it used to argue with the protagonist? 3. On the surface, it talks about Gou, but in fact it is hidden stupidity, pure stupidity. I will not give specific examples. There are too many places that reveal the difference of the protagonist. I think everyone here can see it. 4. The plot is nonsense. Flying cards kill monsters. Junior monsters are just that. Is it superfluous to do this in the face of a beast general? If it were replaced by a flying knife, I wouldn't say anything. The flying knife is fragile and cannot be recycled, so I wouldn't know how to use it, right? If you are a normal person 5. Some parts of the plot are indeed good, such as the broom star's kung fu, but there are more places that catch people off guard, large and small, and perfectly cover up this slightly brighter part 6. The last point is what I think the most unclear thing about this article is There are so many places that I can describe. What the author wrote is different from the original work I read. I don't know if it's my problem or his. I seriously suspect that he hasn't read the original work. It's all hearsay, or he read it a long time ago. He didn't review it before writing the book. The various settings are ridiculously messy.

I don't understand what the point of talking to a group of people from the low-end world is! The Devouring Star level is at least equivalent to the Nascent Soul or the Transformation God who cultivates immortality! After all, immortality is on the same level as ordinary immortals! If it's still too high, then let's devour the planetary level, the first stage of the universe. As far as the planetary level is concerned, who can beat Gaowu World Storm? What's the use of pulling a bunch of low-strength scum?

It's so confusing. I don't know what you are writing. Since you have written the protagonist and given the protagonist a few golden fingers, why don't you just write about the protagonist well? Why do you have to write about the group members? And if you are great, you can write a group portrait, but I don't think you are worthy yet.

It's quite interesting at first glance, but it becomes a double-edged sword later on. Do you know a book like this? As long as there are ten clones, none of them are good at it. Now you have to create a dozen clones. The main character's presence is not very strong. You are still messing around with it. Goodbye, this is really unbearable.

I have written about this topic myself and made an outline. After thinking about it carefully, I feel that I am good at writing it, but I cannot write it into an article. The setting of Devouring is very good starting from the low level, and then the upgrade has been smooth, without the feeling of skipping a level. Therefore, other low-level worlds are of little help. The high-level world is easy to collapse when written, and is not suitable for the genre of chat groups. Of course, if you write well every day, you may be able to win by surprise.

Killing chickens makes you brave. You can't even think of it without 10 years of blood clots. Most people are at most a bit mysophobic. It's impossible that they don't dare to kill chickens. You can be convincing even if you kill a pig.

It made me laugh so much. The main world of Devouring Starry Sky was the only one in the group with high combat power. It was fun. That group of martial arts warriors are not as good as those in the Marvel world. The comic version would be even more powerful. In the end, they were expelled from the group. Le

Swallowing Starry Sky is probably the worst protagonist in the fic. Flying Poker seems to have a low upper limit. It can only deal with junior warriors at most. It can't even deal with high-level warriors, and it's ineffective against mentalists.

How can I put it this way? This book feels like the protagonist's IQ balance becomes less and less as he practices more. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel.

The author feels that except for the general direction, everything is written randomly and obscenely. Fighting in the Swallowing Starry Sky depends on the understanding of laws. The fist and kick techniques are useless. The later period is all about confrontation. Do your fists and kicks work? Swallowing is always a matter of light-years away. What's the point of fighting a few meters away with your fists and feet?

A bunch of poison points, you are not directly in the world of low martial arts and medium martial arts, but you still have to swallow the fantasy world of Xingkong. In such a world, others who have practiced for two or three years are better than those who have practiced low martial arts for decades, and there are still a lot of shortcomings.

He directly dismissed Swallowing Starry Sky as worthless. A historical figure with a total of three thousand years of civilization, actually said that he was stronger than someone who measured time in hundreds of millions of years. Or was he a great force of origin? Okay, the author is the biggest, but the problem is that if you write like this, why do you write fan fiction about Devouring the Starry Sky? Are you full?

The most leaky of the Devouring fanfics I've ever read 😅

The first few chapters were okay, but then they started to use poison. Even at the star level, there was a king-level inheritance and a chat group. As a result, they didn't understand the rules until they reached the universe level. They just used sword drawing and playing cards. Fuck you.

If you don't want to fight, just write about daily life. Why write about fantasy? How can a protagonist like you, who wants to hide when in crisis, run away when in danger, and has a weak will, compete with those strong men who come out of the mountain of corpses and sea of ​​blood? Strong people are not only strong in strength, but also in their will!

If you don't know how to write, don't be original. If the protagonist's mentality is not good enough, I won't talk about it. The chat group has always been a big problem, but the function needs to be developed. As a result, it was blocked all the time, and then I made the King's Inheritance and missed the earth's plot including the genius battle. I don't even know what you are writing, and you won't write it like this if you write it randomly.

The writing is quite good, and the subject matter is quite novel, so I vote for it first.

The protagonist was written down by the author. Let me tell you, this is not the biggest problem. The biggest problem is the confusion of levels. Where is the protagonist? When it comes to three stars, it can almost kill other three stars instantly, but the problem is that the protagonist is not too strong among three stars. The protagonist of the closed comic, in his own world, at the same level, can only be regarded as a very good illusion. How strong it is, it is definitely not considered. There is also chaos in the currency system. Where is the protagonist? Although a warrior-level corpse is only an apprentice in the protagonist's world, the problem is that in other worlds, it cannot be said to be particularly weak. Although it is not particularly strong, it is not weak either. But those placed in the world that are not advanced can only be sold for ten points. Alas, where is an off-road vehicle? 100 Points, a gun, I don't remember, it doesn't seem to be very expensive, but for me, it seems to be more than 10 points, can you imagine? A gun is worth more. For example, a warrior-level corpse is more expensive. One point can be exchanged for almost 20 bullets. A warrior-level corpse is worth 200 bullets. This is not your currency system. Are you sure you are not confused? Why do you sell technology system stuff so expensively? Lord God, the space is not as dark as you. Good things like that, well, you have suppressed their value as if they were nothing. A warrior-level corpse and a suit of leather armor made of his skin are not as good as a gun. They are made of his teeth or bones. This sword, gun and sword are not as good as an ordinary pistol. A warrior-level corpse, even if there is a hair off the material on his body, it is worth more than an ordinary pistol, okay? As a result, according to the judgment of this chat group, the warrior-level corpse is worth 200 bullets.

The author is a complete idiot, basically made up, and those rubbish skills, just practice whatever rubbish you want, kill two chickens and give you a murderous skill, funny

It's very puzzling to me. His realm is very low, but he doesn't want to improve his realm. He still practices various spells that are completely useless to him, or spells that he doesn't use at all. If you say to repair those things, you don't use them. If you use them, I won't tell you. But the question is, since you don't use them, why don't you improve your realm?

There is no sense of immersion at all. The prices of items are even outrageous. There are a lot of golden fingers. The result is nothing like his mother. And it's boring. He is a normal person. Have these golden fingers. Can't wait to.                        Practicing 24 hours a day. The useless protagonist. And he often talks to himself. All very bland. There is no feeling of pleasure at all. I don't even know how he showed up as a recommendation on my phone.

It feels like there is no outline, just a hammer here and there. I recommend the author's next book. Sort it out. Come on, author!

The more you write, the worse it gets. No one says anything about those foreign races like you. Humans also kill people just to practice martial arts. Everything is done by clones. Why should the main body do it? The clones do some bad things everywhere without the consent of the main body. A chat group that can connect to all realms will be asked by a little monster. The people chosen do not have any protection in their heads, and there are a lot of poisons.

I can only say one word: water, too watery 😰