Zhutian: Start from Xiaoao

Total nonsense. It's written in detail, but doesn't introduce anything. It's all words covered in clouds and fog. The author eats up all the settings without saying anything and lets the readers guess for themselves.

I was confused when I saw the evil energy caused by luck. If you want to say evil energy, I will accept it. It makes sense to kill someone with evil energy.

It's on the shelves on the 1st, The writing is really average, and it's all my own pleasure, so I don't recommend that you spend money to watch it. If you want to watch it, you can use the qq browser, which is free, and you don't need to spend starting coins to use it.

So much nonsense! I thought it was pretty good at first, but the more I watched it, the more annoying it became, and it also made me jump to the point where it kept getting annoying. You are Zhutianliu, brother! At this pace, do you still plan to write five million words for this copy of Xiaoao? It doesn't matter how much information you checked or how carefully you wrote, readers will like it. You always want to popularize science, always give insights, and always give examples. Who would want to read so much nonsense in every chapter? Anyway, I can't calm down and watch it slowly. I really can't stand it any longer. See you again when we are destined!

After three chapters, I don't know where the protagonist came from. He just came from the future. When he opens his eyes, he is a baby! Then he was thrown to Ning Zhongze! The main character doesn't explain clearly what's going on, so it's up to the readers to understand the whole story! It's so noisy and has no sense of immersion!

It's all nonsense. Why write such a novel plot like winning too much and getting stuck in the casino? It's no fun to write it down

It's too dramatic and has no sense of immersion! !

The chivalrous men fighting at Jimingyi, the heroes fighting outside Suzhou City, and the heroes robbing escorts in Chengdu City should all still be there, right? Are the boatmen in Twilight Village still ferrying people? I really want to walk the broken bridge of Peacock Villa, and I really want to taste the wine of Longmen Inn!

It's too watery and I don't want to read it. Two people can write a lot of chapters. The main plot is not good. It's all trivial matters.

Nonsense, nonsense, nonsense, the whole article is nonsense.

The protagonist is not only an ugly b*tch, but also a bitch.

Isn't the martial arts turbulent? How are Jiuyin's friends?

After reading Chapter 30, I didn't enter the main plot. I was playing house with a bunch of unknown people. I was so addicted.

It's too smoky and contains too much water.

Bai Bai added a cruel character to himself, snake essence disease?

I don't understand. If you have money, you don't top it up first. Instead, you act like a hero. It's crazy.

To be honest, I think it is okay to rebel against other dynasties, but it is difficult to rebel against the Ming Dynasty! Unless you can't survive, and write against the Ming Dynasty! Your book is easily boycotted, and you are just like Lu Buwei and Zhao Gao, or even worse! Then it didn't matter to the Song Dynasty, they themselves were not clean! ! ! The emperor of the Ming Dynasty can only say some! ! !

I would like to make a suggestion, author, since you have written about Zhutian, your writing on Xiaoao is a bit long now, and involves a lot of things, and the content of Xiaoao is not much. I don't know how you made the outline. You are an astronomical writer, not a fantasy writer. If you do not control each world well, it is easy to lose your subscription.

It's been a long time, I've finished more than ten chapters and I haven't entered the main story yet, goodbye!

Violence is the same as skill, just like fighting. The difference between the new army and the old army is the violence or murderous spirit.

Generally speaking, my writing style is very poor. I can't understand what I write over and over again, and sometimes I can't even speak conversationally.

I read more than forty chapters before the chapter "Swordsman of the World" begins! What have you been writing about before? Look, the title of the book says "Heavens"! But the book is finished after more than a hundred chapters. So have you traveled through time to other martial arts? Let me take a look!

I'm just curious, isn't the protagonist very violent? Why is he always killing the men and keeping the women? It's not just out of lust, it's just that you have a thief's heart but not the courage to do so.

I don't know how to complain when I see the part where killing people increases violent energy. My personal opinion: The tone of Jin Yong's martial arts world is that internal strength is king, emphasizing (qi) first. If the martial arts and skills practiced by martial artists do not have the function of warming and nourishing the muscles, flesh and bones, over time, it will easily cause hidden injuries, such as muscle pain, capillary blockage, body shape distortion, etc., Which is the so-called violent energy. Huang Yi's martial arts world is very focused on (god), and most of the masters are famous for their high level of martial arts and weird kung fu. If we talk about violence here, it may be due to the practice of martial arts that goes too far or the invasion of external demons, which leads to mental cognitive deviation and split personality, which is the so-called mental illness, but this has nothing to do with whether to kill people or not. The Gu Long martial arts world is a world of (jing), focusing on inner performance, and the personal style and character of the masters are particularly prominent. The Gu Long world does not talk about violence, and there is no obvious division between right and wrong. After all, everyone kills people and does what they think they should do and what is right. It is their own inner choice. Divided according to survival difficulty: The most dangerous world is the ancient dragon world. Killing does not depend on cause and effect, it all depends on personal preference and mood. You can do whatever you want. It is the purest martial arts world. Gu Long＞Huang Yi＞Jin Yong Difficulty classification of martial arts: Huang Yi is the most difficult in the world. It seems that there are many masters, but in the eyes of the real bosses, they are not qualified. The legendary figures represent Chuanying, Pang Ban, Lang Fanyun and so on. Huang Yi＞Jin Yong＞Gu Long

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Only Chapter 6 can be seen. If your skills are not good enough, don't write about the protagonist opening a hospital.

Water,,, by the way, author, if you remove the background of Xiaoao Jianghu and set up a brand new one, you are original.

The writing is average and not very attractive. After reading a few chapters, I felt it was boring and stopped reading!