The Movie Variety Show Started by Deceiving Wang Duoyu to Change His Career

The theme is unclear. You become stronger by changing the fate of others, not by becoming a businessman, director or boss. In a word, the quality is too low. The manipulator of fate, you can say the same thing about the mastermind behind the scenes. With the character you wrote about Charlotte, if you hold him up and beat him to death, it will have no effect on you. He won't listen to your arrangements. If you don't, just give him dignity. Charlotte is so shameless. Your golden finger is your destiny. I'm not asking you to be a dog licker, just like an old lady, and find a few regular lovers. I almost lost interest in watching it. If this is still the mode of entertainment writing, this book won't go far.

The two protagonists of "Golden Years" asked you to paint them as white lotus flowers. Wang Yongzheng asked you to be a humble gentleman, and Zhang Anren asked you to be a hypocrite.

Brother, the more I think about it, the more I don't understand it. The editor gave you a daily recommendation, so you immediately lowered the reading limit for the latest chapters, and started writing single chapters consecutively to write supporting characters. This rhythm of yours, hahahaha, what do you think?

The idea is good, but the plot arrangement is really bad. You have to understand that the point of this book is to use characters from movies and TV shows to act in movies and TV shows, or to use them to achieve certain goals and bring a sense of satisfaction. Instead of endlessly talking about some childish and outrageous business practices. Ma Dongmei plays Ma Li and Xia Luo plays Hao Jian in the Spring Festival Gala together. Isn't it more interesting than talking about business? The Jiang family is bankrupt. Isn't it too much to arrange for Jiang Nansun to act as a palace with an IOU? Let's sing about love's lack of oxygen. Wang Duoyu and Xia Luo are so similar, so there's nothing wrong with one playing the fourth child and the other playing the fourteenth child, right? There's nothing wrong with Dachun appearing to be a fool, but actually being a killer named Karl, right?

When writing about Charlotte, at least watch the movie carefully. "Just Once" was written by Charlotte himself, and he can play the guitar. He may not be able to play other instruments, but being able to play the guitar has proven that he can read music. You have to be able to get by with the basic character settings.

Pretend to be cool and get into trouble all because of Charlotte, then give up and do it yourself, otherwise, why don't you watch the supporting actors acting in live-action movies for you? What's the point of this?

It's okay. I've finally deleted the worst chapters, which is acceptable. You have to know that you started off as a comedy movie, with urban scenes mixed in. Even if you transition, you can't directly transition to a bloody drama. Even if you combine the world of movies and TV series, just describe it a little. Don't be afraid of describing too much, because you have more than 80 chapters, and readers who want to read it won't be able to follow that long.

Change Charlotte to the protagonist. Charlotte is more like the protagonist.

I was attracted by the introduction, and I wanted to see the characters in the movie filmed by the actors who played them. Or movies they haven't acted in. After all, there are many movies with terrible casting that netizens have recommended. Instead of looking at the bloody business war emotions. How to sleep with a woman with the protagonist

The writing is illogical and means nothing.

I'm giving up, the protagonist's sense of presence is too low

Is the protagonist's presence too weak? It doesn't appear in so many chapters. Are you really treating him as a tool? If only the original characters interact and the protagonist plays a minor role, what else is there to see in this book? Not interesting.

I can't stand it anymore. It's really not like you're behind the scenes. You keep writing about Charlotte.

Give the author some opinions and suggestions: I hope the author will grasp the theme well and write less about business wars for now. The protagonist currently has so little wealth, what can he write about business wars? It's not the theme when it's written, and readers just feel like they're pecking at each other with novices. It took so many chapters. Only you have written more chapters about business wars. Then the protagonist's status has improved, and it can be interesting to interact with businessmen who are at the top. Otherwise, it's meaningless. Your protagonist didn't start out as a businessman.

It's hard to describe the recent chapters, especially Niu Aihua, how does Charlotte do things with her hair in her mouth, the protagonist is also stupid, and she still wonders if there is really a time-travel administration. If you don't know something, can't you ask me about the situation?

I never expected, which chapter will be broadcast? What the hell are you writing? It's a mess.

I was deceived by the title. It's not that there is no heroine at all. She is clearly a big stud in the harem.

It's really disgusting and arrogant to have so many supporting roles. Are you just trying to copy the plot of a TV series? Gone? The eunuch is not far away

The last few chapters... I'm too lazy to talk about them.

Why is it always Charlotte? It makes me sick just looking at it

In fact, if there is a novel that time travels to a movie variety show, but the protagonist does not know it, and has filmed many TV series, it will be broadcast and the original owner will see it. How interesting would it be?

I've seen Chapter 291, Goodbye. I can't stand Charlotte. I thought it was pretty good when the protagonist didn't appear in the love apartment. But as soon as I returned to Charlotte, I felt very bad. I hope you write better and better.

That dog used the name of the Travelers Association made up by the protagonist to lie around and deceived it for so long and it still hasn't been dealt with? I don't understand why the author likes this kind of plot arrangement. Anyway, it's very unpleasant to read.

Isn't it an entertainment novel? Why are you always fighting with the district chief? Is it an entertainment novel or an official novel? You you

I have accumulated 5 chapters, but your rhythm is not good. It mainly depends on your fate and the name change points. If you want to say that you, the protagonist, write well in daily life, it is more boring. 5 Chapters and 6 daily chapters are enough. It is okay for the protagonist to meet with film and television bosses to plan the future, but you are not a boss, and you are so awesome without seeing any benefits. Is it too much to pay back the favor?

It's really impossible to ask Charlotte to be your father!

Why do you keep writing about getting to know this person and sleeping with that person? There aren't many TV dramas to be filmed and they don't just do anything serious.

Isn't it too disgusting for you to lick men? Why don't you just drive her away because Charlotte is so weird? The author likes little boys in the choir.

This is okay. Why do I feel like no one is watching it?

The protagonist is currently in a movie and TV show, so it's best to return to the theme as soon as possible. Also, the six major villains are now simply set as minor villains. Don't be too tough on this. If you write about Love Apartment next, which time period do you plan to write about? I think if you have children, you can make arrangements. Xia Donghai is the editor who makes arrangements. My impression is that Xia Donghai couldn't get any work for a while, and then Liu Xing's own father made it easier.