Zhutian: Start by Getting Little Dora

Let's complain, the writing is okay and you can read it, but the strength index of Dragon Ball World is in the millions, how can you compare with the generals of One Piece World? I remember that in Dragon Ball, Mr. Wuten with a few hundred combat power can smash the moon, Vegeta with tens of thousands of combat power can break the core of the earth, hundreds of thousands of normal Frieza can destroy Planet Vegeta. You have a combat power of several million and you are as strong as an admiral. What's the point?

The collapse of combat power is so serious. The combat power of Dragon Ball with a combat value of 200,000 is only comparable to that of the Lieutenant General in One Piece. It's so funny that such a good subject is written like this.

To tell a joke, Dragon Ball has 15,000 combat power to destroy the earth. Only here can we destroy the city. Only 600,000-900,000 can resist the navy admiral.

It's a single female protagonist. Try not to tear down the original CP.

I personally feel that this book has great potential, but for now, there are several problems ①. There is Doraemon in the love apartment. I think it should be controlled. Their reaction when they see the Doraemon props appears. This is the key. ②. Since this book mentions the setting of going to other worlds, my personal suggestion is that the heroine should not be the heroine in the love apartment. , Because except for a few very few, basically all have CPs. If you remove the CPs, it is not impossible, but it will more or less lose some readers ③, I suggest that the official attitude in the novel be handled well, because they are not fools. If they make too much noise, they still have the attitude of not knowing anything, and there will be some actions to some extent. I hope the author can do a good job What I want to say is the above three points. I hope the author can write this book better and better. Come on

With a combat power of one million, I can only beat major generals and lieutenant generals, but I can't beat generals. Awesome combat power system.

You said that the Dead Fire Sea's combat power is almost the same and you can barely stop readers from talking. You drag Dragon Ball to compete with One Piece in combat power. Isn't this ridiculous? Not only Dragon Ball fans, but even Pirates fans don't think that Pirates' combat power can be compared with Dragon Ball 😅

Why do people who go to the pirate world like to save Ace? I don't understand. He is just a pirate who loves to eat King's meals. Has he done any great feats? Or have you saved many people? Another even more outrageous thing is to go to the Naruto world to lick Itachi Uchiha. What else can he do if he even killed his own parents?

This is really an eye-opener. I've seen Super Saiyan Saitama and Superman compete in strength, but I've never seen anyone drag Dragon Ball down to the same level as One Piece.

Xiaoduo La came inexplicably. The protagonist not only has no doubts, but also no surprise at all. He feels like a puppet, like a puppet manipulated by the system. I was really looking forward to it when I saw the title, but now I'm just sorry.

Doraemon is a parenting robot. If you use props to do bad things, Doraemon will not allow it. Zhutenliu, you will definitely kill people in the future. Unless you dismantle Doraemon or forcibly change its essential job as a child-rearing robot, you should be prepared to be wanted in the 22nd century. 😅

Let me complain, the author has no idea about the combat power of Dragon Ball. 1. First create a combat power system. 1 Point of combat power is compared with 220 points of Dragon Ball. As a result, 100 combat power can fight against 100 King of Soldiers. That is, only 20,000 Dragon Balls can fight against a King of Soldiers with complete weapons. You must know that Old Piccolo with 200 combat power can rule the world. 2. Raditz attacks, showing a combat power of 100+, which is obviously only a 10 times difference, but when it comes to the protagonist group, it becomes 220 times. 3. The pig's trotter Dragon Ball has a combat power of several million, but its strength is only at the level of destroying a country. You must know that Vegeta's 18,000 combat power can explode the earth. 4. Sun Wukong Piccolo has millions of fighting power, but in the end he can only defeat the admiral with all his strength? The other pig's foot regiments have a combat power of one million and hundreds of thousands of combat power against the Vice Admiral and Rear Admiral of the Navy. So what are the previous turtles with 100 combat power and Goku Piccolo with 200 combat power against? Pirates?

This is a Zhutian type book, I hope the female protagonist is a multi-female protagonist type. Heroine: Hu Yifei, Qin Yumo...

There's no way you can take someone on a time travel without being thrown into the street.

Nowadays eunuchs are in power, and novels with multiple female protagonists are rare everywhere. Novel with multiple female protagonists is a mad dog, and the well is not a river. Don't clamor for stallions in novels with multiple female protagonists, and others will not clamor for eunuchs in novels without female protagonists.

Are you writing a novel even if you don't understand the author's setting?

The subject matter is okay, but the settings are randomly changed and the logic is inconsistent. The more you go on, the more poisonous things will become.

Please make an initial reservation and then become a eunuch?

Xiaobaibai, you are really disgusting

Even Eunuchs appears in the editor's recommendations. . . . . .

I feel like I'm getting cold. The author can't write anymore.

This kind of story about taking people through time travel is difficult to write. Everyone has to be taken care of. As there are more and more people behind, it becomes more and more difficult to write. At the end of the day, there are not many chapters left at all.

If you have read the book and must read it, you will know that this book will definitely be a eunuch...

Just read the comments for junk books, all I can say is that they are good to death.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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