You Call This the Mastermind?

I stopped watching it after seeing 62. Give the author some advice. The starting point is set, but you failed to write it. Chapter 62, I thought the protagonist was an orphan The book could have been designed to be more exciting, but it was brushed aside Writing a wizard is just a wizard, don't write it as an ethical drama, you have not written about the realm at all The plot is too far-fetched, inexplicably mixed together, supporting roles and protagonists It's all too simple Write about the system, just write about the importance of the system, and change your destiny It's obviously a good subject matter, but the more you write, the more you write, but the outline is obviously not well designed. After finishing it, you haven't read many wizard novels. Wizards pay attention to equal exchange, but if you start as an ordinary person, you are so wasteful, and other novels have already failed. The skill realm is also written inexplicably, the plot is far-fetched, and the humanities are simply not written.

Feeling lost—this was the first feeling I had after reading this book in three days. Obviously, this is caused by the sudden end of the ultimate immersion. This book unexpectedly suited my taste, so much so that I still chose to start this journey even after realizing that the book was not doing well. For me, the most impressive thing is the author's detailed outline of the female character's heart. Giving them fresh vitality with delicate brushstrokes. If a group of flesh-and-blood characters is the source of this immersion, then the continuity of the story in time strengthens it to the extreme. The main storyline of this million-word story spans less than three months. There is no Spring and Autumn style of writing. Looking back now, every step of the protagonist's progress is vividly remembered. After reading this book, one can't help but feel as if a world has passed and a sense of loss. It's like experiencing it yourself. Maybe this is why I like reading novels. It allows you to see the beautiful colors in ordinary life. Experience an extraordinary fantasy adventure as if you were experiencing it yourself, experience the entanglement of love and hate, and explore a fantasy world that does not exist in reality. It's like a dream. When this journey is destined to be a castle in the air, a mirror in the mirror. After reading it, the deeper I immerse myself, the deeper I feel the emptiness. Even this feeling and this memory will disappear with the ruthless erosion of time. So, It is necessary to write something. In this magical, materialistic real world, please keep your childlike imagination. Keep this childlike immersion in the imaginary world. In ordinary life, I still retain this fantasy heart. Please Enjoy The Fantasy World!

After reading Chapter 149, I felt that Alyssa was really pitiful. Mrs. Chelsea only oppressed her blindly, but in the end it accelerated the awakening of Alyssa's bloodline. This book gave me a good feeling in other aspects, but when it came to dealing with Alyssa, I felt that the male protagonist and Mrs. Chelsea were as if they had lost their wits. The male protagonist had obviously possessed the nun's maid, and I heard that doing so would speed up the awakening of the blood. The gauze male protagonist also helped Mrs. Chelsea with suggestions. Alyssa's incident really makes me very depressed. It's like she has been imprisoned by Mrs. Chelsea since she was a child. She just doesn't have a complete childhood experience. She is forced to get married, and she doesn't even have the freedom to pursue love. And this male protagonist, Alyssa even helped him. He also listened to Mrs. Chelsea and pretended to be Alyssa's stepfather, so that she could marry into that family. It's difficult to lead the male protagonist. Do you really want to see Alyssa being suppressed by other men? Although Mrs. Chelsea did this because she was worried about the awakening of her daughter's bloodline, but she told the truth. In the end, not only did it not suppress the awakening of the bloodline, but it also accelerated it. Then Alyssa is just a poor person who lacks childhood, lacks love, and cannot pursue love independently. Another point is that when Alisa and the male protagonist traveled to another world and almost awakened their bloodline, they were saved by the male protagonist in the end. But the male protagonist and Mrs. Chelsea will not learn from wrong experiences? Isn't this caused by your excessive oppression? Are there such gauze? After coming back, the oppression has intensified. It is really the two of you. Where is this, I made the mistake over and over again, but now I am fine, my bloodline has awakened again. If after this awakening crisis has passed, the male protagonist and Mrs. Chelsea have not realized the wrong things they have done, and continue to be so oppressive, then this book will be abandoned, it is so frustrating!🤔🤔🤔

A wife with children is a virgin, and the children are not hers. As a result, there are three such married women? Does this protagonist, the author, like married women, or does he like women whose temperament looks like that of a married woman? What is this?

I'm a little tired of watching young female protagonists. Occasionally, it's good to switch to this kind of young female protagonist. The main reason is that the characters are well portrayed, the emotional description is also very good, with a little color, it will be more interesting.

The writing is too long-winded and cumbersome. Almost the whole article is like nonsense, boring and boring.

A hero can be wronged until you can't step on my Chelsea🤨

The author's way of shaping the characters is really good. I didn't have much interest in Meng Dezhi before. However, in the author's writing, the character of the wife was created very well. It is not the kind of hypocritical perfection that can be broken at once, but it is embellished with some flaws. Specifically, it is a series of small moves made by the protagonist, and only the wife can catch them It is a match made in heaven Especially the misunderstanding that the wife's daughter directly thinks of the protagonist as her stepfather but the wife has no idea about it is even better It can not only adjust the rhythm of the plot, improve the perception of reading, but also make the audience happy to hear it. Otherwise, why would it be completely one-sided to say that there are only ladies in it? So, as for the author, when did you change the female supporting role to the female protagonist?

Actually speaking, I still prefer the Player's Guide to this one, well... I always feel that the Guide is more enjoyable, more serious, more explosive, and full of expectations... Of course, the problems with that book are obvious, right? Of course, this book is also very good. To be honest, I think the quality of the author's works is completely qualified to be on the list. In my opinion, it is one of the few works nowadays that is not exaggerated, or can express very exaggerated things in a very sincere way. I look forward to the day when you can become a god with a book. I believe that day will not be too far away.

The writing style and initial character design were quite good, and the beginning was quite attractive, but after it was released, the whole thing was messed up. One of them was a straight-forward Cao thief story on the surface, but in fact, they were all virgins. It was inexplicable that I was so obsessed with writing about Cao thief. The other one was that the order of priority was messed up. The plot advancement and combat power growth were almost blocked by the emotional line. Moved it aside. The combat power system has collapsed since the "Mysterious Knight". Most of the plot is about how to wander around a few women who must be his, but I dare not write it in depth. The emotional line is also a long and straight road without any fluctuations. Seeing that the protagonist is "forced" to accept his daughter's confession, I abandoned it here.

It would be better to change the title of the book and call it a collection of forbidden loves. Before charging, it is an excellent fantasy novel. After charging, it is a third-rate ambiguous novel.

I thought that magic + industrial revolution, the man behind the title of the book, would have a magnificent story, but what happened? After I started subscribing, I misunderstood one incident after another. The writing was too heavy on ambiguity with women, there was no exploration of the world, and there were no ups and downs of major events. A small matter requires five or six chapters. A little family spirit.

It's too messy, it's too messy, it makes my head hurt, it's so inconsistent to force the female protagonist to be a virgin, just one or two, it's too stupid if they are all married and still virgins. A beefcake and pure love are two completely different things, but the author just made it up into such a nondescript plot. The more I read, the more inconsistent it becomes, and it is completely impossible to substitute.

There are a lot of trainees in the comment area who are complaining, and they don't spend a dime. There are quite a few opinions

This book is already a eunuch, please enter with caution (fuck, my money)

Looking at it now, I feel that this book has not officially entered the main plot, and is full of ambiguities. In comparison, I prefer the author's last book, which is the Player's Guide, especially the plot where the Demon King comes to the world, the sun falls into the clouds, and the spear of destiny is stained with blood, which impressed me even more. Even the fear of being painfully calculated still showed his grace as the Demon King. Originally, I was still looking forward to the big scene of the Kingdom of Heaven falling, but the author's outline was missing, which is really regrettable. But now that the author has written it, I feel that the author relies purely on his own writing. The plot can be said to be better than nothing. I plan to wait for when the first demon wave starts, and then come back when (or when the second sacrifice starts), then kick me (ps: I really like the author's books, but I'm really not interested in the current plot. I'd better read the author's last player's guide to pass the time. In short, I'll put the book on the bookshelf first and come back after a while)

After reading Chapter 138, let's briefly talk about my feelings First of all, let's talk about the advantages: the emotional lines of the characters are delicate, and the relationship between the characters is well handled. If you read it patiently, you can clearly feel the author's handling of the characters' emotions Let's talk about the shortcomings: The introduction and the content are completely inconsistent. It is basically the advancement of the emotional line, and there is basically no main line advancement Mistakes Misunderstandings are all misunderstandings, everyone is just making up their minds. The advancement of the plot is all based on imagination and misunderstandings. There is no communication, and people who watch it have a toothache. It is obviously a very simple thing, but a lot of nonsense is dragged out. The sea, you are all water It feels like there is no main line. I even feel that the author has not written an outline. The protagonist is completely pushed by the plot and has no goals and motivation for what he wants to do br> The positioning of the protagonist is confusing. A novice apprentice has been involved in the battle between the bosses. After looking at the back, it has been more than 300 chapters. The protagonist is still a low-level wizard... I am speechless😑 Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is uncomfortable to watch. It is obviously a top-level result and you can't feel it at all. The plot is confusing as hell, and the level of strength is not explained Event It's too dense, and more than 100 chapters were written in less than 2 months. The protagonist didn't stop for a moment to gather his thoughts, and his level of strength and positioning were not clear... His conversations with his wife were also secretive.

When I read Chapter 190, I felt that the perspective was always changing, like watching a movie, but this is probably not a group novel. The perspective seems to stay on the protagonist very little, and the descriptions of other characters are often trivial. When I finally get into the role of the protagonist, I suddenly switch to the description of other characters. This makes people feel less immersed, as if the exciting scene is gone when watching the movie, and the camera switches to other characters.

I like married women the most, don't like it, it's shameful🙈

Born a mixed-race wizard - Joined the mixed-race association - Obtained appreciation from his wife - Entered the academy to study - Struggle between pure and mixed in the kingdom - Demonic tide entered the empire - Supported Lily's ascension to the throne - Organized the fight against the demonic tide - Awakened the divinity of time and space - Revealed the secret of the golden finger - Completed the pit filling. In the middle, I wrote about the emotional lines of several female characters. It came out in 3-4 million words, but I still feel that there is no outline. The hunter is invincible at the beginning, the wizard level has not been raised, and the writing is still good, but the overall situation is lacking.

If you are really so controlling about your wife, then I suggest you not write about Alyssa. Now it's very annoying. You write so much and you have to say that the male protagonist only likes wives and has no feelings for her at all. Why write it out? Keep it as a gift?

It was pretty good before it was released. After it was released, it started to engage in all kinds of messy ambiguities. I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 144. If anyone has finished it, please let me know if there are many such parts in the following content. If not, I will continue to order.

You are stalling for time, right? The misunderstanding caused by the Riddler and the imagination, I came in because of the inheritance of the Cao thief. Don't drag it and your daughter will like him. It would be meaningless to make a double income and your daughter become the heroine. Or should you say that if you don't drag it, you won't be able to write.,,

Wearing a wizard's skin, it looked okay at first, but it became more and more wrong. First of all, joining the mixed-blood association in the early stage has no effect at all. They all knew that someone was going to assassinate the protagonist, so they kept him in the mixed-blood association, trying to create a conflict between mixed-blood and pure-blood for the protagonist to show off. Secondly, when inheriting memories, in addition to the hunter inheritance, you also need to learn potions, so just force it? Isn't it better to ask for a wizard's inheritance than potions? Maybe you think writing about meat is a selling point? Before it was released, it basically had nothing to do with The Witcher. If you remove all the Witcher plots, you can watch it without affecting the plot at all. The protagonist is just showing off with his golden finger.

All the Riddlers spoke only half of the words. Every time they spoke, they felt like they were constipated, squeezing in little by little, sentence by sentence. It was really uncomfortable to watch, and the pressure lasted too long. And everyone is like a child, only believing in what they think. I didn't see anything from the author in the comment section. Maybe he didn't read the comments. I even suspected that this book might have been written by a robot.

Apart from the intellectually depressing points and the bad ending, this book was written very well by Huang She. As a result, the author stopped reading the book after finishing it in 23 years.

A bunch of misunderstandings, a bunch of Riddlers. Can't you just write a novel normally? It's interesting to specifically disgust readers.

This book is okay, the only flaw is that the protagonist is a liar and lies from beginning to end. You said you lied to enemies and bad guys, but how come you lied to one of your own people, and you seem to be one of the heroines? People like the protagonist so much and yet they deceive them so much? Do you think you are smart if you are a serial liar? Even though he was in so much pain, the protagonist still felt at ease with his deception and didn't even feel guilty. This shows that the author of this book thinks it's okay to be a liar, but he has incorrect views. Unable to bear it, I gave up.

There are a lot of little bits and bobs at the beginning, but judging from the comments, it's so bad at the end. Brother Jiu recommended this book because he was paid, right?

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